The Final Messenger Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 He can spawn clones of things example: 5 loaves of bread *uses power* gets 5000 loaves of breadYou know, like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Yeah I think multiplying something by a thousand is a bit too much- ten I can understand, but a 1000 is way too much. What you think Artemis? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Compass Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Name- Ten Age- Looks childish, but nobody is quite sure how old he is. Species: Human Apearence- Ten usually doesn't come out of his office very often. He lets his ten men do most of the work. When he does, he is short, most likely a teenager. He wears a black trench coat that's a bit too long for him, so he trips on it constantly. He also has a fedora he wears low, not letting anybody see his face. However, if you lift it up, you can find a mess of white hair and a pair of crimison eyes. Yes, he's albino. Powers: None. His wepons do all the work. Bio- Ten's real name is not known. It's simply his title as leader of the ten men, an elite group of hunters that are named that because they have ten ways to kill you, ex: Exploding calculators, pencils sharper then most swords, laser pointers. They are labeled one through 10, 10 being the strongest and 1 the weakest. They are usually refered to by their number. Is this alright? Posted it earlier... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 i believe its op.ed to be honest i mean what if he decided to make 5000 swords fly at his opponet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Well, like I said, if he made it only X10 then I can imagine it. Also if he made so many he SHOULD eventually get tired and run out of energy- like any normal person would. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 serisuly i mean joeys power at frist seems op*ed but i balnced it out by making it stress his mind and body like it does Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 It was only an examplehe can only x by something but loses energyso here's the new one: Name- Shancus Black Age- 14 Species: Human [spoiler=Apearence] Powers: Materialization (cloning objects with his mind, can only clone as much as his energy allows of the item(s)) Bio: Shancus is an artificially created child. Created for scientific testing. Escaped when he was 6 years old. Then brought himself to an orphanage where he was adopted by one of the supernatural hunters that was killed by the vampires. Joined the Supernatural Hunters after the slaughter. Wields a broad sword and rapier combo sword. Personality(I like to put personality as an individual section, if you dont mind): Shancus is ignorant of human emotions and taboos regarding social interaction and personal space. He's brutally honest and keeps people at an icy distance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Again, multiplying anything by a 1000 would probably leave your guy in a coma . . . if not killing him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 I'm just saying, it was an example Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Ok well I suggest you rework the app a bit and repost it (^^)b Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Like rework what Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 *facepalm* Like redoing the image, since it is broken, and also completely explaining the powers. State what he needs to do the cloning, how many he can, and the side effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 [spoiler= App 2.0]Name- Shancus Black Age- 14 Species: Human [spoiler=Apearence] The Pic Sorry I don't Know How to fix it So I Put a Link Powers: Materialization Definition: Cloning with your Mind, Side Effects: Energy Loss (depending on size and quantity) , Can Only Clone 1-10 of an object, Cannot Clone Living Things or Corpses, Requirements: Something to Clone i.e. If He Wants to Clone a Rock he needs a Rock Bio: Shancus is an artificially created child. Created for scientific testing. Escaped when he was 6 years old. Then brought himself to an orphanage where he was adopted by one of the supernatural hunters that was killed by the vampires. Joined the Supernatural Hunters after the slaughter. Wields a broad sword and rapier combo sword. Personality(I like to put personality as an individual section, if you dont mind): Shancus is ignorant of human emotions and taboos regarding social interaction and personal space. He's brutally honest and keeps people at an icy distance. There's my redone application Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtemisFowl Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 ZOMBS421253k' pid='4447221' dateline='1279246320'][spoiler= App 2.0]Name- Shancus Black Age- 14 Species: Human [spoiler=Apearence] The Pic Sorry I don't Know How to fix it So I Put a Link Powers: Materialization Definition: Cloning with your Mind' date=' Side Effects: Energy Loss (depending on size and quantity) , Can Only Clone 1-10 of an object, Cannot Clone Living Things or Corpses, Requirements: Something to Clone i.e. If He Wants to Clone a Rock he needs a Rock Bio: Shancus is an artificially created child. Created for scientific testing. Escaped when he was 6 years old. Then brought himself to an orphanage where he was adopted by one of the supernatural hunters that was killed by the vampires. Joined the Supernatural Hunters after the slaughter. Wields a broad sword and rapier combo sword. Personality(I like to put personality as an individual section, if you dont mind): Shancus is ignorant of human emotions and taboos regarding social interaction and personal space. He's brutally honest and keeps people at an icy distance. There's my redone application[/quote'] Okay . . . as long as you would have to be touching said object, I'll accept you, as long godmodding won't be a problem in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 godmoding wont be a problemI promise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 so whens this second part start >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Yeah When Does it start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Navras Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Sorry this took so long, I wanted to make my characters just right Name- Jack the Ripper Age- unknown, born in teh 13th century, i believe Species: spirit Apearence- close to seven feet tall, or so it's said Powers: The... powers of a ghost? Bio- Jack the Ripper is one of the most famous murders of all time, living in london either right before or right after (I'm not sure...) the Black plauge. In total, he is said to have murdered possibly hundreds of women and dozens of men, though no one can ever ben entirely sure. He was never caught for his crimes and there for died a free murderer. One of the most sick and sadistic men ever to have existed, he would seduse woman then them chop them into bits while they were still alive. Now he's back, and meaner than ever now that he's a ghost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 so whens this second part start >.> I would LOVE to know that myself (-__-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 ditto here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 You know . . . if Artemis is not going to be opening the new thread soon I might actually go off and make the second thread myself >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 he just kept the other one open and said that it was paused but i agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs. SHINee <3 Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 O.O When does this second part start ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 We are all asking ourselves that. Apparently Artemis is supposed to give the signal, but I personally think he stopped the game because he can't focus on this rpg as much as he wants- which honestly is insulting to the other rpgers. its like he doesn't think we can handle working on the rpg without him, like we need him. Again if this doesn't open soon I am more than likely to open the second thread without him or to just continue posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 How bout we give Artems a month or 2 or we'll make part 2 ourselves I Agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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