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"Its coming." said YCMaker. "Pardon?" asked Pizza. YCMaker whispered something to Pizza. "I'll gather the mods" replyed Pizza. Meanwhile..... "Spin the bottle?" grinned VK. "Get away from me before I shove that bottle down your throat." hissed Larxene. "I'm bored." said Zeonark. "I have remedy for that." chuckled Jord200. "Anything is better than VK's idea." grunted Larxene. "My cousin told me this. Its about the nine Legendary Planet cards. Once every 50 years, certain cards are said to give off strange feelings." started Jord200. "What do you mean?" asked Bakupenguin.

 

"Nobody knows, its said that the air gets thin, you get feelings of being watched, or your Duel Disk's computer will go crazy. Some people have even passed out. Its been known to happen with Exodia cards, the Wicked Gods, Sacred Beasts, and Eyptian Gods. Including my Uria, Obelisk, and Avitar." continued Jord. "Now that you mention it, I thought I heard Zexyion saying something similar about my Hamon a while back." said Larxene. "Yin told me to tell her if my Dreadroot was giving off anything werid when I first became a Vice Mod." said VK.

 

"Its unkown why this happens, but its said that the cards are trying to revive themselves by draining their owner's strength." murmured Jord. "Revive themselves?" asked Xion. "Do mean that the cards are trying to become living, breathing creatures?" asked Kitty Princess. "Yep, but not in the form we see when we summon them. Nobody knows what they would become, but its been told that they will be lead by the nine warriors. Those nine warriors are the Legendary Planet cards. Its said that they will become an army, and overthrow duelists." finished Jord. "Thats the biggest load of bull crap I've ever heard!" roared Larxene.

 

"True, but it does give you something to think about." said Jord. Meanwhile..... "I'm sorry for waking you all. Its just that in 24 hours, the door to the Duel Spirit World will open." said YCMaker grimmly. "You all know what to do." said Pizza to the moderators. "Now get busy! We must prepare imediantly!" ordered YCMaker.

 

 

ch1 Uria becomes an enemy

 

"Lust! Did you find them?" asked Opalmoon. "No. The vice mods are probally having their meeting in their hidden wing." replyed Lust. "Follow me." came a voice. "Hey Roxas. You know where they are?" asked Lust. "I used to be a vice mod. Remember?" said Roxas. Meanwhile..... "I acitivate I Ultimate Offering!" said Jord200. "Now that he has Call of the Haunted, Ultimate Offering, and Shadow Spell out, he's gonna most likely summon Uria." said Pikachu.

 

"Do what you want! Uria can't beat my Hamon!" laughed Larxene. "We'll see about that! I send to the Graveyard my three traps to summon Uria, Lord of Searing Flames!" yelled Jord. Then sparks began to come from Jord's and Larxene's Duel Disks. "What the?" said Larxene. "Why is it getting so hard to breathe in here?" gasped Xion. Then it happened. "There they are!" said Roxas. "Looks like we are too late!" yelled Lust. A red light beamed from Jord's Duel Disk and a yellow light beamed from Larxene's. "Finally! We can return to our true forms!" came a voice. Then two figures appeared. They resembled Uria and Hamon. However.....

 

"What are those looks for?!" hissed Uria. "Your girls?!" yelled Jord in suprise. "But your Uria, LORD of Searing Flames and Hamon, LORD of Striking Thunder!" said Xion. "Meh, those are our sealed forms. These are our real forms. I am Uriahonoo, Princess of Searing Flames!" said Uriahonoo. "I am Hamonia, Princess of Striking Thunder!" said Hamonia. "Hamon.....ia, how dare you betray me!" roared Larxene. "Why? We've been a team for years?" asked Jord200. "We want our freedom. We Duel Spirits are done helping Duelists. Duelists now will serve us!" laughed Uriahonoo. "I know the story, why would the two of you, Dreadroot, Obelisk, Slifer, Avitar, Ra, Eraser, and Raviel revive yourselveses just to serve the Legendary Plantets?" asked Lust.

 

"You got it backwords. The Legendary Planets serve the Sacred Nine!" said Hamonia. "We are the ones that will comand an army of Duel Spirits! Before we can however, we need to wake up are seven brothers and sisters" said Uriahonoo. "Uriahonoo. Duel me." said Jord200. "Oh? What for?" giggled Uriahonoo. "I win you return to normal, am I wrong?" "Your correct. You lose, I get to stay like this. However, I'm after Obelisk and Avitar now. I know every card in your deck and all your strategies. I accept!" replyed Uriahonoo. "Duel!" yelled Jord200 and Uriahonoo.

