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[Proto]

I quite honestly don't like D&D so, no thanks

Oh the irony.

 

 

I'm totally all for a D&D thing, just so long as it won't require me to travel long distance or always be on at the same time as everyone else is.basically as long as I can make posts about it and not sit here for 5-7 hours into the night on Mondays -Thursdays.

Eh, it's basically just in preperation right now.

[Sploda]

Well I'm interested, so keep me informed.

[Jake the Sage]

How is that ironic?

[Proto]

How is that ironic?

You refer to roleplays as RPGs

 

Yet you dislike D&D

[Sploda]

Which is why I've been trying to subtly correct you Jake.

 

a RP is a Role-Play

a RPG is a Role-Playing GAME

 

SoP is a RP

D&D is a RPG

[Jake the Sage]

Oh yeah . . . I just do that as a habit ^^;

 

but I tried actually playing it once, not a fun time B |

[Nathanael D. Striker]

[spoiler=App]Username: Striker

 

Your Characters: Narhan, Jonathan, Light Bringer, and Swift Death

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

Anoki walks into a dim-lit room. He looks around the room searching for any sign of life, but nothing appeared to even twich. Just then, a soft buzz goes by his head. He figures it was just a fly and proceeds to exit the room. He was getting irritated by the fact that after hours of searching, he found nothing. Sweat was pouring down his chest and he felt like his legs were going to collapse. He decided to check the ball room down the hall. Just as he entered the room, a sniper's bullet grazes his leg. "Who the hell did that?!" yelled Anoki.

 

"Well, well, well," said a mysterious voice. "I thought you would never show up." Suddenly, a shadow appeared from the balcony and jumped to the ground below. "So, what brings you here Anoki?"

 

"You know why I'm here Riku," said Anoki as he pulled his sword out. "Now, what will it be, a painless death or a slow and painful death." Anoki knew what the answer was going to be, it was the same everytime. His leg was still bleeding, but he knew that would be the least of his worries. "Well, what is it?"

 

"I rather die fighting than die giving up." Riku pointed his gun at Anoki and started shooting. Anoki jumped up onto the nearby balcony.

 

"You should of knew that a true warrior doesn't need a gun. You are pathetic Riku!"

 

"Oh am I? Well then, how about this!" Riku pulled out his katana, jumpped up onto the balcony, and proceeded to slash at Anoki.

 

"Nice try!" Anoki capitalized on an opening in Riku's slashed and stabbed hum in the chest. Riku then fell to the floor bleeding from his chest. "Happy birthday, brother."

 

 

I giving it another go.

[Sploda]

1. Try something more original than Riku.

2. What glaring opening is there in a simple slash?

3. That is a horrible birthday gift.

4. lrn2beepicinfights

[Lunar Origins]

[spoiler=App]Username: Striker

 

Your Characters: Narhan, Jonathan, Light Bringer, and Swift Death

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

Anoki walks into a dim-lit room. He looks around the room searching for any sign of life, but nothing appeared to even twich. Just then, a soft buzz goes by his head. He figures it was just a fly and proceeds to exit the room. He was getting irritated by the fact that after hours of searching, he found nothing. Sweat was pouring down his chest and he felt like his legs were going to collapse. He decided to check the ball room down the hall. Just as he entered the room, a sniper's bullet grazes his leg. "Who the hell did that?!" yelled Anoki.

 

"Well, well, well," said a mysterious voice. "I thought you would never show up." Suddenly, a shadow appeared from the balcony and jumped to the ground below. "So, what brings you here Anoki?"

 

"You know why I'm here Riku," said Anoki as he pulled his sword out. "Now, what will it be, a painless death or a slow and painful death." Anoki knew what the answer was going to be, it was the same everytime. His leg was still bleeding, but he knew that would be the least of his worries. "Well, what is it?"

 

"I rather die fighting than die giving up." Riku pointed his gun at Anoki and started shooting. Anoki jumped up onto the nearby balcony.

 

"You should of knew that a true warrior doesn't need a gun. You are pathetic Riku!"

 

"Oh am I? Well then, how about this!" Riku pulled out his katana, jumpped up onto the balcony, and proceeded to slash at Anoki.

