Crystal Remnants Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 It isn't too hard to make a forum' date=' I even did it, twice. Course, my second and current one is private currently while I work.[/quote'] Well Primal's got one that's nice and set-up just for us on R.P.820. Though others can come, it is hard for them to find out about it unless they are told. But as long as it is better than this, IDC. We just need a place we can relax and make GOOD RPs. Holy Crud New Naruto is out YES!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Username: Aqua GirlYour Characters: Jeanne, Aqua, NameriA GOOD RP Sample: Rath stood still, people not giving him a second glance, afraid what might happen if they did. His weapons where easily seen, and that was on purpose. When the average person saw his sword and axe, they would think twice about trying to pick his pockets. For all they knew, those pockets would be filled with daggers or some other deadly item. The Wolf Guardian noticed everyone who entered the town, whether it be by vision, scent, or sound. Each race had a different scent and sound, as did every person according to certain social status. Someone drew closer; they had the sickly-sweet smell of fear lightly around them. They smelled of human... or at least part human. He could hear a heartbeat. The footsteps where light, a lady, no doubt, a young lady... all the way up here? A smaller figure draped in a dark cloak and hood walked past him. His yellow eyes followed her until a strong hand gripped her smaller upper arm, the hand wrapping around her arm easily. "Pardon m'Lady..." Rath said with his deep and intimidating voice, another trait of Guardians. Despite his friendly-sounding accent of a highlander, the voice made it seem the opposite. "Would you look me in the eyes...? I am looking for someone, and their eyes have been described to me..." The Wolf Guardian Rath almost knew that this was his person already. He only met one other being with a smell like hers, but more so. That being was his employer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Username: Aqua GirlYour Characters: Jeanne, Aqua, NameriA GOOD RP Sample: Rath stood still, people not giving him a second glance, afraid what might happen if they did. His weapons where easily seen, and that was on purpose. When the average person saw his sword and axe, they would think twice about trying to pick his pockets. For all they knew, those pockets would be filled with daggers or some other deadly item. The Wolf Guardian noticed everyone who entered the town, whether it be by vision, scent, or sound. Each race had a different scent and sound, as did every person according to certain social status. Someone drew closer; they had the sickly-sweet smell of fear lightly around them. They smelled of human... or at least part human. He could hear a heartbeat. The footsteps where light, a lady, no doubt, a young lady... all the way up here? A smaller figure draped in a dark cloak and hood walked past him. His yellow eyes followed her until a strong hand gripped her smaller upper arm, the hand wrapping around her arm easily. "Pardon m'Lady..." Rath said with his deep and intimidating voice, another trait of Guardians. Despite his friendly-sounding accent of a highlander, the voice made it seem the opposite. "Would you look me in the eyes...? I am looking for someone, and their eyes have been described to me..." The Wolf Guardian Rath almost knew that this was his person already. He only met one other being with a smell like hers, but more so. That being was his employer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Username: Aqua GirlYour Characters: Jeanne, Aqua, NameriA GOOD RP Sample: Rath stood still, people not giving him a second glance, afraid what might happen if they did. His weapons where easily seen, and that was on purpose. When the average person saw his sword and axe, they would think twice about trying to pick his pockets. For all they knew, those pockets would be filled with daggers or some other deadly item. The Wolf Guardian noticed everyone who entered the town, whether it be by vision, scent, or sound. Each race had a different scent and sound, as did every person according to certain social status. Someone drew closer; they had the sickly-sweet smell of fear lightly around them. They smelled of human... or at least part human. He could hear a heartbeat. The footsteps where light, a lady, no doubt, a young lady... all the way up here? A smaller figure draped in a dark cloak and hood walked past him. His yellow eyes followed her until a strong hand gripped her smaller upper arm, the hand wrapping around her arm easily. "Pardon m'Lady..." Rath said with his deep and intimidating voice, another trait of Guardians. Despite his friendly-sounding accent of a highlander, the voice made it seem the opposite. "Would you look me in the eyes...? I am looking for someone, and their eyes have been described to me..." The Wolf Guardian Rath almost knew that this was his person already. He only met one other being with a smell like hers, but more so. That being was his employer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Great job Aqua! I'm impressed! I'd accept you, but I have absolutely no power on here so that's not my call to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Great job Aqua! I'm impressed! I'd accept you, but I have absolutely no power on here so that's not my call to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Great job Aqua! I'm impressed! I'd accept you, but I have absolutely no power on here so that's not my call to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Mind if you describe Rath? Other than that, amazing.By describe, I meant clothing wise. The weapons could've been placed on a weapon belt thingy, maybe having an insignia of some sort, since Rath seems like he's in a group, unless his mission was to be secret, and everyone knows the group he's in, or something. What I liked is the stress of the sense of smell; I try to include touch and hearing for the reader, but smell... Try working the smell of human into the reader's mind. Also, you should've described the scenery and all through the senses as well. But, very good, I like the potential of the piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Mind if you describe Rath? Other than that, amazing.By describe, I meant clothing wise. The weapons could've been placed on a weapon belt thingy, maybe having an insignia of some sort, since Rath seems like he's in a group, unless his mission was to be secret, and everyone knows the group he's in, or something. What I liked is the stress of the sense of smell; I try to include touch and