LuffyLaxer Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-215622-post-4424453.html#pid4424453 Hey Guys, this is my new RP. I'm hoping some people will join me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Do I have to have more stars to join or am I ok? Username: Aura BlazerYour Characters:Thorn (same name used for two different characters)GraceAlex Kane (same name used for two different characters) [spoiler=[b]A GOOD RP Sample[/b]:]Ghost quickly changed course as a huge dragon arced over him, inches away from his face. A demon turned, looking straight through Ghost, who hid in the shadows. He then disapeared and took shape in the demons shadow, lunging out and striking the creature on the neck with his claw. Moving quickly, he advanced forward and glanced at the demon turning to dust. He must get the attention of the king and he must get it fast. He raced towards the gates but was stoppped by three huge, hog faced demons. They had red skin, held a black spear each and one wore a series of chains around his torso. "Move or perish," ghost warned flexing his claws. They charged, raising their spears but Ghost rolled underneath them firing shots from his faithful handguns. The two demons were dead before they realised what had happened. The only one that remained was the one covered in chains. He swung them out smashing the ground where Ghost was, who was now on the demons back. He touched his head and his cloak began to glow red, the demon fell to his knees screaming, and Ghost made his way towards the gates. His mind corruption had worked and destroyed the demons soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Do I have to have more stars to join or am I ok? Username: Aura BlazerYour Characters:Thorn (same name used for two different characters)GraceAlex Kane (same name used for two different characters) [spoiler=[b]A GOOD RP Sample[/b]:]Ghost quickly changed course as a huge dragon arced over him' date=' inches away from his face. A demon turned, looking straight through Ghost, who hid in the shadows. He then disapeared and took shape in the demons shadow, lunging out and striking the creature on the neck with his claw. Moving quickly, he advanced forward and glanced at the demon turning to dust. He must get the attention of the king and he must get it fast. He raced towards the gates but was stoppped by three huge, hog faced demons. They had red skin, held a black spear each and one wore a series of chains around his torso. "Move or perish," ghost warned flexing his claws. They charged, raising their spears but Ghost rolled underneath them firing shots from his faithful handguns. The two demons were dead before they realised what had happened. The only one that remained was the one covered in chains. He swung them out smashing the ground where Ghost was, who was now on the demons back. He touched his head and his cloak began to glow red, the demon fell to his knees screaming, and Ghost made his way towards the gates. His mind corruption had worked and destroyed the demons soul. [/quote'] Stars are of no consequence, only your RPing/writing skills matter. So don't worry about that. If you're a good RPer, we'll gladly accept you here. Now then, on to your sample. First off, is it from an RP or did you make it up on the spot here like you were supposed to? Now then, onto my comments on the sample itself. First off I'm quite happy with the way you write. While like anyone, including myself, it could use more detail, it doesn't sound immature or fail in any way. It has good grammar and spelling from what I see. There is one problem with your sample. And that is simply, I'm not entirely sure what's going on. I see that Ghost is under attack and he's trying to get somewhere, but there's nothing to say why any of this is going on. Regardless I still like your app. Accepted. Though you need the approval of one other leader before you're officially in. So hang tight for a bit and we'll see what the verdict is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 My sample is from a real RP and yeah it might be a bit complicated, it involves my character becoming peoples shadows so it might be hard to understand. if you want me to change it then I will gladly do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 My sample is from a real RP and yeah it might be a bit complicated' date=' it involves my character becoming peoples shadows so it might be hard to understand. if you want me to change it then I will gladly do so.[/quote'] It's from an RP you've been in? Well then it will have to change. The sample has to be completely original meaning you make it up on the spot just for this application. So you've got free range on what you can do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 A potential new member? Awesome! I look forward to seeing what this guy can do and if he gets accepted. (hopefully he will) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Alright I've heard enough! Guess I WILL bring Keys back to here, and possibly keep it on RPU ^^ BTW, Predators was pretty darn good (^^)b Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Finally! Predators? What's that, another horror movie? e_e Hey Jake, are you part of the club rp on RPU? