What do you think of this deck?

[dreamingflowers]

Hi guys :)

 

I've recently found a set of cards which used to be my starting deck.

Its a bunch of cards thrown together with no real type specialty or anything. I'm still trying to find a set and type of deck that suits my playing style.

 

Anyways here it is :)

 

Monster cards level 4 and below

 

Soul tiger ATK 0 DEF 2100

Mystical elf ATK 800 DEF 2000

Neo the Magic Swordsman ATK 1700 DEF 1000

Giant Soldier of Stone ATK 1300 DEF 2000

Ray & Temperature ATK 1000 DEF 1000

Rogue Doll ATK 1600 DEF 1000

Gemini Elf ATK 1900 DEF 900

Green Phantom King ATK 500 DEF 1600

 

Monster cards level 5 and up

 

Labyrinth Wall ATK 0 DEF 3000

Gyakutenno Megami ATK 1800 DEF 2000

Big Koala ATK 2700 DEF 2000

Illusionist Faceless Mage ATK 1200 DEF 2200

Ancient One of the Deep Forest ATK 1800 DEF 1900

Empress Mantis ATK 2200 DEF 1400

Wingweaver ATK 2750 DEF 2400

 

Effect Monster cards level 4 and below

 

Royal Magical Library ATK 0 DEF 2000 2x

Getsu Fuhma ATK 1700 DEF 1200

Dreamsprite ATK 300 DEF 200

Dancing Fairy ATK 1700 DEF 1000

Keldo ATK 1200 DEF 1600

Aussa the Earth Charmer ATK 500 DEF 1500

Arcane Archer of the Forest ATK 900 DEF 1400

The Forgiving Maiden ATK 850 DEF 2000

 

Effect Monster cards level 5 and up

 

Fairy King Truesdale ATK 2200 DEF 1500

 

Spell cards

 

Rain of Mercy

Vile Germs

Mystical Space Typhoon

Swords of Revealing Light

Monster Reborn

Dian Keto the Cure Master

Chorus of the Sanctuary

Harpie's Feather Duster

Mage Power

Change of Heart

Fissure

 

Trap Cards

 

Raigeki Break

Spellbinding Circle

Enchanted Javelin

Solemn Wishes

 

Please tell me what you think, maybe write some things down you think I should improve.

Something you'd like to see changed. :)

[LuffyLaxer]

To be quite honest, it's not good. Your deck has to many themes and is to random to go against any themed deck.

 

Plus the line-ups are bad. Enchanted Javelin? No.

 

Please look at the threads in important threads. It will show you how to make a viable deck.

[jabber2033]

Its a bunch of cards thrown together with no real type specialty or anything.

 

That's what we call RANDOM! Random doesn't work in this game.

 

Pick a theme. A theme is the main focus of a deck.

 

Also, try cutting to 40 cards. And start running more copies of your best cards. Having multiple copies of a card + a low deck size (40 cards) helps you draw what you need when you need them. It makes the deck more consistent.

 

Read this thread: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-187984.html

 

It'll help.

[burnpsy]

Monster Reborn

Harpie's Feather Duster

Change of Heart

 

I think it's illegal.

[dreamingflowers]

@LuffyLaxer, thank you for looking through them. Your absolutly right I kind of missed a theme making it look like a random bunch. I've once dueled with a friend who had a harpie themed deck and it worked great together. Thank you for the feedback I think it will really help me getting something good together :)

 

@jabber2033 You really pointed out the randomness of my deck which I now know looks terrible but thanks for your advice of course :) I'm still deciding on a theme which should make it more consistent like you say.

 

@burnpsy Oh thank you for pointing that out I didn't know that =)

 

Just a small question what do you guys reccomend for a theme?

 

My playing style usually is defensive but backed with good spell and trap cards.

[Legend Zero]

Based off your name I'd go with fairy.

[burnpsy]

Based off your name I'd go with fairy.

 

Except Fairies aren't good for defensive play.

 

In fact, there's no such thing as good defensive play aside from Final Countdown.

[LuffyLaxer]

Well, You could go and Buy 3 machina mayhem structure decks and make a deck from that.

[Legend Zero]

Based off your name I'd go with fairy.

 

Except Fairies aren't good for defensive play.

 

In fact' date=' there's no such thing as good defensive play aside from Final Countdown.

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Thats why I said based off your name. :roll:

[Zauls]

Well' date=' You could go and Buy 3 machina mayhem structure decks and make a deck from that.

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This. It is a good start for somebody new to the game (I mean the proper game, not the one that n00bs play). If you just buy 3x Machina Mayhem structure deck and some basic generic staple cards, you can make a fairly competitive deck so long as you choose the right cards to add from the structure deck. I could post a budget decklist that has mainly cards from the structure deck for you if you like, just to give you a kickstart.