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zzuxon Newbie

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Sorry kid, but the riles clearly state the your rp sample has to be on the spot.

 

ALSO! When rping you should only have points where a character is talking at the beginning and end of a paragraph, not in between.

 

For separate characters that are speaking one after the other, you should have separate lines for them.

 

Sorry, but you fail. But please, feel free to try again.

I don't understand what you are talking about.

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I don't understand what you are talking about.

 

[spoiler=example 1]

Shadow leapt from building to building, looking for his target. It had been two whole months now since he had been given his mission to find and destroy the one who called himself Striker for his many crimes. Sighing to himself, shadow complained, and not for the first time saying "I can't believe I have to deal with that self absorbed prick again."

 

Still, he couldn't possibly have turned down this mission, because others had constantly failed in the same mission due to some god mode ability that Striker was using. It was of course, forbidden, but Striker just wouldn't get the message. As Shadow was consumed by these thoughts yet again, and not for the first time, he stopped on a particular building in the games section of YCM called My Hill. It was the only place where Striker thought that he could feel safe, and the one place he was hoping to avoid since it had seemed that Striker had formed an alliance with a friend of his by the name of Mr.Wham with the goal of taking over YCM. The fools. The only thing their efforts would lead them to was their own self destruction, why couldn't the see this? Snapping himself out of his own line of thought, Shadow jumped off of the top of the building and slid down the wall of it, eventually reaching the front door. It could no longer be avoided. It was time to put an end to this once and for all, even if it meant losing a friend in the process.

 

 

 

[spoiler=example 2]

Shadow walked into my hill and found that inside the building it seemed as though he were outside in an area filled with hills and green grass. Sighing, he went to the one where he knew Wham would be hiding with Wham, since he had more then once been invited to this place. He was however, hoping that he would never have to come here, as he despised this place and the person who had made it. As he got close to the hill where he knew Striker and Wham to be, approaching and entering the door that led inside, he could hear voices from further in.

 

"I'm telling you, it's the only way that we'll stand a chance against them."

 

"And I'm telling YOU that it won't lead to anything good. I may be given grief on occasion of my Mr.Christ powers, but you are just simply taking it to far Striker."

 

Striker stood up and and began pacing, a crazed look in his eye. From what Shadow could see form his hiding spot, he was able to see that Striker had attained a crazed look in his eye, no unlike the one Proto had obtained when he used the Dark Chip even knowing that it would eventually destroy him. As he paced, Striker continued speaking to Mr,Wham, trying to make him understand his way of thinking. "The creator of YCM has godlike power in and of himself. The only way we can defeat him is to use our own God Mode. After that has been done, and YCMaker has fallen, WE will take his place as the rulers of this world, and make it a better place, in our image, the way we wanted to all this time, the way that it was meant to be! Don't you still want that Mr.Wham? Don't you still feel the same driving determination as when we first met?!"

 

Mr.Wham looked somberly up into the eyes of Striker, a man that he had counted as a friend and heaved a heavy sigh. "I admit that I did feel that way once before, but not anymore. I'm sorry Striker, but this just isn't working anymore. You are going into a place that I cannot follow."

 

Mr.Wham got up and looked at Striker, but did not meet his gaze. "I'm sorry Striker, but it's over. I'm leaving."

 

Mr.Wham started walking towards the door when Striker suddenly yelled out and unsheathed his Sword of Judgment, swinging it down on Mr.Wham. Suddenly, Shadow was there, blocking the blow with his Burai Blade and pushing Striker back. "Hello Striker, it's been a while."

 

Striker breathed heavily for a few seconds before straightening up, trying to make himself seem taller then he actually was, a smile plastered on his idiotic face. "Shadow. So good to see you. I trust that your being here means that you are finally able to join us?"

 

"Don't include me in your statements anymore Striker." Mr.Wham continuing to walk away from Striker as he headed out of My Hill. "There is no us anymore, and there never will be again."

 

Strikers face contorted in a barely unrestrained fury. He waited for Shadow to answer, who did saying "I have not come here to join you Striker. I have come here to destroy you."

 

Striker unleashed a yell of unrestrained fury and activated his god mode, suddenly appearing behind Shadow, having swung a single mighty slash with his Sword of Judgment without even giving Shadow any form of a chance to react, which was of course against the rules. However, Shadow was not struck down, but instead just stood there, the sword having fazed through him. Turning to look upon Striker who's eyes widened with surprise, Shadow merely shrugged his shoulders and said "Yeah, so I just used God Mode. Difference is that the limiter on me has been removed, and permission granted to use it to get rid of you. Sorry Striker, but this is the end."

 

Shadow and Strikers God Mode auras clashed with one another, growing larger and more out of control by the second. Fortunately Mr.Wham was already gone by this point, because after a few seconds more, My Hill experienced an explosion of energies that completely destroyed it as Shadow and Striker flew into the sky, each one determined to end the life of the other in a battle that would rage across the forums, equaling that of a struggle between Super Mods that had not been seen for many a year.

 

 

 

Sorry about the second one being kind of long, but I think this aptly illustrates the second and third points that I was making. As to my first point, making your rp sample up on the spot... *points to the two examples I just gave* That was on the spot writing right there. Just be sure to follow the points that I made and make sure that you're using proper grammar and you should be good for acceptance into RP820, as long as you don't cause any trouble.

 

@everyone else: So, what did you guys think of my bit of writing just then?

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Sploda Newbie

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@Zero

I meant that it obviously breaks the 4th wall and inserts what is normally a 2-dimensional setting into a 3-dimensional reality.

 

As for the RP I mentioned it 2 pages ago. The one I'll be placing on RPNexus.

 

Here is the post:

 

Fellow RPers, I need a moment of your time.

 

First a few Questions: How many of you have had a good solid RP? From what I can guess not many.

 

Any of you ever play D&D? Probably not.

 

How many of you are good writers? By the looks of it, most of you.

 

I am preparing to begin a sequel to an RP I had about a year ago on another site (I've hinted this to Fusion so he may know some of what I'm talking about) and I need RPers. This isn't going to be your run of the mill RP, I will not be hosting it here on YCM as it would just die. I'm looking for a dedicated group of RPers who want to see a good RP end.

 

This RP will take place 50 years after the first, that way all the old heroes aren't capable of making a return to steal the thunder and such. Some will still be around as NPCs that I may or may not call on. This RP will be OPEN ENDED, meaning the actions of the RPers will have to ultimate decision on how this ends. I will start the story from where it left off, but you all will write this story (Trying to avoid FFX references). I will reprise my role as the Primary antagonist for the heroes, but I will also RP as any NPCs you may encounter.

 

For those that have played D&D I'm the Dungeon Master, I control anything that isn't DIRECTLY related to your characters.

 

On the topic of characters I'm not putting any limits down. Go batsh*t insane on this, romantic, super freak, superhero, farmboy, I don't care. I will have a VERY extensive application posted on the OOC thread of the RP to be filled out and posted in that thread.

 

The RP shall be hosted here: http://rpnexus.forumotion.com/

 

This is Creator, ending Post. Hope to see you there.

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