 

Jord's turn 1

"Its my turn! I play one card facedown and summon Vampire Lady!" yelled Jord200.

 

Uriahonoo's turn 2

" I play five facedowns and end my turn." said Uriahonoo. "How much do you want to bet that all five are Traps?" joked Yin. "Exactly. She's Uria, so she's using a Uria Deck." agreed Lust.

 

Jord200's turn 3

"She wants me to attack. Oh well. Might as well get those traps out of the way now. I summon Blood Sucker! Attack directy!" yelled Jord. "I activate Negate Attack! Your Battle Phase is over!" laughed Uriahonoo.

 

Uriahonoo's turn 4

" I play one card facedown and end my turn." said Uriahonoo.

 

Jord200's turn 5

"Hold it!" I activate The Eye of Truth and Bad Reaction to Simoitchi! Now you have to reveil your hand, and instead of gaining 1000 Life Points, you lose 1000 Life Points!" giggled Uirahonoo. Jord200 LP3000 "Crap. Then I summon Quillbolt Hedgehog! Then I activate Ultimate Offering!" said Jord200. "I think its time I activte my Trap, Depth Guiding Light! Now you send five cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. You and I check the sixth card, and you add it to to your hand. If you don't play that card the following turn, you receive 2000 damage." laughed Uriahonoo. Jord reveils the first five. However, the sixth card is..... "Oh crap." gasped Jord. "If he doesn't play that, he'll lose on his next turn!" said VK. "He doesn't have a choice." frowned Opal. "Do what you have to do Jord." sighed Lust. "Sorry guys. I pay 500 Life Points with Ultimate Offering so I can sacrifice my three monsters to summon Obelisk the Tormentor." sighed Jord sadly. Uriahonoo laughed as her former master summoned her comrade. Obelisk had now joined Uria and Hamon.

 

"I tune myself with Uria. The searing flame lord's true power becomes awakened when being exposed to the key to his true power." chanted Uriahonoo. "I have a very uneasy feeling." gulped Jord200.

 

 

ch2 lament

 

"So Obelisk, how you feeling?" laughed Uriahonoo. "Good." replyed Obelisk. "I activate another Depth Guiding Light!" giggled Uriahonoo. "Give me a break." sighed Jord when he saw the card. "She's good." said Opal. "I summon Plaugespreader Zombie! Then since I have a Tuner monster out, I can Special Summon Quillbolt Hedgehog! Now by paying 500 Life Points I can summon Necroface! Finally by paying 500 more Life Points sacrifice my three monsters to summon The Wicked Avitar. groaned Jord200. "Well, I'll be on my way. Hamon, Obelisk, Avitar, lets go find the others!" howled Uriahonoo in joy.

 

"There you guys are!" panted Jolta. "Everyone ok?" asked JoshIcy. "For the most part yes." replyed Bakupenguin. "What happened to Uria, Hamon, Obelisk, and Avitar?" asked JoshIcy. Nobody said anything. "I was afraid of that. Roxas, Lust. YCMaker has asked for both of you to see him imediantly. Flame Dragon, Crab Helmet and myself will be joining you." said Icy. "Where did Jord200 go?" asked CC.

 

"I don't know, but we must deal with the sacred nine at the moment." said Lust. Meanwhile. "Come my minions, rise for your masters! Let us show these fools the grand power we hold as duel spirits!" laughed Uriahonoo as duel spirits began to come from the portal to the Duel Spirit World. "Sister, when will we have the strength to free "her"?" asked Hamonia. "Heh. Now I see our goal." said Obelisk. "Once the other five are awakened. We will also need at least four of the nine Planet cards." said Uirahonoo. "The plan?" continued Avitar. "All I need is for her soul to be awakened. Then I'll use my new powers to defeat my former master and then, we wiil have defeated the Duelists of YCM, and our former masters." smiled Uriahonoo. Meanwhile.

