blue-eyes Posted May 12, 2007 Report Share Posted May 12, 2007 I'll make a starter deck for the guy and other stuff. Chapter One The first duel Aaron Eragon was a new duelist at the duel school. He was walking around when he bumped in to a guy. "Hi" said the boy. "Hi" said Aaron "I'm Aaron Eragon". "I'm Jaden" said the boy. "WHAT" said Aaron "your the best duelist in the world". "No I'm not" said Jaden. At that moment the first duel was taking place. "Okay it's Jaden vs Aaron". Aaron was shocked but he followed. When they got there Jaden said "I'll take it easy". Aaron smiled and saided "you can go first". "I'll draw a card then summon neo-spacian aqua dolphin in atk mode and end my turn". "I'll draw a card then summon hyper hammerhead in atk mode then put to cards two cards face-down and end my turn". Jaden smiled and said "I'll draw a card and play polymerization I fuse sparkman and clayman to summon elemental hero thunder giant then put one face-down card and end my turn". next chapter comeback hope you enjoyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BS Posted May 12, 2007 Report Share Posted May 12, 2007 Make a chapter longer than a paragraph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkguy00000 Posted May 12, 2007 Report Share Posted May 12, 2007 Um... a) Why didn't Jaden activate the effect of Dolphin?b) Why didn't Hyper-Hammerhead attack? Its' a clear backfield....c) Why didn't Thunder Giant use his effect?d) Why didn't Jaden attack? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue-eyes Posted May 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2007 sorry for the mistake I made. chapter two comeback Aaron said "okay I'll draw a card then summon green ninja in def mode then I'll use his effect if you have a monster card on the field you lose 1000 LP then I end my turn". "I'll draw a card and then use efffet of dolphin and you have a monster 1000 less atk points then thunder giant so you take 500 damage then I'll play wroughtweiler in def and then atk thunder giant atttack his hyper hammerhead you lose 900 LP and end my turn". "I'll draw a card then tribute rabbit knight and cyberdark keel to play dark magician in atk mode then I'll play the spell card summon of legends to special summon elemental hero sparky in atk mode and use his effect I can send to the graveyard thunder giant for one turn now I can attack your dolphin to now you lose 300 LP then I'll atack your wroughtwieler with dark magician and now I end my turn"."I'll draw a card then I pick polymerization and sparkman from my graveyard then put 1 face-down card then tribute hero kid and wildheart to play elemental hero neos now I'll attack your dark magician with neos now you lose 100 LP then I end my turn". "I'll draw a card then play victory if you have a monster with attack more than one of my monsters I win". "good duel" said Jaden. "Thanks" said Aaron. "Um meet me by the red dorm since your the new red dorm guy" said Jaden. "Okay in an hour" said Aaron. "Got it" said Jaden. next chapter the new villains hope you enjoyed I'm making a starter deck for Aaron Eragon so check in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue-eyes Posted May 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2007 enjoy Chapter three the new villians An hour later Aaron Eragon walked up toward the red dorm and saw Jaden and two other boys. "Hi" said one boy "I'm Cyrus Truesdale". "Hi I'm Tyranno Hassleberry" said the other boy. "I'm Aaron Eragon" said Aaron. "I'm Jaden Yuki" said Jaden. Just then a KABOOM sound came from the blue dorm. When they got there a strong looking man was standing there alone. When he saw the crowd he said "what are you doing here move on the people from the red dorm yellow dorm and blue dorm walked away. Aaron said "hey leave us alone". Jaden and the other boys stoped and turned around. The man smiled and said "I'm Mike Un and nobody talks to me like that". Aaron heard Cyrus say "Aaron got in big trouble". "Then let duel" Aaron said. "Fine you go first" said Mike. "I'll draw a card then summon rabbit knight in def mode then put two cards face-down and end my turn" said Aaron. LP 4000. "I'll draw a card then tribute dark knight and death warrior to play hollow death in def mode then put one card face-down and end my turn" said Mike. LP 4000. "I'll draw a card then summon my other rabbit knight in def mode then play tribute of the legends so I tribute my two rabbit knights two play blue-eyes chaos dragon in atk mode to end my turn" said Aaron. LP 4000. "I'll draw then summon knight of dark world in def mode then I end my turn" said Mike. LP 4000. "I'll draw then tribute little dinosaur and fire dinosaur to play dark dinosaur in atk mode" said Aaron. LP 4000. next chapter the fierce duel hope you enjoyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted May 13, 2007 Report Share Posted May 13, 2007 I think you mispelled Syrus. Also, The first duel made no sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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