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Username: DeathlyFiend

 

Your Characters: Hiran, Shinkan, Akumu, Lucifer, DeathlyFiend

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

"What shall I begin with? A simple attack or shall we negotiate a peace-treaty?"

-one minute later-

"No answer? You must be someone who does not care what will happen, and since no answer has occurred, I will take the first strike"

*Grabs a throwing star from the pouch on his thigh and aims it at his opponen*

"For now, I plan on going easy on you until you finally pick an option that I have given you"

*I throw the knife aiming at my opponent's head, it misses, but it cuts off a streak of hair off of the top of his head*

"It appears as you do not want a fight either, your actions have told me. If you choose nothing, then I will let you live for now."

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Username: DeathlyFiend

 

Your Characters: Hiran, Shinkan, Akumu, Lucifer, DeathlyFiend

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

"What shall I begin with? A simple attack or shall we negotiate a peace-treaty?"

-one minute later-

"No answer? You must be someone who does not care what will happen, and since no answer has occurred, I will take the first strike"

*Grabs a throwing star from the pouch on his thigh and aims it at his opponen*

"For now, I plan on going easy on you until you finally pick an option that I have given you"

*I throw the knife aiming at my opponent's head, it misses, but it cuts off a streak of hair off of the top of his head*

"It appears as you do not want a fight either, your actions have told me. If you choose nothing, then I will let you live for now."

Denied.

 

You have to do it via the advanced format guidelines. See the RP section for further details.

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Username: DeathlyFiend

 

Your Characters: Hiran, Shinkan, Akumu, Lucifer, DeathlyFiend

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

"What shall I begin with? A simple attack or shall we negotiate a peace-treaty?"

-one minute later-

"No answer? You must be someone who does not care what will happen, and since no answer has occurred, I will take the first strike"

*Grabs a throwing star from the pouch on his thigh and aims it at his opponen*

"For now, I plan on going easy on you until you finally pick an option that I have given you"

*I throw the knife aiming at my opponent's head, it misses, but it cuts off a streak of hair off of the top of his head*

"It appears as you do not want a fight either, your actions have told me. If you choose nothing, then I will let you live for now."

 

It's in first person, but...

 

It basically has to be written like it's out of a book. I'm not asking you to be Shakespeare or anything (I don't think poems are allowed XD) but at least write like it is a school project and you really want a good grade on it.

 

Basically formatted like this, for example:

 

 

His enemy stood his ground firmly, a malicious grin spreading over his face.

 

"What shall we begin with, hmm? A simple attack, or perhaps you will surrender?"

 

I didn't answer. Answering to some fool such as this was above me.

 

"No answer? How rude. You mustn't care about the outcome of this battle, and since you do not speak I will take the honor of striking first." The fiendish man grabbed a throwing star from his cloth pouch on his thigh, his grin starting to fade away.

 

"I'm going to go easy on you until you decide, you know."

 

I have had enough of this fools cocky attitude. I grab a knife from my belt and throw it at him as hard as I could. To my dissatisfaction it missed, but not without cutting a lock of hair from his head.

 

"Oh dear, you seem to have cut some of my hair off."

 

Sorry if you find errors, that was a quickie.

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A mysterious figure had just appeared out of no where, I was scared, I did not know what to do so I grabbed a knife for the pouch on the side of my thigh.

 

"Hello there, can I help you with anything?" I said.

 

No reply came from him, but a smile did take form on the tip of his mouth. He got into a stance that seemed to be for attack and not defense. Since he got into a formation, I also grabbed another knife from my pouch to protect myself.

 

"You seem to be defensive of many things, but what would happen if you had nothing to be scared off?"

 

I thought about what he had said. If I had nothing to be scared of, then why would I even fight? I though long and hard on this saying, then in a flash a though occurred. If I would not be scared of anything, then I would have no reason to keep on fighting.

 

"You are right, I would have no reason to be defensive. But I would also have no reason to keep on fighting."

 

I put my knives back into the pouch and I began to take off

 

"Thank you, now I have found my reason for fighting."

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And the rules are a bit different as well. I generally decide on ones that promote fairness (usually), but the main rule is, don't god mod. It's a generally unsaid rule that will ALWAYS apply.

 

The only reason I'd switch the numbers round Nex, is because right now I have to remember them all. And I vaguely have them lined up, but, not all of them. At least, I DO remember the specific powers.

 

Although, as a warning to those who face me and are not fond of Body Horror, I'd strongly dissuade from choosing Stanza #10.

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[spoiler=App]Username: Striker

 

Your Characters: Narhan, Jonathan, Light Bringer, and Swift Death

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

Anoki walks into a dim-lit room. He looks around the room searching for any sign of life, but nothing appeared to even twich. Just then, a soft buzz goes by his head. He figures it was just a fly and proceeds to exit the room. He was getting irritated by the fact that after hours of searching, he found nothing. Sweat was pouring down his chest and he felt like his legs were going to collapse. He decided to check the ball room down the hall. Just as he entered the room, a sniper's bullet grazed his leg. Anoki checked his leg and found blood seeping through his pants. "Who the hell did that?!" yelled Anoki.

 

"Well, well, well," said a mysterious voice. "I thought you would never show up." Suddenly, a shadow appeared from the balcony and jumped to the ground below. "So, what brings you here Anoki?"