 

"Why?" sighned Jord. "Hey Jord200!" yelled Bakupenguin. "We've been looking all over for you." panted Opal. "Why did you run off like that?" asked Zeonark. "I kind of just want to have sometime alone with my thoughts." replyed Jord200. "Its about Uria, Obelisk, and Avitar?" said Princess Kitty. "Whats done is done. We can still bring them back to their senses. Come on, what happened to your dueling spirit?" wondered Jolta. "I completely forgot." gasped Opal in horror. "Whats wrong ma'am?" asked Jord200. "You know the story, the sacred nine wll make a Duel Spirit army. There is a portal that will form, but its where it forms that concerns me." frowned Opal.

 

"Where's it supposed to fo- don't tell me." growned Princess Kitty. "In a place where there is already a vast number of Duel Spirits." facepalmed Opal. "A lot of the members of YCM have Duel spirits." said Jord200. "Thats exactly my point." responded Opal. "I don't know what I can do. Those three know all my tricks, down to every single card I have in my deck. Then again, I'm the only one who can stop those three. Fine." sighed Jord200. "Where's VK?" asked Opal. "Run for your life!" yelled VK as he ran by. "Wait, Stop! I just wanna crush you!" laughed Dreadroot. "Should we help him?" asked Jolta. "Dreadroot won't crush him. He'll return to a card if he kills VK. They can only stay in humanoid form forever if they defeat their former owner in a duel." replyed Opal. "Easier said than done." sighed Jord200.

 

"We need to find the rest of the mods and help them protect the remaining four cards." muttered Opal. "What about the portal?" asked Bakupenguin. "We'll get to that soon enough. Our main mission for now is to protect Slifer, Ra, Raviel, and Eraser. Jord200, I'm going to have a few members train you to beat Uria." replyed Opal. Meanwhile. "I called you here because I have a confession. A card was sealed under the Organization of YCM. That is what the Duel Spirits are after." said YCMaker. "A card?" wondered Roxas. "Why did you seal a card under YCM?" asked Icy. "More importantly, how did you seal a card under this giant organization?" joked Lust. "Its a card that has a Duel Spirit. It is known as the Duel Spirit Queen. She is severly weakened by the seal. However she needs a high ranked Duel Spirit to break the seal." explained YCMaker.

 

"That Duel Spirit will most likely be the leader of the Sacred Nine." said Falling Pizza. Meanwhile. "Brother Sliferrio! Brother Eraser! "Sister Hamonia! Sister Raviela! Brother Obelisk! Brother Avitar! Brother Dreadroot! Brother Ramen! Our goals are within our grasp! Soon Duelists will bow before our power! Tremble before our feet! Quiver at the sounds of our names! Let the Age of the Duel Spirit begin!" laughed Uriahonoo.

 

 

ch3 truth

 

"Opal said this is the place where my training beg-" Jord200 stopped dead in his tracks as a knife hit the wall right next to his neck. "Out of all the members Roxas would have me train with, I get stuck with the you. Oh well. Your better than VK I guess. Least he could have done is have is have me train with a Organization 13 division member." growled Larxene as she pulled her knife out of the wall. "I thought you were second in command- Jord200 was cut off again as Larxene held a knife to his jugular. "I am. Is that a problem? Or must I make your head fly and or gouge your eyes out?" giggled Larxene. "No." gulped Jord200.

 

"Well then cut the bull and begin." hissed Larxene. "Hey guys." came a voice. "Bakupenguin? Princess Kitty? VK-Duelist? Xion? Lovely CC? Zeonark? Jolta? What are you guys doing here?" asked Jord200. "Training." replyed Bakupenguin. "Well well well. The nine vice moderators all in atendance. This is the perfect time to tell you our side of the story." came a voice. "Uriahonoo and the rest of them." said Jord200. "What do you mean your side of the story?" asked Princess Kitty. "We will tell you." said Obelisk.

 

"Like us, some cards have Duel Spirits. However, not every Duel Spirit has good intentions. When Duelists found this out, some of our brothers and sisters who were inoccent paid the price. Duel Spirits were sealed away, hid, and some even were destroyed." said Hamonia as a tear ran down her face. "Some Duel Spirits grew to hate Duelists after that. Others still knew that there was a few kind Duelists out there. We trusted you all enough to lend our power to you, but these days we can't be so sure. Thats why we revolted." said Dreadroot. "We want Duelists to suffer the way our friends did." glared Sliferrio. "Some Duel Spirits that were guilty were disposed of." said Eraser. "However most of them were kind, inoccent, peace loving Duel Spirits that did nothing wrong!" cried Raveila. "Then you Duelists did the worst crime, you sealed away our queen! The Duel Spirit queen was almost killed and her soul was sealed away. She did nothing wrong!" yelled Avitar.

