Nexev Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Yes shadow you can't use it. Sine that would be completely unimaginative since I already did it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 If you can write better, just do it. It's not like you need to copy something to able to write. @Black's "I'm the nice one" statement: You're lucky I'm not a co. "Sucks." "Sucks." "You suck." "This s*** is the reason why you're not accepted." "Go home." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Aren't we all just thee nicest people in the world? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Except for those of us who are not. (like Ice <_<) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 (like Ice <_<) Thanks for the compliment. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 ........... Scarshit! Duel, now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 ........... Scarshit! Duel, now! I don't want to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Orly? And just why is that? Afraid that you'll lose? Not surprising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Orly? And just why is that? Afraid that you'll lose? Not surprising. Pathetic attempt at trying to mock me so I'd duel you.I just have better things to do at the moment....I'd duel... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 .......Strange Scar, I don't ever recall you turning down a challenge before. =/ Is this perhaps a side effect of your intellectual side coming out? @thapurpleoaf: Nobody was talking to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I was kinda being sarcastic Shadow. The vast majority of us don't have a soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Then you fail at sarcasm, apparently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 .......Strange Scar, I don't ever recall you turning down a challenge before. =/ Is this perhaps a side effect of your intellectual side coming out? @thapurpleoaf: Nobody was talking to you. You obviously don't know me as well as you thought. Nobody likes me. Yeah!I was kinda being sarcastic Shadow. The vast majority of us don't have a soul. I knew it was sarcasm. It needed a question mark, though. And a few more "e"s in the word "the". Then you fail at sarcasm, apparently. Not really. Some tweaking here and there but they don't fail. Artemis Howls sucks at sarcasm. They actually use SARCASM TAGS. Morons these days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Saracasm tags, eh? Meh, whatever. So, what to talk about now.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Well, I've been taught that when you have a line of dialogue (And thoughts count, too), it gets a new paragraph. Then when another character speaks, their line gets a new paragraph. Multiple characters can't have dialogue in the same paragraph. So the line skipping is actually correct there. So here's my edit, keeping the paragraphs: [spoiler=My Edit, Paragraphs Maintained]Kiruha wandered around the halls of the museum, stopping to stare at every single thing. She wasn't interested in art; she simply liked the colors. Oh, this one's pretty! she thought to herself. She noticed the lady in the picture the most, and how she smiled. It was a subtle smile, yet it said a lot. She may have been hiding a secret. She seemed mysterious, with that smile. Simply pondering that smile caused her interest to increase tenfold. "This one's a classic," said a voice, from not too far away. A boy of no more than seventeen approached her and bowed. "I'm Haruki. And you are?" he asked in a gentleman like fashion. "I'm Kiruha," she responded, blushing, "This is a classic, you say?" "It's called the Mona Lisa," he explained, "It was painted by an Florencian man named Leonardo da Vinci. He worked four years on it, and after he finished it, he died shortly after." "This is interesting! Tell me more." The two walked over to a nearby bench and sat down, and Haruki gave more information on the history of the famous painting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Multiple characters CAN speak in the same paragraph, just make it not jumbled =/ Maybe one line. Also, Each character gets their own paragraph. Multiple Dialogues/Thoughts can be in it. Still not the best sample... but, if you get one more approval, you are in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 .......Strange Scar, I don't ever recall you turning down a challenge before. =/ Is this perhaps a side effect of your intellectual side coming out? @thapurpleoaf: Nobody was talking to you. I get it now. Your rasict against purple. And Shadow stop it, just cause no one want's to play a card game with a stuck up brat who rubs it in there face when he gets a lucky break doesn't mean he's scared of you. I mean even Striker doesn't trash talk. >.> And yes. I went there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I get it now. Your rasict against purple. And Shadow stop it, just cause no one want's to play a card game with a stuck up brat who rubs it in there face when he gets a lucky break doesn't mean he's scared of you. I mean even Striker doesn't trash talk. >.> And yes. I went there.....About Striker.... he miiiggghhhttt be trying to join the roleplay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Sorry, I guess I got a bit carried away. I'll be more careful from now on. And my reason for wanting to duel Scar is because he and I have dueled before and I wanted a rematch, that's all. As for the reason for calling him scarshit, it all started back in the old Stardust Force, when he first came into existence and started calling me Shadshit. Edit:..................BURN THE WITCH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I do call him ShadShit, that was my nickname for him.Like StrikerShit, WarShit, ProtoShit, SaintShit and so on.But you do kind of gloat.Yeah. f***ing racist jerk. People being racist against purple. Does that include any shade or just Fonz'/Tempus' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Meh, I wasn't being racist. I just didn't like how he decided to but in at that particular point and time, that's all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 That's what the KKK say. Seriously, you have something against anything in purple. You are rasict. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 *looks at Disgaea characters* ....ZERO HATES PRINNIES. PRINNY HATER! PRINNY HATER! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I never said that I dislike prinnies dood, and I am not a racist. At least, I'm not hating on any one color or that. But then there's this thing, which solves just about any issues regarding race. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 PRINNY HATER. GET THE PRINNY HATER DOOD! Tempus disagrees, but nobody likes him anyways. PRI...wait. I thought I was one of your favorite splits.April Fools. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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