R.P.820: A Club for RPers |_/[43 Members]\_| [~]

[Nexev]

First thing is Mini, nobody uses first person in rp's. It's out of place, and (at least in my opinion) is hard to read through without feeling a little...yeah.... <_< Use third person and you should be fine. After all, that's how all of the story's (at least most of the ones that I have read) are told, and rping is essentially acting out your part in a story.

 

@Jake: I'll help however I can, although I am not sure how much that'll be.

You? Tutor someone in the ways of rping?

 

El was wrong.

 

You ARE funny.

 

Not as funny as me, but hey, don't feel bad. Your like in 5th place on the funny scale.

 

First naturally being me, then second is me again since I'm that great, third is yet another me, and fourth is Spacejam.

 

.... D=

 

I, platonically, love Hazama! He is such a great troll, and a mold of great characters!

You just added that to spoil my fun!

 

Cheater! D;

[The Warden]

Eh, I may give her a few tips in originality, should the need arise.

[Jake the Sage]

Yeah well she's still a kid so I never expected her to have the same grammar skills as we do. But I'd appreciate it if everyone here'd help out with her. Think of her as the clubs kid sister for everyone if you have to X3

[Fusion X. Denver]

Kid?

A young child on YCM??

IMPOSSI-

*shot*

Alright bro, sure.

[Jake the Sage]

*whips blood off of shirt*

 

I keep forgetting not to shoot at such a close range XD

 

But yeah thanks.

[Fusion X. Denver]

It's cool. I used to have bad grammar when I joined here too.

I was in the "IMing" mindset of a normal teenager, so I made those types of posts.

Then I learned the differences with a forum (from Black actually) and set out to shape up in those areas.

And now here I am, suave and smexiness personifi-

*bifurcated* (we should make that a meme)

[Blake]

*Pulls back Lanza from Bifurcating Fusion*

 

That... and "Even the _____ know(s) how bad@$$ Red Nova Dragon is!"...

[Jake the Sage]

Ooookay . . . Black did you or did you not just attack Fusion? And on another note would you mind posting in SoP so we can get it finished?

[Fusion X. Denver]

Lol I said teacher instead of teenager.

Black, even Yliaster knows how bad@$$ Red Nova Dragon is!

It makes for a great sex slave for destruction.

[Jake the Sage]

Also Fusion I'd like to mention that the way I post now has, and has always been, the way I posted since I got here. I got a natural talent for writting so rpging comes easy for me.

[Blake]

... *Bifurcates Fusion*

 

No, Jack Atlas serves Red Nova Dragon...

 

Seriously, this is what will happen (Cherry-Senpai's words/I inspired it by saying Pulling a Charizard):

 

"Go! Red Nova Dragon!"

"Don't feel like it."

"What do you mean 'don't feel like it'?! I'm Jack effing Atlas! Do what I say or-"

*Burning Souls Jack*

[Fusion X. Denver]

Actually Black, I was referencing how Nova was being used as a pawn by Yliaster at the moment. And is wrapped up in bondage/

@Jake-Oh, well there you go then.

Were you on another forum before this one?

[Blake]

Actually Black, I was referencing how Nova was being used as a pawn by Yliaster at the moment. And is wrapped up in bondage/

@Jake-Oh, well there you go then.

Were you on another forum before this one?

..........................

 

*Bifurcates, again, for the Xth time in a short window of time*

[Jake the Sage]

Me? Nope X3 This is, tbh, the first rpging web site I have ever joined- RPU being the second.

 

So you can see what i mean by my grammar and writting ability being a natural talent.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Yes I can Jake, guess writing well comes naturally to some people and others it takes a while xP

@Black-I'm on a roll tonight!

I should go though, I need to finish my paper >.>

That was due an hour ago :/

Better start thinking up a sob story email for mercy..

[Jake the Sage]

Yeah I guess so Fusion XD Though I WILL admit when I first got here I did script format writting, though only for the character-to-character speaking. It would be a paragraph or so of descriptive writting and then something like this:

 

Jake, to Fusion: I like cheesecake XD

 

But when that went illegal wis easily changed to how I write today- which is, imo, a lot better and cleaner looking. But again it doesn't tkae much for me to write paragraph apon paragraph or things . . . as you oculd easily see in SoP I. Which, again, Andrew and I'd like a wee bit of help getting finished *coughBlackandeveryoneelsecough*

[Fusion X. Denver]

Dude, you've been asking that for weeks now..

If I were in it, I'd help >.>

But I was never familiar with the old format, the new one is the only one I've been exposed to.

The only difference I would think of being fine is 1st person, but 3rd makes things more clearer.

[Jake the Sage]

Yeah that is the only thing differen- at least for the most part. There was still a lot of people who didn't do a lot of descriptions like now.

 

Also I was more referring to Black, Tempest and yadda yadda

[Sploda]

1. Why is Fusion Wise?

2. Why is Black fading?

 

Oh and by the way, I'm back.

[Shadow Zero]

Yes, yes you are. And in answer to your avi, I think that you are the Creator. So what's new guy?

[Proto]

1. Why is Fusion Wise?

2. Why is Black fading?

 

Oh and by the way, I'm back.

I AM NOW A EMPEROR!

 

...Now give me my overdue upgrade!

[Sploda]

@Proto

*Rips processor and AI out and slams them into a similar body with an awesome new helmet*

 

There you go.

[Nexev]

Yes, yes you are. And in answer to your avi, I think that you are the Creator.

NOOO! REALLY?

 

I am completely blown away by this shocking revalation.

 

Wow. He's Creator and he is back? Really?

 

Huh.

[Sploda]

I'M CREATOR!?!?!?!

 

*faints from the shock*

 

Now seriously, Zero could you not do something like that right when I get back?

[Fusion X. Denver]

1. Why is Fusion Wise?

2. Why is Black fading?

 

Oh and by the way, I'm back.

 

1. I'm a wiseman. It was more obvious last year than now >.>

2. It sounded cool.