Pokemon: Legends of Alph

[Eury]

I just had an image of Valter Giratina coming out of nowhere and eating Giovanni.

 

 

 

...stop spoiling stuff. D:

 

jay kay jay kay

 

Giovanni doesn't get eaten.

 

Just noticed something in the normal chapters; I didn't read them last time:

 

FORMATTING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH

 

It's so tiny and poorly-spaced! Don't center it' date=' don't put it in microscopic print, and start a new, double-spaced paragraph every time there's a new speaker/thinker/subject! It's literally unreadable right now, and not because of the story's contents (I think).

 

But yeah. It's a good story, I think, but I can't really read it right now.

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I'll try reformatting it later.