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Oh please . . . I am confident enough, however instead of a pink pony I'd rather emphasize it with something just as bad ass (=u=)

 

Her name is Pinkie Pie, she is capable of stopping swarms of monsters who were so numerous that the best efforts of a maga (who has been shown to be able to defeat GIANT BEARS) a super fast tomboy who can break the sound barrier, a professional rancher cowgirl thing, and a person who made a dragon s*** it's pants. She has been shown to have access to knowledge no other characters have. She is clarivoyant. Oh and she is the physical incarnation of one of six forces that were so powerful that they once sealed a goddess into a giant piece of rock for over a thousand years.

 

She has also been able to defy physics whenever convenient. Appearing as a REFLECTION IN THE MIRROR once.

 

She OWNS you.

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Username: Striker

 

Your Characters: Narhan, Jonathan, Light Bringer, and Swift Death

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

Anoki walks into a dim-lit room. He looks around the room searching for any sign of life, but nothing appeared to even twich. Just then, a soft buzz goes by his head. He figures it was just a fly and proceeds to exit the room. He was getting irritated by the fact that after hours of searching, he found nothing. Sweat was pouring down his chest and he felt like his legs were going to collapse. He decided to check the ball room down the hall. Just as he entered the room, a sniper's bullet grazes his leg. "Who the hell did that?!" yelled Anoki.

 

"Well, well, well," said a mysterious voice. "I thought you would never show up." Suddenly, a shadow appeared from the balcony and jumped to the ground below. "So, what brings you here Anoki?"

 

"You know why I'm here," said Anoki as he pulled his sword out. "Now, what will it be, a painless death or a slow and painful death." Anoki knew what the answer was going to be, it was the same everytime. His leg was still bleeding, but he knew that would be the least of his worries. "Well, what is it?"

 

I was pushed on time, so I couldn't finished.

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Huh. Am I still a mod here...? Oh well~

 

Username: Striker

 

Your Characters: Narhan, Jonathan, Light Bringer, and Swift Death

 

A GOOD RP Sample:

Swift Death walks into a dim-lit room. He doesn't see much, but enough to know that his target is nowhere in sight. Just then, a soft buzz goes by his head and he quickly turns his head to see what it was. What was that? He decided to investigate it. Just as he took a step, a sniper's bullet grazes his pants. "Who the he'll did that?!" yelled Swift. The person who shot the bullet got up and ran away. Swift tried to follow him, but got lost in the maze of a house.

 

 

I hope you like my sample.

 

Alright! So the only problem with this is your sample. It only has 5 sentences... But about 3 are fragments and some of the grammar is choppy. The requirement is 6 lines (or rather sentences), so try and redo this with a little more detail and flow. ^^

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