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 No I am not Shadow. And you don't know what a Predator is!? *falls over* Epic Fail dude . . . epic fail. How can you NOT know what a Predator is?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Andx, the RP on RPU, only oen thign to say. Boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 I have gotten a few new members for rpu hopefully they are active. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Cool cool Primal . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 @JakePredator = Awesome. Zero should fell ashamed to not know what they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 I only plan to be active for the club rp. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Andx' date=' the RP on RPU, only one thign to say. Boring.[/quote'] And your point being....? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 You know, I don't remember the last time I was on RPU. I should go back and check. Sounds good to me Andx. The only change I would likely make is giving my character a humanoid form though. So if I gave you this link: http://www.rpuniverse.mybbest.com/forum-32.htmlyou would consider reading that ooc thread' date=' joining that forum, and then participating in the RP? Oh wait, I forgot, you have to be logged in to see that forum. So the order should really be: join that forum, read the ooc thread, and join that RP.[/quote'] I wanna join! But I don't remember my username or my password on RPU. @Shadow: Shadow I'm sorry, but I have to agree... The fact that you don't know what a Predator is is just plain sad. @Jake: A few days ago Aliens Vs Predator 3: Requiem was on SciFi. It was great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 @Genesis: If you joined the forum at any point, I can get you that info. Just give me a minute and PM will be waiting in your inbox here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Hey Andx, I am back ^^ *pushes Andrew over* AVPR was horrible! It was way too dark to see ANYTHING clearly. I wanna actually SEE the two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Hey Andx' date=' I am back ^^[/quote'] Jake! I saw you posted in Tamers and I was wondering when you might be showing up around here. Of course that also required me showing up too as I see I missed a few of your earlier return posts. Good to see you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Yeah I was at my uncles house and for the love of god neither of use could get my labtop to connect to his wifi. I woulda been on, but I just couldn't (TTuTT) And yeah I posted in Tamers ^^ In fact, if a certain member doesn't mind it, I know how to aid Evelyn's situation at the present moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Yeah I was at my uncles house and for the love of god neither of use could get my labtop to connect to his wifi. I woulda been on' date=' but I just couldn't (TTuTT) And yeah I posted in Tamers ^^ In fact, if a certain member doesn't mind it, I know how to aid Evelyn's situation at the present moment[/quote'] Well that certain member certainly wouldn't mind having their character get out of a tight situation. And I'm sure that this certain member will follow your prompting in your last post to go about receiving this help. (Now to go find this certain member, the lucky guy.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Yeah I was at my uncles house and for the love of god neither of use could get my labtop to connect to his wifi. I woulda been on' date=' but I just couldn't (TTuTT) And yeah I posted in Tamers ^^ In fact, if a certain member doesn't mind it, I know how to aid Evelyn's situation at the present moment[/quote'] Well that certain member certainly wouldn't mind having their character get out of a tight situation. And I'm sure that this certain member will follow your prompting in your last post to go about receiving this help. (Now to go find this certain member, the lucky guy.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Yeah I was at my uncles house and for the love of god neither of use could get my labtop to connect to his wifi. I woulda been on' date=' but I just couldn't (TTuTT) And yeah I posted in Tamers ^^ In fact, if a certain member doesn't mind it, I know how to aid Evelyn's situation at the present moment[/quote'] Well that certain member certainly wouldn't mind having their character get out of a tight situation. And I'm sure that this certain member will follow your prompting in your last post to go about receiving this help. (Now to go find this certain member, the lucky guy.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Andx I am referring to assuming control of another players character- like how I have done for Black's while he is away to make sure John doesn't get "left behind" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Andx I am referring to assuming control of another players character- like how I have done for Black's while he is away to make sure John doesn't get "left behind" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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