LuffyLaxer Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 My First RP in 4 Months.Let's See If I still Got it.here is the link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-207967.html [spoiler=Plot]During The Hundred Years War, The Earth had Come under the brink of internal destruction. The King of Dragons Ordered the destruction of the human race. Dragons were going around killing any human in site. The Lizard-Men, allies to the Great Dragon King, Also Fought the humans. The Humans put up many strong fronts and had many brave battles against the Lizard-Men and the Dragon King, but they were always pushed back. Humanity was about to give up hope when a woman Known as Celia, the Light stepped forward. Celia rallied the troops to her and using her power over light help to push the forces of the Dragon King Back. The Dragon King was surprised. He hadn't been on the losing side of the war before. So the dragon King decided to end the Humans by fighting Celia herself. Celia Stepped up to the challenge. The Fight between them lasted 4 days with not one of them slowing down. Then, on the 5th day of battle, Celia struck the mighty Dragon King across his neck with a light slash. The dragon King grabbed for his neck to try and stop the bleeding, but it was of no avail. The Dragon King died 5 minutes after the slash. The Lizard-Men Went into hiding. Celia dropped to her knees exhausted, but happy. Celia was a earth wide hero. 10 years after the battle, The dragons became extinct. The Lizard men did not show themselves and stayed in underneath the earth. Celia The Light, Also known as the undefeatable Goddess, decided to open a school for students with special abilities, so that the earth can be well protected when she is gone. She Invites several Students to her Island fortress built by the thankful people to train them in secret. Now Begin your training. [spoiler=Rules]1. All YCM Rules Apply2. No GodModding Celia is as close to a god as anyone in this RP is going to get.3.There Will be a 3 Strike Warning System. a. You recieve a written warning in your inbox b. You receive a 3 day Ban from the RP via In-box c. Your Outta Here4. No OOC-Only Posts.5. If you are confused with Anything, let me know. Pm me6. When This Starts, if you want to join, pm me your application. You get 2 trys.7. 4 lines per person.8. Have Fun (Duh!) [spoiler=Application]Name:Age: (Cannot be younger than 15, but no more than 19)Power:(Be real Specific. Nothing more than just above basic skills. Example will be in my App.)Bio: (4 sentences. Easy enough to do. I will be judging them)Appearance: (Pic in spoiler or 4 sentence Description)Character Description: (Must be 4 Sentences) [spoiler=My App]Name: Tiberius Arizona (Though he doesn't know his last name)Age: 17Power: He is a Pyrokinetic. But He can only shoot fire out of his hands and the only color he has is blue. Bio: [spoiler=Bio]Tiberius was born in a small village on the coast of Neypthis. When the Dragon King attacked the village, Tiberius was four years old. His parents where murdered right in front of him, by the Dragon King himself. Tiberius ran into the woods. There he met the wolves. Over 6 years time he learned the language of the wolves and ran with the wolf pack. During the seventh year, he came back to civilization. A martial Arts by the name of Chen Discovered him. The wolf packs let him go to the human world, Tiberius always visit them. Tiberius worked hard and trained under the martial arts of Chen. He learn Nan Chuan, Aikido, Jeet Kune Do, and Shaolin Fist. Tiberius learned how to read and write, but always had time for his wolf friends. On his 16th birthday, Tiberius discover the fact that he could use fire. Tiberius thought it was great until he accidentally burned down one of his master's shrines by mistake. Chen tried to teach Tiberius how to control it but since Chen had no powers, he could only help so much. On his 17th birthday, Tiberius got a letter from Celia, the woman who destroyed the Dragon King. The letter asked of him to go to her Island. Chen told Tiberius to go, for it would be a great opportunity for him to control his powers. Sadly Tiberius agreed. Tiberius said Goodbye to his master. HE said good bye to his wolf friends. One of the wolves, named Jet for his black fur, went with Tiberius to help him on his travels. After three days of walking, Tiberius made it to the coastal city where the boat would come to take him to Celia's Island. Appearance: [spoiler=Pic]But blacker and blue hair. Character Description: Tiberius Is a kind person. He likes challenges and is not afraid of them. He fights for his beliefs and his friends. Blushes around women way to much. Nervous around women for the simple fact that he hasn't been around women for very long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Name: Nate River but goes by nearAge: 17Power: Near has the ability of magnetic attraction. For now all he can do is move small objects around. [spoiler=Bio]Near was born on a large island in the middle of the ocean. When the Dragons came 3 of them swarmed his childhood home. They burned it to the ground and killed both of his parents. Seeing his parents die in front of him activated his powers. He