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I hate being one of those people who keep bugging a club about their acceptance but since its been 2 days I think it may be a good enough time

Username: eliteduelists

Your Characters:

Koya Sala (struggle of powers)

Zach Micheals (day after day)

Julian Micheals (day after day)

Kyle Miheals (day after day)

Cameron smith (Yu-gi-oh! Duel Monsters A.D.)

Zach Johnson (yugioh the raw tournament)

A GOOD RP Sample:

Mike was tied to a chair, blindfolded and gagged. He smelled gasoline and oil. It was hot and Mike was sweating furiously. He tried to squirm out of his bindings but no luck. He did manage to shake off the blindfold though. He saw that he was in a wooden crate. All of the sudden the crate he was in was lifted up and started to move. After a minute or two he felt rocking and then he was set down. He felt the rocking get worse. He then smelled something much worse then gasoline or oil. It was saltwater. He was on a ship heading for who knows where. He then heard a chugging noise and realized he was in the boiler room. Things started to get very hot and he thought with dread that if he did not get out soon he would die from heat stroke.

He thought back to the events of the day that led up to this. The seeming normal beginning of the day. Normal breakfast, normal morning and normal lunch. Things started to go wrong after lunch. He decided to go to the park to get out of the house. He was walking along the side of the road and a van pulled up. He had no chance of escape. 3 armed men jumped out, grabbed him, and knocked him unconscious.

That was the last he remembered before he woke up bound and gagged. He had no clue what these people wanted with him, or what they planned to do with him. But he would find out after they docked.

"If he lived that long." He though worried. He had to engineer an escape plan. Because what these people wanted with him, whatever it was, could not be good. But he had no clue how he could escape. He was bound and gagged and he just noticed after the initial shock wore off that his head was throbbing and his hair was sticky with blood.

"Oh great. Well there is nothing I can do for the time being in my current state. So I may as well rest up and hope for the best" He thought gloomily.

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Andx

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I hate being one of those people who keep bugging a club about their acceptance but since its been 2 days I think it may be a good enough time

Username: eliteduelists

Your Characters:

Koya Sala (struggle of powers)

Zach Micheals (day after day)

Julian Micheals (day after day)

Kyle Miheals (day after day)

Cameron smith (Yu-gi-oh! Duel Monsters A.D.)

Zach Johnson (yugioh the raw tournament)

A GOOD RP Sample:

Mike was tied to a chair' date=' blindfolded and gagged. He smelled gasoline and oil. It was hot and Mike was sweating furiously. He tried to squirm out of his bindings but no luck. He did manage to shake off the blindfold though. He saw that he was in a wooden crate. All of the sudden the crate he was in was lifted up and started to move. After a minute or two he felt rocking and then he was set down. He felt the rocking get worse. He then smelled something much worse then gasoline or oil. It was saltwater. He was on a ship heading for who knows where. He then heard a chugging noise and realized he was in the boiler room. Things started to get very hot and he thought with dread that if he did not get out soon he would die from heat stroke.

He thought back to the events of the day that led up to this. The seeming normal beginning of the day. Normal breakfast, normal morning and normal lunch. Things started to go wrong after lunch. He decided to go to the park to get out of the house. He was walking along the side of the road and a van pulled up. He had no chance of escape. 3 armed men jumped out, grabbed him, and knocked him unconscious.

That was the last he remembered before he woke up bound and gagged. He had no clue what these people wanted with him, or what they planned to do with him. But he would find out after they docked.

"If he lived that long." He though worried. He had to engineer an escape plan. Because what these people wanted with him, whatever it was, could not be good. But he had no clue how he could escape. He was bound and gagged and he just noticed after the initial shock wore off that his head was throbbing and his hair was sticky with blood.

"Oh great. Well there is nothing I can do for the time being in my current state. So I may as well rest up and hope for the best" He thought gloomily.

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No don't feel bad about it at all. It was my fault. I saw your app but didn't feel like reviewing it at the time and then the thread sped past things. Sorry about that. Now then, I'll get right on to what I think of the sample.

 

I must say, most people don't put their sample character in such precarious situations without resolving them. Anyway, I like your writing style and any errors are minor so that they don't annoy me or stand out. Accepted. Now if another co-owner/leader would get on soon I could say for sure wether or not you're in the club. But as you may have read in the first page, you need two people to approve you. So for the moment you're half way there.

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