hearing for the reader, but smell... Try working the smell of human into the reader's mind. Also, you should've described the scenery and all through the senses as well. But, very good, I like the potential of the piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Mind if you describe Rath? Other than that, amazing.By describe, I meant clothing wise. The weapons could've been placed on a weapon belt thingy, maybe having an insignia of some sort, since Rath seems like he's in a group, unless his mission was to be secret, and everyone knows the group he's in, or something. What I liked is the stress of the sense of smell; I try to include touch and hearing for the reader, but smell... Try working the smell of human into the reader's mind. Also, you should've described the scenery and all through the senses as well. But, very good, I like the potential of the piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I got bored Waiting so I did this... Name: Rath MyraadyrAge: 70 - looks mid-late 20'sRace: Wolf Brother - Lycan without changingGender: MaleAppearance: He has golden-amber wolf eyes and a band of leather around his head as a sign of him being a man. Personality: Chivalrous, warrior-like, a bit gruff and rugged. He is rough around the edges, but is a warm and caring person when not in combat.Bio: Rath is a son of the Northern Darkness, the lawless and barbaric land beyond civilization. his life in those lands have made him a hardened veteran by the age of twelve, making him a "man" by the age of thirteen. Rath joined the Guardians at the age of fifteen and has been one of their most valuable assets for a long time.Powers/Special Abilities: Pain resistance, wolf-speak, stanima, strength, highlander accentWeakness: Silver, losing himself to his animal sideLikes: Neko women(wolf neko women mostly), women in general, fighting, drinking, wolvesDislikes: Slavers, poachers, posh people, thugs, criminalsFears: Silver, dying alone, dying without family Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I got bored Waiting so I did this... Name: Rath MyraadyrAge: 70 - looks mid-late 20'sRace: Wolf Brother - Lycan without changingGender: MaleAppearance: He has golden-amber wolf eyes and a band of leather around his head as a sign of him being a man. Personality: Chivalrous, warrior-like, a bit gruff and rugged. He is rough around the edges, but is a warm and caring person when not in combat.Bio: Rath is a son of the Northern Darkness, the lawless and barbaric land beyond civilization. his life in those lands have made him a hardened veteran by the age of twelve, making him a "man" by the age of thirteen. Rath joined the Guardians at the age of fifteen and has been one of their most valuable assets for a long time.Powers/Special Abilities: Pain resistance, wolf-speak, stanima, strength, highlander accentWeakness: Silver, losing himself to his animal sideLikes: Neko women(wolf neko women mostly), women in general, fighting, drinking, wolvesDislikes: Slavers, poachers, posh people, thugs, criminalsFears: Silver, dying alone, dying without family Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I got bored Waiting so I did this... Name: Rath MyraadyrAge: 70 - looks mid-late 20'sRace: Wolf Brother - Lycan without changingGender: MaleAppearance: He has golden-amber wolf eyes and a band of leather around his head as a sign of him being a man. Personality: Chivalrous, warrior-like, a bit gruff and rugged. He is rough around the edges, but is a warm and caring person when not in combat.Bio: Rath is a son of the Northern Darkness, the lawless and barbaric land beyond civilization. his life in those lands have made him a hardened veteran by the age of twelve, making him a "man" by the age of thirteen. Rath joined the Guardians at the age of fifteen and has been one of their most valuable assets for a long time.Powers/Special Abilities: Pain resistance, wolf-speak, stanima, strength, highlander accentWeakness: Silver, losing himself to his animal sideLikes: Neko women(wolf neko women mostly), women in general, fighting, drinking, wolvesDislikes: Slavers, poachers, posh people, thugs, criminalsFears: Silver, dying alone, dying without family Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I'm a little irritated. Impressed, but irritated.That only proves that you really didn't try the first time. Look, when it comes to important things like apps and RPing, DO NOT look for shortcuts in here.Accepted. Oh, and ROFL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I'm a little irritated. Impressed, but irritated.That only proves that you really didn't try the first time. Look, when it comes to important things like apps and RPing, DO NOT look for shortcuts in here.Accepted. Oh, and ROFL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I'm a little irritated. Impressed, but irritated.That only proves that you really didn't try the first time. Look, when it comes to important things like apps and RPing, DO NOT look for shortcuts in here.Accepted. Oh, and ROFL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 That made me lol Tempest. The guy on the receiving end had to be hurting though. Welcome to R.P. 820 Aqua. Just remember to keep your grammar up to snuff here, okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 That made me lol Tempest. The guy on the receiving end had to be hurting though. Welcome to R.P. 820 Aqua. Just remember to keep your grammar up to snuff here, okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 That made me lol Tempest. The guy on the receiving end had to be hurting though. Welcome to R.P. 820 Aqua. Just remember to keep your grammar up to snuff here, okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 That and don't piss off the guys in charge. So..... Welcome to the club Aqua. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 That and don't piss off the guys in charge. So..... Welcome to the club Aqua. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 That and don't piss off the guys in charge. So..... Welcome to the club Aqua. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Well..... I'm utterly shocked how better that piece was then the last one...... So welcome to the club Aqua! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Well..... I'm utterly shocked how better that piece was then the last one...... So welcome to the club Aqua! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proto Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Well..... I'm utterly shocked how better that piece was then the last one...... So welcome to the club Aqua! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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