senatheEND Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 [spoiler=Chapter 1 - The School Duel]Chapter 1 *~~The School Duel~~* A Cold Fall-day, the air is stale and the cherry blossoms fall like rain. The sky is a soft glowing pink At West duel academy. A Short girl with Shoulder length silky brown hair, wearing a dark red shirt and a black skirt, makes her way to the front gates of West duel academy. Claire: *Sigh* Another year at duel academy... She says with a downed look on her face as she walks toward the gates. Claire: What am i going to do here? She asks her Zane Plushy. Claire walks talking to her Plushy until she becomes startled by a unfamiliar face rushing by causing her to drop her plush Zane. Claire: Excuse you!!.. Claire yells bending over to pick up the plush but before she does its kicked off the edge in which she was walking by another unfamiliar face but this time he stopped and with Claire watched the doll fall to the street below. Claire: NOO! Watching the plush fall the stranger begins to speak. Stranger: I'm so sorry... I'll before he could finish the two watch the doll burst apart as a passing car destroys the small doll. Stranger: I'll get you a new one... Claire follows the remains of the plush with her eyes and a terrified look on her face.. Claire: Its ok.. It was old anyway She looks up at the young man who seemed to be her age. Claire: First year? Stranger: Ah no I transferred here from South duel academy. Claire Looked slightly Puzzled Claire: Why Isn't south duel academy the best of the 4? The stranger Looks away as to hide something then turns to Claire and changes the subject. Stranger: Well We will miss our duel assignments if we linger here any longer~ He Drags out the ending of his words Claire: Claire, Claire Truesdale. Stranger: Oh! A Truesdale.. your family is quite famous. Claire: Tell me about it.. She looks down at her feet. Stranger: Oh my names Para sorry I didn't introduce myself first how ungentlemanly of myself.. please forgive me His voice was soft as if all words that came from him were those of a song. Para: Well shall we Claire Truesdale. The two walk toward the front gates where they see a large man who was very strong looking standing at the gates he stops the Two and a group of others George: I'm George this schools Top Senior staff member. you will stand here and wait to be assigned to a group which will determine your duel placement. Everyone Looks nervous. George: Don't sweat it just try your hardest and you wont feel bad about it later; Ok Umm, C-Claire Truesdale! .. Eh hmm, you will be placed in group 4c Please this way. George hands Claire a sticker that says 201-4cShe takes the sticker and looks back and waves to para and trots along. Being in the gates of West academy again was like entering a new world once again. Claire Everything's changed.. She looks around and proceeds to sit and wait on a nearby bench. 30 or 40 mins go by she was joined by Para who was assigned the same group 4c. Now the Headmaster is out here the students have been sorted and spaced. The headmaster starts to call groups into a Large Blue Stadium and seats every group in separate areas. Claire: Oh my...... This is Obelisk blue's Duel Stadium! Headmaster White: Welcome! First years and veterans alike. Welcome back to a new year at West Duel academy. As you can see we have made quite a few new renovations. What do you think! The students roar with pride as they Awe at the sight of the new school. Headmaster White: Ok Ok settle down, Now this year we hope for all of you to make great improvements. You all know why you are in this building correct. The room turns serious Headmaster White: That's right Academy entrance exams, I will remind you all if you Fail this exam.. you admission will not be refunded and you will not gain entrance to this fine duel academy. We will be selecting your opponents Via Random selection. Each of you were given a number you will be paired by this. No pressure try your hardest and you will at least get a shiny Red jacket. The students and teachers Laugh Headmaster White: Now lets start this year off with a bang! the Roof of the stadium opens and the students Oo-and Ah at it while fireworks are set off behind the school so they students can see. Claire: Wow they went all out on this eh para. Claire looks at para who has a concerned look on his face. Claire: Are you~ Headmaster White: Now Computer Select the first Numbers.. the computer shuffles the numbers on a graphic Computerized Deck. then Draws 2 cards. Headmaster White: Oh we have our first 2 it looks like its 302-1a vs 201-4c; Joshua zartu vs Claire Truesdale Please make your way to the dueling arena. The two make their way to each other. As the Students Roar with excitement "Lets Go Truesdale" one student yells. Claire: Wait~ She remembers the cloths that man was wearing. Claire: your the one who bumped into me today. Josh: Oh sorry I was.. in a rush Claire: I could see that.. The two shake hands and return to their spots on the duel arena the Stadium roars "Ready" Claire & Josh: DUEL!! End of Chapter 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Takashi125 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 um... I believe Script writing is greatly frowned upon around here... just a warning. Though this story does show some promise... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted June 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Sorry I'm not to great of a writer i write plays not books xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 ...I understand that you write plays, but no one would look at your story until:1. You make an original name.2. You stop using script. The rules are rules. Rinne would lock this soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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