used his powers to hide under a large boulder until the dragons left. Appearance: Near wears black skinny jeans with a white belt. He has a long black cloak with a hood. His shirt is Neon green with black writing on it. His hair color is black. While he is using his powers his eyes change from a solid brown to a very lime green. Character Description: He is loved and considered "Popular" by many girls. He is very smooth when it comes to women. He uses his powers to help others and to be impressive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 You need to change your power. Remember i want just above basic. read my power as a example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 how is ur power an example its just fire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Quote He has the Element Fire. But He can only shoot fire out of his hands and the only color he has is blue. read the statement. I'm being specific in what my character can do for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 so does that mean i need to be "Specific" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 yes. that is what it means. it says so in the app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 EDITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Umm. your power is supposed to be just above basic. how bout this. L is a beginnig psychic. Is still learning how to move stuff with his mind. Can pick up 30 lbs with his mind. Try that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 First, you two, use the real terms for your powers. Control over fire is Pyrokinesis and Psychic is split into two catagories. Telepathy(Mind reading, fortune telling, Etc.) and Telekinesis(The ability to move objects with the mind). Also, how does telekinesis help find criminals, Hichigo. It helps fight them, not find. Telepathy helps find them. Name: Siolma Nesee.Age: 18Power: [spoiler=Power one: Phasing/Intangibility]Ability to phase through solid matter without harm. Can be used to crush innards of an enemies body or escape through any means. This is the only level it could have, as it doesn't get more or less powerful. [spoiler=Power two: Sheilding]Ability to project powerful fields of manipulated energy. At the moment can only summon 2 metres squared area of force fields, in a square shape and has to have them touching him or his clothing. Also can only hold a single one for 5 minutes, and loses 1/5 of that time for every other Sheild summoned. At most he can summon 5. Bio: Siolma was born on the battle field, and his first sight was his father being cut open by a Dragon. A moment later, his healer mother, who was one of the few powered-people to know how to use their powers naturally, ran after his father and was stabbed by a lizard-man. Siolma was saved by a warrior, who ran past the crying siolma, and was raised by the man. After 14 years, he had forgotten about his parents, only knowing that they had died on the battlefield. The man who had raised him was called Nicklin Nesee. Siolma was notified about the School when he was 17, and travelled for 3 weeks untill he arrived at the port town, on his 18th birthday.Appearance: [spoiler=Without the sword] Personality: Siolma is a fun-loving guy with an appetite for adventure. Being born on the battle field, he has a lust for fights, and is usually found making trouble in some way or another. However, he is bright and sensible when needed, and is altogether calm and collected. He is usually found with a smile on his face and has recently been getting a lot of girls talking to him. He is very popular and is reknown for his sense of humour. Can I have another character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 @ Magnet: Well, I'm iffy about anyone having a second character. Are you sure you can handle two? Thanks for the tip. I'll change my app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 I've done it plenty of times before, and quite a few times I do three. Any after that I could do, but it would get boring and confusing for other people. I will only do two. And here's a second app if allowed it: Name: Anoma BolcosAge: 19Power: Aquakinesis. So far, The ability to manipulate Water and Ice, to be able to summon anything ranging from a small globule of water to drench a throat, to a giant Icicle, capable of spearing an elephant. The only thing impossible for a Aqua master to do with water, is to use any water inside the human body. At first he can summon a medium sized mass of water and use it, such as a cloud of rain, or a globe the size of a human, and can summon small icicles, each capable of spearing a human to the heart, and anything below that level of power. However, Anoma does own a mask which changes his appearence a lot and his personality, yet he still retains his conciousness and such. Will explain why is so strong in bio. Bio: Anoma is the Nephew of Celia, and has been in her shadow for years. However, he has the potential she did at his age, so he is predicted to be almost as powerful as her later on in his life. He still believes his family ignores him, so he enjoys school where he is one of the powerfullest in the school. He still believes himself not to be living up to his