 

"Using the last of her strength before she was imprisoned by you demons, she give peace to the few remaining Duel Spirits and opened the eyes of the evil ones!" said Obelisk. "She feared one day something like this could happen again, so she sacrificed herself to give the Sacred Nine powers that would destroy the Duelists who betrayed her and her subjects. We decided we would take on our ultimate forms, revive our dead queen, create the army of Duel Spirits, and overthrow all Duelists!" yelled Uriahonoo.

 

"Sorry old friend, but I'm with them." came a voice. "Chaos Goddess you too?!" gasped Zeonark. "Correct. We are done as a team." replyed Chaos Goddess. "I too am done helping you. The Crimson Devil will no longer work along side you or any Duelist!" bellowed Scar Red Nova Dragon. "Now my Duel Spirit is revolting! We have to do something or else everyone's Duel Spirits will become members of the Sacred Nine's army!" said Bakupenguin. Meanwhile "Its good to be free." said Dark Magician of Chaos. "What the?! Whats going on?!" gasped Supreme Gamemaster. "I'm flying solo now." replyed DMoC. "We don't help you meanies anymore!" snapped Peteit Dragon. "You too?!" yelled Cookie Cook Sodapop. "My my, this is getting worse by the second." chuckled Sushi. "Boss?" said Cookie. "It seems most Duel Spirits are rebeling." sighed Junk Raver. "You must defeat your Duel Spirits, then they may come to their senses." responded Sushi. Meanwhile "As we speak, Duel Spirit all over the organization of YCM are turning against their masters!" giggled Uriahonoo.

 

 

ch4 broken

 

"Kuri." said Kuribow. "We have no intention of turning traitor." agreed Eria the Water Charmer. "Kuribow!" said Dfgk101 happily.

"Eria" said Jolta. "At least some of them are still here." sighed Jord200 in relief. "Lucky for you guys." hissed Clair. "Later Clair." grinned Archlord Krystia. "How amusing. Shall we begin?"" asked Uriahonoo. "I'm going to make you wake up Uria." said Jord200. "Duel!" yelled Jord200 and Uriahonoo.

 

Uriahonoo's turn 1 LP4000

"I play five cards facedown, I end my turn." said Uriahonoo.

 

Jord200's turn 2 LP4000

"Again? Your getting a little predictable. I play one card facedown, and I summon Paladin of the Cursed Dragon! Attack!" said Jord200. "I acivate Shadow Spell! Now Paladin of the Cursed Dragon can't attack and it loses 700 ATK." giggled Uriahonoo.

 

Uriahonoo's turn 3 LP4000

"Trap monster! Embodiment of Aphopis! Slaughter his paladin!" Uriahonoo yelled. "Big deal." muttered Jord200.

 

Jord200's turn 4 LP3600

"I summon out my Quillbolt Hedgehogg in Defense. I also activate Zombie World." said Jord200.

 

Uriahonoo's turn 5 LP4000

"I play one card facedown. Destroy his monster!" said Uriahonoo. Quillbolt Hedgehog is destroyed.

 

Jord200's turn 6 LP3600

"I activate Ultimate Offering!." said Jord200. "Then I activate these! Trap monsters! Metal Reflect Slime and Skull Zoma!" giggled Uriahonoo. "I summon Plaugespreader Zombie! Next I pay 500 Life Points to summon Blood Sucker! Since I control a Tuner I can Special Summon Quillbolt Hedgehog! Next I tune Plaugespreader Zombie with Blood Sucker and Quillbolt to Synchro Summon Vampire King Dragon!" yelled Jord200. "I'm not famillar with that card." said Uriahonoo. "Must be a card he made." said Cookiecook. "Oh yeah, I forgot Vice Moderators are allowed to use up to three cards they have made, in their decks." agreed Clair.

 

Vampire King Dragon DARK LV8 ATK2800 DEF800

Zombie/Synchro/Effect

1 Zombie Tuner + 2 or more Non Tuner monsters

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard to have this card gain ATK equal to the ATK of the monster removed from play, until the End Phase. This is destroyed if there is no Field Spell on the Field.

