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Here's my card.

 

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Lore:

This card can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's field once each. During battle between this card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all other monsters on your field.

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Here's my rubric of d00m for the contest (not really an accurate one btw xD ).

 

Effect:FLIP: Gain 300 Life Points for each Plant-Type monster on the field.

 

-The effect is fairly simple but that's ok. The thing is' date=' its a little slow being a FLIP and a little specific and weak by only making you gain some Life and only counting for Plants.

-On top of it, its a high Level monster, so it needs Tribute. Although neither its effect or its ATK/DEF make up for it.

-The name "Tree of Doom" doesn't quite match with the effect either, being of "doom" but healing your Life.

-I'm not a fan of the pic but its ok.

-Lastly, OCG errors exist there. Although the effect is understandable, the vocabulary there is just different to any yugioh card. On the other hand, speaking of grammar, when you write a type of monster, you say Plant-Type, not "Plant type". and Life Points is another one. Other than those I think its ok.

 

Effect:This card can and must attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all other monsters you control.

 

-Those changes above aren't really corrections, since I've seen some cards with the writting you put in there, but I like this^ OCG better that's all.

-Card effect is better elaborated and more complex. That is at first sight because its the same as "Ultimate Tyrano" in effect, ATK, Level, except with 1000 Less DEF. I guess Attribute and Type changes make a difference..

-I like this pic, and it goes well with the name.

-Card is not perfect but its overall good. Congrats ;D

 

My vote goes for card 2.

Sorry for the trouble ^-^"

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We should probably have people give a reason for their votes, otherwise it doesn't count. Votes like this:

 

my vote goes to the first card =P 1-2

 

are not worth the time. They MUST give a reason for their vote. Eclipse's vote still counts because it would have been a repeat of sleepy's otherwise.

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We should probably have people give a reason for their votes' date=' otherwise it doesn't count. Votes like this:

 

my vote goes to the first card =P 1-2

 

are not worth the time. They MUST give a reason for their vote. Eclipse's vote still counts because it would have been a repeat of sleepy's otherwise.

 

I agree

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Vote for SJ1 , its more Original than the Three , it can Make a lot of damage to your Opponent , and 3000 Attack , it has a cool name and Pic and its Not OP because when is destroyed it destroys all other monster you control , in the other Side Hankaro had a lot of OCG problems in only 15 words...

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Monster's card is really not very useful, it takes 1 tribute for such low use, and there are stronger plants out there that take 1 tribute. Also, Horrbile OCG. It's UP.

 

Now, SJ's card is OP, considering it blows up the field, but it will see more use than Monster's card. I like the must attack drawback for this card, but giving it piercing is a bit much. Still, takes two tributes, and it is better than Monster's

 

My vote is for ~SJ1~

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