mickymousefan1 Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Enjoy![spoiler=Chapter 1-Mice and Hedgehogs]Mickey sat in his house reading a good book."Hot dog, Pluto! This book is great!" Mickey replied to finishing a chapter. "Ruff?" Pluto barked."It's about a blue hedgehog saving a pink hedgehog." Mickey said putting his book down."Mickey, honey?" Minnie said walking into the living room. "It's time for dinner.""Hot dog!" Mickey said walking into the dinner room."No, Mickey. We're having soup, not hot dogs." Mickey and Minnie finished eating and headed up stairs to bed."Get in bed, Pluto." Minnie said getting in bed. Mickey walked out of the bathroom in his P.J.'s. Mickey crawled in bed."G'night honey.""Night, Minnie." Sonic woke up in the morning feeling great. "I say it's time for a run in the Green Hill Zone!" Sonic said. He took off running. Over lakes, through loop-d-loops! Sonic was living the dream. He came to two floating chunks of land. It was quiet. Too quiet. Then a giant ship with a wrecking ball."Eggman!""Hello hedgehog!" Dr. Eggman laughed."I'm ready to fight, Eggman! Bring on the wrecking ball!" Sonic yelled."As you wish!" Dr. Eggman said pressing a button. The wrecking ball moved and hit Sonic! Sonic was sent flying."NOOOOOO!" Sonic yelled disappearing in the distance. Amy, Sally, Shadow, and Tails sat around in Amy's house, wondering about Sonic."Went for a run and never came back!" Tails said."Eggman." Shadow said."GUYS!" Amy yelled pointing at the TV. "He's on TV!" "A hedgehog crashed landed near DisneyTown. A dog named Goofy video taped the hedgehog's landing. We interviewed Goofy.What made you video tape the hedgehog.I don't know! My son Max told me he saw a star crash in the front yard.Thank you for your time, Mr. Goofy.Garsh! Imma Mister!" "No way!" everyone yelled in usion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black★Star Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 this is odd....very odd.. but good...i guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 i like the idea of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 I have a question: Are there going to be other Disney characters in this, i.e. Simba, Aladdin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickymousefan1 Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 why else would it be called DISNEYTOWN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Good point, but I wasn't sure if it would just be limited to the usual Mickey, Donald, Goofy, etc. characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 i was too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Frankly, this is what you call original. Although it may be short, I like it. You can do better though. 6/10 Above Average. That's good. Keep going. I'd like to see where this goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 i say the same! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Me too, even though Pichu should use capital letters! I enjoyed the hot dog predicament. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 yummy hot dogs! no soup. WTF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Is this somewhat like an average storyteling episode in "Mickey Mouse Clubhouse"? I love that cartoon. The only Children's show I like. Storytelling always comes to life. Hot Dog! What a nice Fanfic that was! Hey everybody, kick your heels and do the... You know what... BTW I love creepy "coincidences". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 lol! i miss being little! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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