Sisters standards, so studies and practises at every moment he can. When in trouble, he places a mask on which changes his appearence and personality, and enhances his powers to an extreme point close to Celia's, but not enough to even injure her. He rarely uses this though, as he is unconcious for a while afterwards(2-3 posts, depending on what point in the story we are at).The bio for the Mask: The mask is possessed by a demon, Clath, the powerfullest water user ever. He almost detroyed half the world, once using the whole of the oceans to drown a ton of dragons. Because of his power, he was imprisoned in a mask, restraining him and limiting his powers. It also only allowed him to move or use his power when he was worn. However, he gains a psychic connection with anyone who has worn him and can control the person wearing him's body, partially. He cannot harm anyone who has not attacked him or anyone the wearer hasn't asked him to attack, and has to do anything the wearer wants him to do. Appearance: [spoiler=Actual Appearence] [spoiler=When mask is placed on]Yes it's a yugioh card, but it's an awesome pic. Personality: Anoma is a extremely mature and reasonable man, usually with a straight or slightly happy face. Being the most progressed person in the school, and one of the oldest, his has a hidden smugness about him, but never shows it and is usually friendly with people, making friends with a lot of people. Mask Personality: The Mask is a jokey, fun loving thing that loves to tease people. However, he is cruel and savage, aswell as merciless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 So i agree with your suggestion of my power luffy do i need to change my app Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Question Hichigo. How does your character use Telekinesis to find people. Also, dont copy people of anime's, especially people that have no powers and die half way through. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cozmosus Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Name: John SmithAge: 17Power: Chemical transmutation. This allows John to molecularly change the atomic structure of any object into another substance or element. Though, he is unaware of his gull potential and is limited to only being able to use his power on his own body. He is unable to become any of the manmade or dangerously radioactive elements. Bio: John was an orphan until he turned 13. 3 men in black suits came to the orphanage, and signed to take him. John was taken to a lab, unable to escape. Experiments were performed on him for 4 years. By the end, he had 2 hearts, and had gained his ability to chemically alter his body. He is now on the run, training to control his powers.Appearance: Reveal hidden contents Character Description: John Smith wise, insightful, and brilliant.His wit is sharp and occasionally hurtful…Revealing his scorn for people with less intelligence.Underneath it all, he feel burdened by the stupidity of humanity.He knows what’s right in the world, but it’s overshadowed by everything that’s wrong.People see him as arrogant. While this is partially true, he are also very sensitive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 'magnet soldier said: Question Hichigo. How does your character use Telekinesis to find people. Also' date=' dont copy people of anime's, especially people that have no powers and die half way through.[/quote'] Okay stfu i can copy an anime if i want i changed things i will change my app Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 No, I just prefere normal apps. It ticks me off when People dont use imagination. Never mind. But you didn't answer my question. 'Cos I think you mean Telepathy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Guys! Well yeah Ichigo, Change you app. that just make things better. Magnet Since your sure, you can have two. YCMaker #2: Probability manipulation? I don't think that is a good power to have. That Power I feel has tendencies to lead to god modding. Please change your power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cozmosus Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Chemical Transmution? Well Okay. Just as long as it doesn't get out of hand. Also @ magnet. Just realized something. I need your power to be just above basic. I read your character bio and that is okay , but The characters need a lot of room to develop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 I changed mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Why don't you just stick to my description. Controlling someone's mind is pretty much god-modding. Your power will lead to that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted June 13, 2010 Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 I am just going to drop this instead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted June 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Why drop? What the point of doing so? Plus i need a couple more people to join this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Flame Kite Posted June 15, 2010 Report Share Posted June 15, 2010 Reserve, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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