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My new app with a totally original sample.

 

Username: Aura Blazer

Your Characters:

Thorn (same name used for two different characters)

Grace

Alex Kane (same name used for two different characters)

 

[spoiler=An RP Sample]

A black light shone through the black marble hall, making shadows dance across the man's face. He had jet black hair, that partially covered part of his face. He was wearing a black tunic that was ripped at the sleeves and black jeans with rips at the knees. Slowly, he walked proudly down the hall to a black diemond case with a backwards K on it. The insignia of The Cult of Shadows. He put his hand on the underside of the case to open it but the doors of the hall burst open.

 

A tall, bald man in a long gray robe walked in the room taking long strides. He had a gold crescent moon on his cape and held a tome under his arm. "Stop!" he shouted, his voice echoing around the hall. The boy in the black clothes, Jase, walked several steps forward and stopped, drawing a samarai sword from his back which had a red jewel at the hilt. "Leave or Perish," Jase said coldly, his eyes focused. He jumped into the air, raising his sword and slammed it into the ground. Astonished, the old man started walking backwards slowly. "Wh-What have you done?!" he exclaimed, panicing. Cracks appeared in the ground at the old mans feet and a large fissure opened, the old man falling inside.

 

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My new app with a totally original sample.

 

Username: Aura Blazer

Your Characters:

Thorn (same name used for two different characters)

Grace

Alex Kane (same name used for two different characters)

 

[spoiler=An RP Sample]

A black light shone through the black marble hall' date=' making shadows dance across the man's face. He had jet black hair, that partially covered part of his face. He was wearing a black tunic that was ripped at the sleeves and black jeans with rips at the knees. Slowly, he walked proudly down the hall to a black diemond case with a backwards K on it. The insignia of The Cult of Shadows. He put his hand on the underside of the case to open it but the doors of the hall burst open.

 

A tall, bald man in a long gray robe walked in the room taking long strides. He had a gold crescent moon on his cape and held a tome under his arm. "Stop!" he shouted, his voice echoing around the hall. The boy in the black clothes, Jase, walked several steps forward and stopped, drawing a samarai sword from his back which had a red jewel at the hilt. "Leave or Perish," Jase said coldly, his eyes focused. He jumped into the air, raising his sword and slammed it into the ground. Astonished, the old man started walking backwards slowly. "Wh-What have you done?!" he exclaimed, panicing. Cracks appeared in the ground at the old mans feet and a large fissure opened, the old man falling inside.

 

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Interesting sample. Well like last time, I just like the way you write. No errors jump out at me and I don't want to look at this so deeply that all I end up doing is pick out little details. So like I said before, before I knew your sample wasn't on the spot, accepted. And like before, please wait for the approval of one other leader.

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My new app with a totally original sample.

 

Username: Aura Blazer

Your Characters:

Thorn (same name used for two different characters)

Grace

Alex Kane (same name used for two different characters)

 

[spoiler=An RP Sample]

A black light shone through the black marble hall' date=' making shadows dance across the man's face. He had jet black hair, that partially covered part of his face. He was wearing a black tunic that was ripped at the sleeves and black jeans with rips at the knees. Slowly, he walked proudly down the hall to a black diemond case with a backwards K on it. The insignia of The Cult of Shadows. He put his hand on the underside of the case to open it but the doors of the hall burst open.

 

A tall, bald man in a long gray robe walked in the room taking long strides. He had a gold crescent moon on his cape and held a tome under his arm. "Stop!" he shouted, his voice echoing around the hall. The boy in the black clothes, Jase, walked several steps forward and stopped, drawing a samarai sword from his back which had a red jewel at the hilt. "Leave or Perish," Jase said coldly, his eyes focused. He jumped into the air, raising his sword and slammed it into the ground. Astonished, the old man started walking backwards slowly. "Wh-What have you done?!" he exclaimed, panicing. Cracks appeared in the ground at the old mans feet and a large fissure opened, the old man falling inside.

 

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Am I accepted or not?

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Accepted by me. But you need two leaders to accept you before it's official. So you have one vote, now you just need another leader's opinion. Unless the other leaders just don't care in which case you're in.

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@Aura: With Proto's acceptance, you are now officially accepted into R.P. 820. Welcome.

 

@Lelouch: Yeah a bit. I don't know if you've seen my profile but I'm going to mostly work on my fanfic today. So any RP posts from me will be coming in the mid afternoon to early evening time range. Well that's my time anyway (it's 10:30 in the morning for me at the moment.) Sorry if you were really up for some posting today.

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