Andx Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Well time for a slightly Different Black fanfic [spoiler=Ordeals I:Black and White]I awoke in a cold sweat and ran to the bathroom feeling sick. I felt as though i needed to vomit but nothing came out. My chest was on fire and i had trouble breathing. Then i heard it...the same taunting voice i heard in my dreams. "You're NOTHING without me!!" I turned to the mirror and saw him. He had no true form but the black smoke that comprised his body morphed into my shape to mock me. "Who are you? How the HELL do you know my name!?!" I screamed at the apparition halfway enraged and halfway afraid. This person called my by my true name in the nightmare i only moments ago was suffering from. "Heheheheh cmon baby you HONESTLY can't tell who i am?" The apparition said laughing out loud showing a mouth of menacingly sharp teeth. "You SCARED i used your real name little baby? What do ya want me to call ya? Gaara? Black? Ulqui? You HAVE no identity because you're TORN between what you are!! And admit it...you LOVE the cold darkness i provide for you...without me the other members of R.P.820 wouldnt give a DAMN about you and you know it!!" His words hit me harder than any punch, any energy attack, any strike i've taken in all my years of battle. I felt cold and alone as i heard my own mocking voice. I heard Marsuvees Black telling me how inferior i was...and i felt the darkness creep around me as i aknowledged it as truth...as much as i wanted him to by lying. "Cmon boy...it won't be THAT hard to give into darkness...i mean really...none of them know you for YOU they only see ME! So why not let me BECOME you?" He said coldly offering his hand to me. It was so tempting to take his offer...to lose myself completley in him. But then a warm light peirced the shadow that enveloped me. "Phantom...Andx...Tempest...Jake and Proto...they ALL know who i am.." I felt their hands reach out to me and new strength entered my body as i stood to face Black. "You SHUT that leaky sewer pipe you call a mouth!!" I snapped at him feeling my true friends backing me. "Im NOT who you say i am...i'm not you Black...im not Gaara or Ulqui either..i'm whoever i want to be...that's why i joined...no...that's why i helped FOUND this organization...Because despite who i become...at my center...im NOT you or ANYONE else.." I could feel the power surrounding me. A power i had only felt once before when i first met my allies in R.P.820. "I'M ME!!!" I roared as i sent my fist through the apparition and shattered the mirror in front of my face into thousands of crystal shards. I slept peacefully after that night. The nightmare of Black...was finally over END comments anyone?tried a new style on this one and i wanted to see if you guys liked itI made it roughly 1/3 to 1/2 of the way in and stopped. Mostly because it was odd. I'll wait for Black's opinion on the fanfic, it is about him after all, mostly because I want to see how he reacts to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Black...reading a fanfic i wrote on Black...ONLY GOOD CAN COME OF THIS!! :D and you get two thirds of a thank you for reading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Black...reading a fanfic i wrote on Black...ONLY GOOD MADNESS CAN COME OF THIS!! :D and you get two thirds of a thank you for reading fix'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 fix'd. agreed... Anyway, I liked it cause it was out of the ordinary and woke me up from a long day of regular. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 I honestly thought halfway through writing it that Black was gonna find some NEW way to kill me for doing this...and he was gonna be REALLY creative about it...But i just REALLY liked the idea of Black being some kind of malevolent presence over him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 I honestly thought halfway through writing it that Black was gonna find some NEW way to kill me for doing this...and he was gonna be REALLY creative about it...But i just REALLY liked the idea of Black being some kind of malevolent presence over himOh don't worry about that. Of course Black will find new and more creative ways to kill you. But at the moment he's not on so your fate is being delayed at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Hey Andx, will we be starting that RP in a few days once that last guys is fully accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Hey Andx, will we be starting that RP in a few days once that last guys is fully accepted?Black planned on Sunday as far as I know. You'd have to ask him as I'm not sure on some of those details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Black planned on Sunday as far as I know. You'd have to ask him as I'm not sure on some of those details. saturday or sunday would be perfect, no work those days! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Bleh, the sooner the better and I might be busy during some of those times so i'll just have to coordinate posting on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 saturday or sunday would be perfect, no work those days!Bleh, the sooner the better and I might be busy during some of those times so i'll just have to coordinate posting on it.Nice to see the planned/desired starting time is good for some and meh for others. Hopefully not bad for anyone involved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Okay which character should i make my next fic about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Make it about me. Lol you'd be the fourth person to have done it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Okay which character should i make my next fic about?I'd say pick someone who's on so we can get a response from them but let's not go with that. Who do you really want to write about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 I'm thinking a three way tie between Tempest, YOU and Ninjew For a while i was considering either Creator or Nexev but...then i thought nah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 I'm thinking a three way tie between Tempest, YOU and NinjewWell you already wrote about me as the. MANLIEST MANNY MAN THING THAT HAS EVER EXISTED! So I guess I'm satisfied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 I'm thinking a three way tie between Tempest, YOU and Ninjew For a while i was considering either Creator or Nexev but...then i thought nah glad ta know I'm so loved...LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Wow I don't even know what we're talking about but I STILL feel insulted <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Well you already wrote about me as the. MANLIEST MANNY MAN THING THAT HAS EVER EXISTED! So I guess I'm satisfied.Wait, when did Raiden write about you being Kamina? Wow I don't even know what we're talking about but I STILL feel insulted <_<You feel insulted that Raiden doesn't want to write about you next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 I know right. We're gonna go start our own club! Uh...RP 821! Yeah, thats it! *get's lazy* Meh, we'll deal with the hatred. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 *stands up* Raw raw fight da pow- *sits back down* Oh who am I kidding? I like this place for all the flaws XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 @Jake and FFR: Well i sometimes wonder what the repricussions of including Jake in a fanfic would be and i don't know much about FFR's character so if i put him in a fanfic more than likley he's gonna be a clone of Cloud Strife and also SPIN ON!!! TENGEN TOPPA PROTO LAGANN!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Wait, when did Raiden write about you being Kamina?More like being Gurren Laggan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Phew, none about me. I MEAN that I am very sad that I cannot obtain small sniplets which portray nothing of me by the ever blessed Raiden. Yeah, go with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 More like being Gurren Laggan.Oh right, you're a machine after all. @Cephus: Now there's no need to be bitter. Only grateful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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