Ecoboy1324 Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 The Pro Journal-Summer Duels June 17, 2035 The crisp golden sun was in the air as I strapped on my duel disk. Dueling for the fun of it just like we used to way back when dueling was everything to us and we were without holographic projectors. Back when dueling was not for the sake of money, fame or even for the sake of winning but just to enjoy the game itself. So many plays and weird strategies I came up with during those golden summer days. Though I have gained the status of professional duelist with the fame and the money from the sponsorships, I have never forgotten my roots which is why I am dueling today. The deck that I chose for today's game is Ojama's. Specifically, Its a style known around the pro's as Delecure Ojama's. It is a style for playing Ojama's I invented about 20 years ago and is part of what led to me becoming as popular and successful as I am. I still remember like it was yesterday the first duel I used it. It was against my friend Ryial and it is a crowning moment of my childhood. June 17,2015 “I have two Marauding Captains and Royal Decree on the field, Shang,” Ryial said confidently looking at the playing field. “Granted I have used up every card in my hand, but it still doesn't overcome the fact that you have two thousand life points left without any monsters and two face-downs that can't be activated. How do you expect to win this duel if you can't attack or activate any of your traps?” “I guess all I can do is try my friend. I shall draw to being my turn,” I said somewhat doubtfully, but then I picked up my card and smiled inside as I knew, then and there, that this move was a long shot but that luck would be on my side. “You may have a full eight thousand life points but with this one move I can win if luck is on my side. I'll start off by summoning Snipe Hunter and then tossing Ojamagic for it to activate its effect, but first I'll activate Ojamagic's effect pulling Ojama's Black, Yellow, and Green out of my deck. Now, Ryial, I assume you know what Snipe's effect is?” “Well, yes of course. First you toss a card to the graveyard, then you choose one card on my side of the field and roll a die,” he said with a calmness to his voice reminiscent to his calm demeanor. “If the result is anything but one and six, the card in question is destroyed.” “Yep,” I said with a hint of cockiness. “How lucky are you feeling my friend?” “Very,” he said still with that coolness. “You sure?” I said, sensing some misplaced sarcasm. “Yes, I have two monsters that you must destroy in order for you to attack.” Starting to lose his trademark coolness he exclaimed. “Not to mention a trap that makes your traps null and void. I'd say that I had the upper hand.” “Well lets let fate decide then,” I said boldly as i picked up and began to shuffle a die lying right beside me in my hand releasing it as I say. “For my first target I choose Royal Decree.” The die rolls for about three seconds. Three long and suspenseful moments filled with a hint of bittersweet saccharine but when it landed on the table finally the top showed 4, and I smiled to myself. “Lucky!” He exclaims as he put his trap into his graveyard “What Now?” he said out of polite and yet somewhat strange for him curiousness. To answer his question I pick up the die and replied. “Now I discard Ojama Black to activate Snipe's effect again, This time on your Marauding Captain.” The die rolls for those 3 suspense filled moments again landing on two. “Your really testing my patience here Shang you know that,” he sighed as he places his monster on top of his trap but then starts to get slightly nervous as he says. “Anymore?” “I'm about to push it even further,” I said using all the force I could muster. “I activate Ojama Country” Taking a pause to collect myself I place it on the mat right under my deck. “I am assuming you know what this does?” “Yes, yes, I know," Ryial said now completely nervous for he knew, From our past duels, that I was going to do something either incredibly dramatic or stupid and he wasn't exactly sure which it was yet. “Provided you have a Ojama creature on your side of the field. The attack and defense points of all monsters are switched.” He takes a short break to compose himself. “You can also send one Ojama from your hand to the graveyard and summon a Ojama from the grave once per turn if im not mistaken.” “You are not,” I said still not exactly sure if what I was about to do was going to work. “Now let me proceed with my face down Macro Cosmos.” I flip the card on my left face up. “This removes all cards from the game instead of them going to the graveyard.” “This is a very weird deck your playing,” he said. His voice calming, and took a sip of water out of the water bottle that was right next to him. “Are you sure you know what your doing Shang.” “What would make you say that Ryial?” I said trying to keep him from noticing my nervous expression but failing miserably. “Come on Shang, Macro Cosmos in a Ojama deck.?” He exclaimed. “Even for you that is a very weird choice for a archetype centered on locking down your opponent. Don't you think?” “Just watch and learn,” I said .