 

"I remove from play Paladin of the Cursed Dragon to increase Vampire King Dragon's ATK by 1900, making it 4700!" said Jord200 with a grin. "Uhoh." muttered Uriahonoo. "Destroy Aphopis!" yelled Jord200. Uriahonoo's Life Points dropped to 900.

 

Uriahonoo's turn 7 LP900

"Hahahahaha! I'm impressed! I didn't think you could deal that much damage! Now I think I'll bring out my trump card! I activate another Metal Reflect Slime. Then I send to the Graveyard my three Trap Monsters to summon Uria, Lord of Searing Flames! Allow me to explain something. I'm only a part of Uria. The Uria you know is a weak version of the real Uria. Why? All nine of the Sacred Nine had their power halved. We are the keys to opening the true power that our card forms had sealed away! Before I forget, yes Uria, Hamon, Raviel are boys. Now since there is a Field Spell in play and Uria is on my Field, I can remove from play one Continous Trap in my Graveyard to summon myself! Come forth Tuner Monster Uriahonoo, Princess of Searing Flames!" laughed Uriahonoo. "A Tuner?!" said Jord200. "I have a very bad feeling." said Opal. "What should we do?" asked Princess Kitty. "I'm not sure." replyed Bakupenguin. "We wait and hope for the best." answered Roxas. "I knew Uria would be the first to unlock his true form." laughed Hamonia. "Exactly. Here's your $20 for our bet." grumbled Dreadroot.

 

 

"I tune myself with Uria. The Searing Flame Lord's true power returns when the seal is broken. Unleashing an unstopable power!" chanted Uriahonoo. A fireball appeared and consumed Uria and Uriahonoo. "I really don't like where this is going." said Jord200. "Synchro Summon!" came a booming voice from the flames. "Oh crap." gasped Jord200. "This just go bad." said Opal. "I suppose that means my Hamon has the same amount of power as Uria." said Larxene. "Not the time." replyed Roxas. "Wow." said Princess Kitty. "Yeah, that pretty much sums it up." said Bakupengiun. "I am reborn! Uria, Diety of Sacred Fire!" laughed Uria.

 

Uria, Deity of Sacred Fire

Level 12 FIRE ATK-0 DEF-0

Pyro/Synchro/Effect

 

1 "Searing Flames Tuner" + "Uria, Lord of Searing Flames

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. This card gains 1200 ATK and DEF for every Continuous Trap Card in both player's Graveyard. This card is uneffected by Trap Cards.

 

"My ATK is 4800! I attack!" laughed Uria. Jord200 yelled in pain as the attack destroyed his monster. It was almost as if the attack was real and inflicting real damage. Jord200 LP1400 "Make your move if your still able."" snickered Uria.

 

Jord200's turn 8 LP1400

"I....I...." wheezed Jord200 in pain. "I'm amazed your still able to continue." said Uria. "I....summ..on." Jord200 colasped. "Well I can't finish this your out cold." said Uria as he vanished. "Jord200!" yelled Opal. "Get a doctor imediantly!" ordered Roxas.

 

 

ch5 the vacation

 

"Hey! Hey, are you ok?" came a girl's voice. "Where am I?" groaned Jord200. "The Duel Spirit world." said the voice. "What?!" Who are you?" said Jord200 suprised. "I'm a Duel spirit. Your Duel Spirit. Uria, Obelisk, and Avitar are your cards. They just happem to have Duel Spirits. I am your true Duel Spirit. I am Vampire Lady" said Vampire Lady. "How do I now I can trust you?" aksed Jord200. "Do you think you can trust me? What was the card you were drawing when you passed out?" replyed Vampire Lady. "It was you." murmered Jord200 after a brief pause. "Yes." said Vampire Lady. "Thank you. Sorry I didn't trust you." said Jord200. "Quite alright. Just do me a favor and wake up. Your friends are worried." giggled Vampire Lady.

 

 

 

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don't worry Jolta' date=' your in it. I promise. everyone in Youkai Academy is in it. I've been busy. I know chapter 1 was kinda short, but I felt like this was a good spot end the chapter. I hope for chapter 2 to be up later today.

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sweet

even im in it!!!!

i love this story!!!!

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