 

"Nice try!" Anoki capitalized on an opening in Riku's slashed and stabbed hum in the chest. Riku then fell to the floor bleeding from his chest. "Happy birthday, brother."

 

 

I giving it another go.

 

First bold: NO REACTION????????????????????????

 

Second: Reword pl0x, and it is a question. Show me the ?'s!

 

All of the rest bolded: Grammatical Errors, or should be reworded.

 

Also:

 

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1. Try something more original than Riku.

2. What glaring opening is there in a simple slash?

3. That is a horrible birthday gift.

4. lrn2beepicinfights

 

Oh, harsh.

[The Warden]

What Jake said is true, writing is rather easy when everything is in your ballpark. The only thing that makes it hard is when you get Writer's Block. Roleplaying forces you to change your plans regularly, well, not always change, but you will certainly be altering your plans fairly often.

 

(Also Fusion, if you want a 1v1, I'm free)

[Headmaster Monokuma]

[spoiler=App]Username: Striker

 

Your Characters: Narhan, Jonathan, Light Bringer, and Swift Death

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

Anoki walks into a dim-lit room. He looks around the room searching for any sign of life, but nothing appeared to even twich twitch. Just then, a soft buzz goes by his head. He figures it was just a fly and proceeds to exit the room. He was getting irritated by the fact that after hours of searching, he found nothing. Sweat was pouring down his chest and he felt like his legs were going to collapse. He decided to check the ball room down the hall. Just as he entered the room, a sniper's bullet grazes his leg. "Who the hell did that?!" yelled Anoki.

 

"Well, well, well," said a mysterious voice. "I thought you would never show up." Suddenly, a shadow appeared from the balcony and jumped to the ground below. "So, what brings you here Anoki?"

 

"You know why I'm here Riku," said Anoki as he pulled his sword out. "Now, what will it be, a painless death or a slow and painful death." Anoki knew what the answer was going to be, it was the same everytime every time. His leg was still bleeding, but he knew that would be the least of his worries. "Well, what is it?"

 

"I rather die fighting than die giving up." Riku pointed his gun at Anoki and started shooting. Anoki jumped up onto the nearby balcony.

 

"You should of knew that a true warrior doesn't need a gun. You are pathetic Riku!"

 

"Oh am I? Well then, how about this!" Riku pulled out his katana, jumpped jumped up onto the balcony, and proceeded to slash at Anoki.

 

"Nice try!" Anoki capitalized on an opening in Riku's slashed and stabbed hum in the chest. Riku then fell to the floor bleeding from his chest. "Happy birthday, brother."

 

 

I giving it another go.

 

Striker, you have a bad case of showing.

 

"a sniper's bullet grazes his leg."

Instead of just stating that, you could have easily described the pain or something... Also, his reaction... Seems a little... Quiet for someone who had just been shot. I would have even accepted, "Was I just shot?!" from someone.

 

'"I rather die fighting than die giving up."'

The statement was a little odd. Maybe just take out the end there and it's a little better.

 

You also switched between tenses a bit. I've done it before, but it's not something you want to do. It's just pure inconsistent.

 

You had a few spelling problems, but they weren't too bad. Most of them looked like minor keyboard problems... Which leads me to believe you may not have proofread your app.

 

Last, it was bland. The characters, the situation... It wasn't "bad" but it wasn't great.

 

Honestly, I'm suspending my judgment on this one. It's for the others to decide.

[Jake the Sage]

Wow even the new person, Kindred is reviewing the works quite nicely ^^ I think he'll be a good member for a long time

Striker I'd review your work . . . but three people have already beaten me too it so I think I'll pass this time around.

 

Fusion I am also up for a one-on-one roleplay if you want, or maybe you, Broken and I can have a one-on-three or whatever

no homo |3

[Blake]

Kindred's a chick, Jake, or so she claims.

 

@Striker: All of the above. Denied, for now.

[Jake the Sage]

Kindred's a chick, Jake, or so she claims.

 

*looks at Kindred's profile*

 

Nu-uh!

Says "Not Telling" so until s/he puts it officially s/he is a guy in my book . . . unless proven otherwise by personality or actual proof

[Lunar Origins]

hahaha

 

Sorry guys, I tend to be a nazi when it comes to grammar, and I just love pointing out mistakes ;)

 

Makes me good inside when I take things apart like that!

