Blake Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Saint, post your app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Saint, post your app. Gah, that sample is keeping me from being able to. I'll be getting off soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I don't think it should take that long Dane . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I don't think it should take that long Dane . . .If he's trying to fill out an app for Black's side and has few ideas to work with, I can see it taking awhile or at. And I know how painful it can be to make samples. Mine always suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 That's strange, all I need is an idea to work with and I can make an excellent rp sample. Take the one I made for the war for instance. Me being elsewhere plus there being about to be a war plus a summons from Black = a very good rp sample. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I just type what comes off the top of my head. Kind of what I do when I argue.That's our Scar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Eh, I'm not joining. I just don't have any ideas for anything. Sorry Black, once you see this.Let me try to spark something. Help the enemy? Bizarre tatic. Fonz, your up. Unbenownest to all of New Forum there was a new being. A being born out of nothingness itself. Upon it's creation the nothingness realized something, the creatures surronding it had forms, they didn't change, or changed slower than his eye could see. This saddened the being for unlike them, he couldn't stay the same, it's form would morph constantly for it has not founds it's true place or it's true shape. Then the being found some like him, while they could stay the same they also were able to change. They were Cirque and the being admired them. Then the seed of jealousy began to grow, for the being couldn't show himself for he had naught to show, and yet they could become heros if they wished. Then out of this envy and self pity sparked an idea, maybe he can learn from them. And thus the being crafted a suit and mask to cover his horrific morphing body, and gave himself a name. He was above men but couldn't reach the angels, he was a saint of sorts. And so Saint was him. ....Yeah, it's eh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Sorry, but somehow the one in purple just doesn't do it justice. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Does what? ...My idea, my idea doesn't do it justice, or it doesn't give saint dane justice? .... Your weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 HOW DARE YOU CALL FONZ "THE ONE IN PURPLE".We share similar colors so I'm offended.Ehh, I can care less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 .,... Is'nt Mars Red in blue, Nex? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 No, Mars is Blue. Owait, Mars is red vs blue! rofl whichever the hell alternate of Ice you are, stuff it. I agree with Scar, I could care less. Nex, it just wasn't a good concept, at all. Well, it was, but it wasn't very well written. Perhaps next time you should write it instead of leaving it to the one in purple? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 ... <. shadow that what i said marsuvees red is in blue> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Waitwhut? You mean that he is a character in RvB? lolwutermelon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I'm Tempus you moron.No, it was a good concept, and it was written well.It's not like you can do better.Yeah!Shouldn't you be stupid somewhere else? Yeah! Wait! Uh! I don't know....?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 ... Must... resist... urge... to kill... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 What's your problem Black-san? And actually Tempus, yes, I could have done better then that purple person called Fonzie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [spoiler=Can I join?]Username: SleepingKirby Your Characters: (In order of most recently used) Kiruha Irami, Haruki Mirai, Zodia Sayuki, Kochiyo Sayuki, Avelino Lozano Fierro, Sachiko Narahashi, Jean-Luc Pile... I think that's it. A GOOD RP Sample: Kiruha wandered around the halls of the museum, stopping to stare at every single thing. She wasn't interested in art; she simply liked the colors.Oh, this one's pretty! she thought to herself. "This one's a classic," said a voice, from not too far away. A boy of no more than seventeen approached her and bowed."I'm Haruki. And you are?" he asked in a gentleman like fashion."I'm Kiruha," she responded, blushing. He offered a handshake, to which she accepted, and the two immediately became friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Erm... could you take some criticism? (I'm the nice one) Describe more, use less talking and thinking. Describe the art she liked, and the boy that spoke. Also, don't press enter in between lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 .,... Is'nt Mars Red in blue, Nex? Yeah, but Marv left. I have an idea but you never told me if I could have multiple characters yet. @Shadow: Fine, prove to me that you can write it better, I bet 30 points you can't, Taint can judge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 I sense a challenge. Do I have permission to look at the previous written material as well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 No, only one character, unless otherwise stated. Later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Fine, someone else will judge. You can look at my material but if it's just copying mine with a few changes, I win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 So basically you are saying that I can't use the same concept of an ever changing shapeshifter with no one single form? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [spoiler=Can I join?]Username: SleepingKirbyYour Characters: (In order of most recently used) Kiruha Irami, Haruki Mirai, Zodia Sayuki, Kochiyo Sayuki, Avelino Lozano Fierro, Sachiko Narahashi, Jean-Luc Pile... I think that's it.A GOOD RP Sample: Kiruha wandered around the halls of the museum, stopping to stare at every single thing. She wasn't interested in art; she simply liked the colors. Oh, this one's pretty! she thought to herself. "This one's a classic," said a voice, from not too far away. A boy of no more than seventeen approached her and bowed. "I'm Haruki. And you are?" he asked in a gentleman like fashion. "I'm Kiruha," she responded, blushing. He offered a handshake, to which she accepted, and the two immediately became friends. Yeah, the multi quote formatting shows your post without the unneeded line skipping. Now then on to the sample. Without beating around the bush it's not good. Like Black said, it needs a lot more description. And no one becomes friends that quickly. Fine, someone else will judge.I'll judge if you'd like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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