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Username: Black Diamond Duelist

Your Characters: Osanimu (x2), Ashmin (x2) Shikoya (x3, I think), Asiko, Assoka, Annabella, Leif, Kalin, Sera, Katana. (I hope that's all......) Just realised how many RP's that makes, Crap!

A GOOD RP Sample: Allyssa looked behind her, eyes wide open in fear, black hair falling lankly at her side. Noticing a movement, she leapt back, fear etched across her pale face. Glancing around wildly, she grabbed the nearest object, a cane, and bradished it, breath coming out in ragged gasps. After 2 terror-filled moments, her breath eased, and she calmed down, but she still looked afraid. When she placed the cane carefuly on a nearby table, she heard a sound.

A scream.

This scream wasn't like a normal scream; This one was inhuman, terrifying, paraliysing. As Allyssa went to reach for the cane again she discovered, horror of horros, that she couldn't move. The scream was truly paraliysing, and everytime it renewed strength Allyssa felt of power draining. After 5 of the blood curdling screams, Allyssa dimly realised that each scream made her feel sleepier. Struggling to keep her closing lids open, she again tried to reach the cane. But the moment she tried, she felt all her strength leave her body, and felt tired, so tired....... She felt a sharp pain shudder through her body, and managed to open one eye slightly, but all she could see was red.

The red of blood.

As conciousness fell further and further away from her grasp, and her eyes closed, Allyssa knew this was the end.

Then all went black.

 

I think my RP smaple is more like a paragraph/chapter of a book, but oh well.

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oH. tEMPEST LEFT,

 

gAVE aNDX HIS POSITION

I believe you're a little mixed up. When the club was remade Phantom was gone so the three co-owners were Tempest, Black and myself. I took Phantom's place, not Tempest's. I've had that position for awhile now. With Tempest gone the position has been given to Saint Dane by Black.

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I believe you're a little mixed up. When the club was remade Phantom was gone so the three co-owners were Tempest, Black and myself. I took Phantom's place, not Tempest's. I've had that position for awhile now. With Tempest gone the position has been given to Saint Dane by Black.

sORRY. JUST KINDA GOT A LITTLE CONFUSED,

 

sO MANY LEADER POSITIONS,,,,

 

yOU GONNA ACCEPT dIAMOND?

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sORRY. JUST KINDA GOT A LITTLE CONFUSED,

 

sO MANY LEADER POSITIONS,,,,

 

yOU GONNA ACCEPT dIAMOND?

It's fine.

 

Yeah, too many positions. Doesn't really mean much when it comes down to it.

 

Oh right, I need to get on that.

 

@Diamond: Interesting sample. It shows you can write and I think I've seen a few of your RP posts in an RP I've yet to really start posting in. Accepted. Dane's or Black's second approval will make it official.

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I meant to post my approval of Diamond's post in my last post. It slipped my mind. I do like the way it was written. However, I would suggest instead of using numbers to shorten it, spell it out. 2 = two, 5 = five, ect.

 

Accepted.

 

Why the f*** would you want to shorten an RP post.

 

Most people want to make it longer.

 

...*song plays in head*

 

......*thinks that Diamond's making some huge ass conspiracy.*

 

......

 

OBJECTION.

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Well, obviously, there is something entirely wrong with the defendants testimony.

 

Who shortens RP posts? Unless the post is massive, nobody shortens it. And that sample wasn't massive the slightest.

 

Oh yeah, you aren't seeing things.

 

Portsman is back, b****es.

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@Zero

Andx doesn't seem to have my Stat block anymore, as for the one in my sig Flandre was kind enough to make me one of her own since I can't scan myself (flaws in the Time-Space Continuum and whatnot).

That is a very temporary thing just so you know. With the link to my RP added in I felt my sig was getting just a little to big for my own tastes. Once the RP starts I'll take the link out and put the stats back in.

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