 

and now I will post in blue.

 

anyone know a good ACTIVE rp I may join?

[Fusion X. Denver]

Hm, who to fight...

I guess it doesn't really matter who I fight, so long as I improve afterward.

What kind of conditions would you want set for such a match?

[Lunar Origins]

Hm, who to fight...

I guess it doesn't really matter who I fight, so long as I improve afterward.

What kind of conditions would you want set for such a match?

 

Fight? Your logic is puzzling...

 

What kind of fight are you talking about? An "RP" fight?

[The Warden]

Yeah, we do those from time to time, instead of just watching Jake & Shadow b***h at each other. My only real rule is that I prefer to have a bit of fun, so, I let people choose my Stanza, except #13, I save that for special occasions.

[Lunar Origins]

Yeah, we do those from time to time, instead of just watching Jake & Shadow b***h at each other. My only real rule is that I prefer to have a bit of fun, so, I let people choose my Stanza, except #13, I save that for special occasions.

 

Relatively new, isn't a stanza (well, basically) a "paragraph" in a poem?

 

AND GRATS ON OVER 9000 POSTS!!!!

[The Warden]

*Bangs head on desk* Thanks...

 

In the RP fights, we use our RP Persona, if Shadow posts a bit more you'll see what I mean. Our Persona(s) generally have a good deal of powers, or skills. Creator's Persona is that of a genius designer and engineer, creator of 'Manatech' and his 'Moonstone Cannon'. In truth, our Persona could be different from how we really are. The further you roleplay, the more you'll be able to shape your own Persona. It's kinda sad, but all in good fun.

 

Second explanation, I have seperated my power set into 14, Stanzas 0 through 13. Naturally, #0 & #13 are the most powerful, just like how the first & last Stanzas of a poem are the clinchers. I let people decide purely by number, I could be put at a disadvantage, or to a monstrous advantage, monstrous having more meaning than one in one of my Stanzas.

[Lunar Origins]

*Bangs head on desk* Thanks...

 

In the RP fights, we use our RP Persona, if Shadow posts a bit more you'll see what I mean. Our Persona(s) generally have a good deal of powers, or skills. Creator's Persona is that of a genius designer and engineer, creator of 'Manatech' and his 'Moonstone Cannon'. In truth, our Persona could be different from how we really are. The further you roleplay, the more you'll be able to shape your own Persona. It's kinda sad, but all in good fun.

 

Second explanation, I have seperated my power set into 14, Stanzas 0 through 13. Naturally, #0 & #13 are the most powerful, just like how the first & last Stanzas of a poem are the clinchers. I let people decide purely by number, I could be put at a disadvantage, or to a monstrous advantage, monstrous having more meaning than one in one of my Stanzas.

 

I like your Stanza mindset you have going on. It's really intriguing.

 

And thanks for explaining the RP fights a bit. If I could Rep you, I would, but I can't so heres 20 points...

[The Warden]

You didn't need to do that, no seriously, I have no idea what to do with them either.

 

But since you're both newbies, perhaps Jake could referee a match between you and Fusion.

 

PS, thanks for the compliment. I worked hard on them, with some help from Nex.

[Nexev]

*looks at Kindred's profile*

 

Nu-uh!

Says "Not Telling" so until s/he puts it officially s/he is a guy in my book . . . unless proven otherwise by personality or actual proof

This club is hypocritical.

 

@BH: Yeah he had most of them done but I filled in a few, the stanzas can be pretty odd as a result. So you really have no clue what you'd be up against if you fight BH.

 

Especially if he simply decides to start shuffling numbers around to keep people guessing.

[Sploda]

@Broken

The fact that you remembered enough to use my 'Persona' as an example is impressive.

 

@Kindred

Reps and points don't really matter anymore to any of us. We do like things that look cool to put in our sigs though.

 

@Fusion

I'd face you as well, but I have this issue with not knowing how to hold back.

 

So you'd probably face a dumbed-down Enzax. (Not your Enzax, the original Enzax).

 

Also if you do fight, I want to watch so send the PM to me as well.

[Lunar Origins]

 

@Kindred

Reps and points don't really matter anymore to any of us. We do like things that look cool to put in our sigs though.

 

 

 

 

 

So, eh... my gift to the club, hope you like!