 

"You know why I'm here Zaniki," said Anoki as he pulled his sword out. "Now, what will it be? Do you want a painless death or a slow and painful death." Anoki knew what the answer was going to be, it was the same everytime. His leg was still bleeding, but he knew that would be the least of his worries. "Well, what is it?"

 

"I rather die fighting than die giving up." Zaniki pulled out a machine gum and started shooting ferociously at Anoki. Anoki pulls out his sword and blocks the bullets, but one manages to hit the wound on his leg.

 

"You should of known that a true warrior doesn't need a gun. You are pathetic Zaniki!" Anoki gathers his breath and jumps onto the balcony above them.

 

"Oh am I? Well then, how about this!" Zaniki pulled out his katana, jumpped up onto the balcony, and proceeded to slash at Anoki not realizing he revealed an opening at the end of each slash.

 

"Nice try!" Anoki capitalized on an opening in Zaniki's slashed and stabbed him in the chest. Zaniki then fell to the floor bleeding from his chest. "You had this coming brother. Oh, and happy birthday."

 

 

I fixed the errors Kindred pointed out.

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A mysterious figure had just appeared out of no where, I was scared, I did not know what to do so I grabbed a knife for the pouch on the side of my thigh.

 

"Hello there, can I help you with anything?" I said.

 

No reply came from him, but a smile did take form on the tip of his mouth. He got into a stance that seemed to be for attack and not defense. Since he got into a formation, I also grabbed another knife from my pouch to protect myself.

 

"You seem to be defensive of many things, but what would happen if you had nothing to be scared off?"

 

I thought about what he had said. If I had nothing to be scared of, then why would I even fight? I though long and hard on this saying, then in a flash a though occurred. If I would not be scared of anything, then I would have no reason to keep on fighting.

 

"You are right, I would have no reason to be defensive. But I would also have no reason to keep on fighting."

 

I put my knives back into the pouch and I began to take off

 

"Thank you, now I have found my reason for fighting."

...?

What the....

 

Isn't that basic logic?

 

"If nothing bad show up you dun have to hit it."

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What the....

 

Isn't that basic logic?

 

"If nothing bad show up you dun have to hit it."

Well, it was a person who had shown defensive fear against something that had no reason to take charge. The person who had no reason to take charge was trying to get the guy to stand down and stop trying to protect something for no reason, if someone does not seem dangerous do not attack, even if at first you have the wrong idea, look at the situation and then plan your action.

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It's in first person, but...

 

It basically has to be written like it's out of a book. I'm not asking you to be Shakespeare or anything (I don't think poems are allowed XD) but at least write like it is a school project and you really want a good grade on it.

 

Basically formatted like this, for example:

 

 

 

Sorry if you find errors, that was a quickie.

 

ONLY ADMINS ARE ALLOWED TO REVIEW NEW MEMBER APPLICATIONS!!!11!!!!1!!

 

Lucky20Star20Hands.gif

 

 

But it's okay really... I don't mind... as long as you don't accept them yourself I guess...

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[spoiler=App]Username: Striker

 

Your Characters: Narhan, Jonathan, Light Bringer, and Swift Death

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

Anoki walks into a dim-lit room. He looks around the room searching for any sign of life, but nothing appeared to even twich. Just then, a soft buzz goes by his head. He figures it was just a fly and proceeds to exit the room. He was getting irritated by the fact that after hours of searching, he found nothing. Sweat was pouring down his chest and he felt like his legs were going to collapse. He decided to check the ball room down the hall. Just as he entered the room, a sniper's bullet grazed his leg. Anoki checked his leg and found blood seeping through his pants. "Who the hell did that?!" yelled Anoki.

 

"Well, well, well," said a mysterious voice. "I thought you would never show up." Suddenly, a shadow appeared from the balcony and jumped to the ground below. "So, what brings you here Anoki?"

 

"You know why I'm here Zaniki," said Anoki as he pulled his sword out. "Now, what will it be? Do you want a painless death or a slow and painful death." Anoki knew what the answer was going to be, it was the same everytime. His leg was still bleeding, but he knew that would be the least of his worries. "Well, what is it?"

 

"I rather die fighting than die giving up." Zaniki pulled out a machine gum and started shooting ferociously at Anoki. Anoki pulls out his sword and blocks the bullets, but one manages to hit the wound on his leg.

 

"You should of known that a true warrior doesn't need a gun. You are pathetic Zaniki!" Anoki gathers his breath and jumps onto the balcony above them.

 

"Oh am I? Well then, how about this!" Zaniki pulled out his katana, jumpped up onto the balcony, and proceeded to slash at Anoki not realizing he revealed an opening at the end of each slash.

 

"Nice try!" Anoki capitalized on an opening in Zaniki's slashed and stabbed him in the chest. Zaniki then fell to the floor bleeding from his chest. "You had this coming brother. Oh, and happy birthday."

 

 

I fixed the errors Kindred pointed out.

 

Try 3. No one took notice of it. If this doesn't get accepted, I'll try again in a week or two.

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ONLY ADMINS ARE ALLOWED TO REVIEW NEW MEMBER APPLICATIONS!!!11!!!!1!!

 

Lucky20Star20Hands.gif

 

 

But it's okay really... I don't mind... as long as you don't accept them yourself I guess...

Okay, we can wait for Pizza to get online and accept Striker.

 

Any moment now.

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