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Here is my fanfic on Kenny Tennyson. Enjoy.

 

[spoiler=Plot]

Kenneth Tennyson, Ben's son, just got his own Omnitrix. He is so excited. Then a past evil villain of Ben's returns and traps Ben. Now Kenny needs to save his father from the villain. But he can't do it alone. With his 10 aliens, friends, and family he starts his adventure to save Ben 10,000 and maybe even the world.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Characters]

Kenneth (Kenny) Tennyson

[spoiler=Kenny's Aliens]

Stinkfly

XLR8

Ditto

Snakepit

Spitter

Buzzshock

Wildvine

Shellhead

Sandbox

Grey Matter

 

 

Ben (10,000) Tennyson

Julie Tennyson-Yamamoto

Ship the Family Pet

Gwen Tennyson-Levin

Kevin E. Levin

Max Tennyson

Gwendolyn Tennyson

Devlin Levin

Albedo 10,000

Charmcaster

Unnamed Villain-Hex

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1-Kenny's Quest]

Kenneth Tennyson sat in his room. He had the T.V. on and computer on. His computer deck was located at the bottom bunk of Kenny's bed. Next to Kenny's pillow was picture of him and his dad. Kenny's mom, Julie, walked in Kenny's room.

"You ok, honey?" Julie asked. Kenny turned to his mom.

"Yeah..." Kenny replied. Gwen walked in his room.

"Mommy! Mr. Cuttie's head came off!" Gwen yelled. Gwen was Kenny's 6-year-old little sister. She was named after Ben's cousin.

"We'll sew it back on later." Julie said. Kenny climbed up a ladder to his bed.

"You still upset about your father?" Julie asked.

"Something has to be done. Why are we just sitting here?" Kenny said.

"BUT YOU'RE KEN 10!" Gwen yelled. "The only other person then Daddy to have a weird watch to change you into aliens!" she continued. Kenny looked at his Omnitrix.

"She's right."

 

Kenny ran outside. Julie and Gwen followed.

"Kenneth James Tennyson! Get over here!" Julie yelled.

"It's..... HERO TIME!" Kenny slammed down his Omnitrix. His eyes grew longer. He grew wings on his back. He grew legs of a bug. He was:

"STINKFLY!"

"GO KENNY!" Gwen yelled. Stinkfly flew over to Gwen and threw her on his back.

"Kenneth." Julie yelled.

"Sorry Mom!" Stinkfly said. "I'm saving Dad!"

"And I'm helping!" Gwen yelled. Stinkfly and Gwen flew off.

 

Ben 10,000 was locked in a cage. Trapped by Albedo himself.

"Let me out, Albedo!"

"That's Albedo 10,000 to you!"

"Yes, Albedo 10,000. What a great RIP OFF!"

"Mahaha! Just keep quiet! I'm getting paid to do this."

"Wait, wait, wait! Paid? Who are you working for?"

"No one you need to know about."

"Is it Eon? Or Aggregor? Ghostfreak? Vilgax is behind this, isn't he?"

"Maybe. But you'll never find out."

"Oh I will when I get out."

"You mean IF you get out."

"What do you mean?"

"You have 48 hours until that cage you're in explodes."

"Too bad, Albedo! I have the Master Control Ultimatrix!" Ben's body became red. He grew a hood over head. He was:

"WATER HAZARD! Don't force me to do this!"

"Too bad you're powerless. Every time you use the Omnitrix in that cage, the time you have goes down two hours." Albedo said. Ben changed back.

"46 hours."

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2-The Unnamed Villain]

Stinkfly and Gwen flew over a forest. 'BEEP BEEP BEEP!'

"Oh no!" Stinkfly yelled. He changed back. Kenny and Gwen fell to the forest floor.

"OWWWW!" Gwen yelled.

"It was a nice idea to bring a six-year-old with me." Kenny whispered.

"Turn into another alien, Kenny!" Gwen yelled.

"I can't. The Omnitrix is charging." Kenny said. Kenny helped Gwen up and started off.

 

Albedo 10,000 walked in room with giant chair.

"Master Hex?" Albedo 10,000 said. The giant chair turned around. An older Hex sat in the chair.

"What Albedo."

"Ben has used his Omnitrix."

"MAHAHA! The washed up hero won't help but use the watch. Then he will die." Hex replied.