“I remove Ojama Yellow from the game for Snipe Hunter's effect.” Putting it right besides my deck I continued.”I then select your last Marauding Captain and roll my die.” The die rolls for a third time for those three awkward and suspenseful seconds only this time a certain feeling filled the atmosphere, It was a feeling of extreme tenseness as I realized yet again that I had to prove myself to my friend for even though our friendship is deeper then the deepest well. Even though we would die for each other. We are still fierce rivals in everything we do. I smiled when the die landed on three and proudly and triumphantly said. “You know what that means right?" “Yes Shang I do,” he said meekly as he placed Marauding Captain on top of his graveyard. “Now Ryial,” I said in a stupidly dramatic fashion in hindsight. ”I play from my hand Dark Dimension Reincarnation.” placing it on the field I smiled. “Now I toss Ojama Yellow out of the game to activate its effect to summon and equip it to Yellow by D.D.R's effect.” “What now?” Ryial said curious as to my plans. “Now I activate my face down League of Uniform Nomenclature,” I said triumphantly and then added upon seeing Ryial's puzzled look. ”Yes its new I just got it yesterday from a pack.” “What does it do?” Ryial said still looking puzzled. “In layman's terms, I select a level two normal monster on my field and search my deck for all cards that share the same name as it” I said raising my voice to express the exgeratted tension of the moment. “As its pretty obvious what I am going to choose. Ill just summon them now.” Taking a short breath to get my focus back from the over-hype I gave this moment. I picked up my deck, Looked for my Ojama Yellow's. Once I found them I placed them on the field, Shuffled my deck, and returned it back right next to my grave. “Now for the final piece of my puzzle, I activate my two copies of solidarity.” Triumph at last flooded me as I realized that unless he had a Kuriboh or Battle Fader I have won this battle. “I scoop, Shang,” Ryial said in this proud and yet strangely somber voice as he placed his palm onto his deck. “That was one hell of a nice move on your part. That is a pretty sweet deck that you have built.” “Thanks Ryial, I am so glad that I have your approval,” I interjected sarcastically as he punched my arm while I was picking up my deck and putting it back into my deck box. That is the moment that I decided to become a professional duelist and that is the moment I finally realized that I am a natural born player of this game. I haven't played with my Ojama's for about 2 years now but today I felt they were due for a comeback. So as I finished strapping up my duel disk. I smiled and stepped out into the stadium. “Ready for this old friend,” I said with the brightest of smiles. “Wouldn't miss this for the world,” Ryial said with that calm demeanor that he has become famous for. A/N: Many thanks to Phantom Roxas for editing and you for reading my first voyage into fanfiction. I'm accepting all constructive criticism/comments and also might turn this into a novel with a possible movie if it gets popular enough. So if you like it tell your friends. Also if you notice any mistakes please point them out to me as I am sure I made some that Roxas dint find. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 I would like to point out that I openly chose to not fix some mistakes, as I told Ecoboy he should learn to spot them himself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecoboy1324 Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 I fixed all of the ones I saw. Are there still a lot of them that slipped my scan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 There is Weather Reports, Foe Fiction, and Phantom's Divination's. These topics showed us that we have great, good, and terrible writers here on YCM. But now there is a new review topic. As a Pokemon will review FanFics. Pichu's reviews. A new generation of reviewing has come. [spoiler=#6: Summer Duels by Ecoboy1324]We now have another review! We will dive into Summer Duels...... The Pro Journal-Summer Duels A story written in the form of a journal! June 17, 2035 2035! Way to get into the future! The crisp golden sun was in the air as I strapped on my duel disk. Dueling for the fun of it just like we used to way back when dueling was everything to us and we were without holographic projectors. Back when dueling was not for the sake of money, fame or even for the sake of winning but just to enjoy the game game itself. Now you make dueling sound like crap. So many plays and weird strategies I came up with during those golden summer days. Though I have gained the status of professional duelist with the fame and the money from the sponsorships, I have never forgotten my roots which is why I am dueling today. DANG IT! He's a pro.... Now that means that there will be no mistakes in a duel... The deck that I chose for today's game is Ojama's. WHAT THE F***! The Ojama's! Are you outta your mind? We aren't that bad! I think we're great! Better then ever! Oh great! The Ojama Trio is here... Specifically, Its a style known around the pro's as Delecure Ojama's. It is a style for playing Ojama's I invented about 20 years ago and is part of what led to me becoming as popular and successful as I am. I still remember like it was yesterday the first duel I used it. It was against my friend Ryial and it is a crowning moment of my childhood. Ohhh! Flashback! I'll get the popcorn! June 17,2015 “I have two Marauding Captains and Royal Decree on the field, Shang.” Ryial said confidently looking at the playing field. “Granted I have used up every card in my hand, but it still doesn't overcome the fact that you have two thousand life points left without any monsters and two face-downs that can't be activated. How do you expect to win this duel if you can't attack or activate any of your traps?” As you see, in five years from now, a boy named Shang will be stuck in the worse position ever in a Yu-Gi-Oh duel! We now must read on! “I guess all I can do is try my friend. I shall draw to being my turn.” I said somewhat doubtfully, but then I picked up my card and smiled inside as I knew, then and there, that this move was a long shot but that luck would be on my side. “You may have a full eight thousand life points but with this one move I can win if luck is on my side. Quick! Get away from him, Luck! I'll start off by summoning Snipe Hunter and then tossing Ojamagic for it to activate its effect, but first I'll activate Ojamagic's effect pulling Ojamas Black, Yellow, and Green out of my deck. Look! He's using us! Now, Ryial, I assume you know what Snipe's effect is?” “Well, yes of course. First you toss a card to the graveyard, then you choose one card on my side of the field and roll a die.” He said with a calmness to his voice reminiscent to his calm demeanor. Ryial sounds like a know it all! “If the result is anything but one and six, the card in question is destroyed.” “Yep” I said with a hint of cockiness. “How lucky are you feeling my friend?” “Very” he said still with that coolness. “You Sure” said I sensing some misplaced sarcasm. This is where you use a sarcasm tag, children. I will now show you what on is. [/sarcasm] “Yes, I have two monsters that you must destroy in order for you to attack.” Starting to lose his trademark coolness he exclaimed. “Not to mention a Trap that makes your Traps null and void. I'd say that I had the upper hand.” That means Ryial is winning! “Well lets let fate decide then” I said boldly as I picked up and began to shuffle a die lying right beside me in my hand releasing it as I say. “For my first target I choose Royal Decree.” The die rolls for about three seconds. Three long and suspenseful moments filled with a hint of bittersweet saccharine but when it landed on the table finally the top showed 4, and I smiled to myself. YAY! *Crowd goes wild* “Lucky!” He exclaims as he put his trap into his graveyard “What Now?” he said out of polite and yet somewhat strange for him curiousness. In answer to his question with that cockiness I reply as I pick up the die again. I thought I told you to get away from him Luck! “Now I discard Ojama Black Say what? to activate Snipes effect again, This time on your Marauding Captain.” The die rolls for those 3 suspense filled moments again landing on two. “Your really pushing me here Shang you know that.” He sighs as he places his monster on top of his trap but then starts to get slightly nervous as he says. “Anymore?” If Shang has more Ojama's, yes. “I'm about to push it even further.” I said using all the force I could muster. “I activate Ojama Country” SEE! MORE OJAMA! Taking a pause to collect myself I place it on the mat right under my deck. “I am assuming you know what this does?” I think all of us know but Ecoboy is going make Ryial explain the card. “Yes Yes I know.” Said Ryial now completely nervous for he knew, From our past duels, that I was going to do something either incredibly dramatic or stupid and he wasn't exactly sure which it was yet. “Provided you have a Ojama creature on your side of the field. The attack and defense points of all monsters are switched.” He takes a short break to compose himself. “You can also send one Ojama from your hand to the graveyard and summon a Ojama from the grave once per turn if I'm not mistaken.” He tells us! “You are not,” I said still not exactly sure if what I was about to do was going to work. “Now let me proceed with my face down Macro Cosmos.” I flip the card on my left face up. “This removes all cards from the game instead of them going to the graveyard.” “This is a very weird deck your playing.” He said , Voice calming, and took a sip of water out of the water bottle that was right next to him. Drinking water was kinda random. “Are you sure you know what your doing Shang.” Of course he does! He's a pro! “What would make you say that Ryial” I said trying to keep him from noticing my nervous expression but failing miserably. “Come on Shang, Macro Cosmos in a Ojama deck.” He exclaims “Even for you that is a very weird choice for a archetype centered on locking down your opponent. Don't you think?” I still have no idea why he has to use an Ojama deck... But we're great! We can kick @$$! You guys suck. He's right.... Quick! Go get a fusion card, Ojama Green! I'm on it! What the hell are you guys doing? You'll see! .“Just watch and learn.”I said. “I remove Ojama Yellow from the game for Snipe Hunter's effect.” COME ON! Putting it right besides my deck I continued.”I then select your last marauding captain and roll my die.” The die rolls for a third time for those three awkward and suspenseful seconds only this time a certain feeling filled the atmosphere, It was a feeling of extreme tenseness as I realized yet again that I had to prove my self Bad grammar alert! I got it! Why does Ojama Green have a fusion card? Get over her Ojama Black! We all have to have our hands on the card! WHAT THE HELL!?!? Ojama King! Uhhh! I'm sorry for telling you guys that you suck and.. and... Too late fool! Goodbye! NOOOOO! ************************************************************************* Hey there fellow reader! This is Pichu big brother, Pikachu, here! Pichu has been hospitalized because Ojama King sat on him. That was golden! I wish I could show you the tape, but we have young people on this site. Remember the part when his eye popped out? LOL! HAHA! But that wasn't the best part, Raichu! The best part is when Ojama King... THERE ARE KIDS ON THIS SITE YOU BISH! Dang it! I forgot... Well anyways, Pichu couldn't finish this review due to the hilarious incident. He won't be able to do the next review. So that's where I step in! I shall do the next review! So tune in next time for Episode Seven: A Review by Pikachu!-----------------------------------------------------Pichu told me to give thanks to his guest stars. Yes even the one who crushed him! So here you go. Thanks to:Ojama Yellow, Ojama Black, Ojama Green, Ojama King, Raichu, and me, Pikachu! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Um, sorry, but I think I'm going to pass on giving a Divination. I helped with the proofreading, so I think it'd be weird to do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecoboy1324 Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Np there Roxas, You up for proofing part 2 to this as im about to begin writing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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