"But should we take the Omnitrix off? If the cage explodes with him wearing the Omnitrix, the Omnitrix will fall apart." Albedo said.

"Good idea. We will remove the watch during the last hour he lives." Hex yelled. A small robot servent rolled in the room.

"Master! We have two subjects are traveling to save Ben!" the robot said. His arm became a projecter and he a light appeared on the wall. It showed Kenny and Gwen walking.

"His children are coming to save him! BAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Hex laughed. "They won't make here! They're too weak!"

"The boy has an Omnitrix, Hex." Albedo said.

"WHAT!?!?!?" Hex yelled.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3-Kill the Children]

Ken and Gwen walked through the forest.

"I feel like we're being watched, Kenny." Gwen said looking around.

"Nothing watching us." Kenny laughed. They walked to and long bridge that sreached across a huge canyon.

"Something is watching us!" Gwen yelled.

"Nothing is watching...." Kenny said when he heard something in the trees.

"I told you!" Gwen taunted.

"Maybe it was a bird!" Kenny said. Then a robot with a camra and the word "HEX" across the torso jumped from the trees.

"Yeah! It is a bird, alright! A bird with with a metal butt!" Gwen said. Kenny slammed down the Omnitrix. His body thined. A hole formed in the middle of his torso. He was:

"SSSSSSSSNAKEPIT!"

"Great! A snake guy." Gwen said. The "E" on the robot's body became a srceen. Hex came on.

"Hello Kenneth and Gwendolyn Tennyson." Hex laughed.

"How do you know our namessssssss?" Snakepit asked.

"I'm an old friend of your father's." Hex said.

"Whatsssssss your name?" Snakepit asked.

"Hex. I'm sure your father has said many great things about me!" Hex chuckled.

"More like many terrible things!" Gwen yelled.

"My Dad sssssssaid you're a villain who usssssesssssss magic." Snakepit said.

"Correct. I have your father trapped!" Hex yellled.

"Ssssssssso it wassssss you that trapped him!" Snakepit said.

"Yes, I swear I just said that!" Hex said to himself. "Oh! I see you have an Omnitrix, Kenneth."

"Yesssssssss I do!"

"Well good luck saving your father. Ben ssssssshall die!" Hex said mocking Snakepit. The srceen disappeared and the robot flew off.

 

"Come on, Ship. We need to find my kids." Julie said grabbing Ship. Julie and Ship found a helicoper in a field and Julie jumped in. Ship upgraded with the helicoper and they took off. They flew right around the forest where Gwen and Kenny was.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 4-Charmed]

Kenny was messing with the Omnitrix while Gwen tried to cross the bridge.

"I hate this." Gwen said.

"I know you do!" Kenny laughed. Gwen got halfway to the middle of the bridge when it snapped. Gwen grabbed on while the bridge swang to the other side of the canyon.

"Great! My six-year-old sister is hanging from a bridge on the other side of a canyon. BYE!" Kenny said walking away.

"You are really going leave her." a vocie said. Devlin walked up to Kenny.

"Hey Devlin!" Kenny yelled.

"HELLO! LITTLE GIRL HANGING OFF THE SIDE OF A CANYON!" Gwen yelled.

"Do I have t...."

"Yes." Devlin said.

"Fine...." Kenny said slamming the Omnitrix down. He grew shorter. His became a battery with arms and legs. He was:

"BUZZSHOCK!"

"Let's go!" Devlin said. His arm became Heatblast's.

"Wait. She is on the other side and we're over here." Buzzshock said.

"HANGING FROM DEATH HERE!" Gwen yelled.

"GWEN!" Devlin yelled jumping.

"Devlin!" Buzzshock yelled following Devlin. Devlin grabbed the end of the bridge. Buzzshock grabbed on Devlin's foot.

"HOLY CRAP!" Buzzshock yelled. Devlin started to climb up the bridge to Gwen. Buzzshock grabbed the bridge and followed. Devlin reached Gwen.

"Climb up!" Devlin yelled.

"I can't!" Gwen yelled.

"Gwen! We are hanging on the side of a canyon. The only other option is the fall and die. CLIMB." Buzzshock yelled. Gwen started climbing. Devlin and Buzzshock followed. They all made it to the other side.

"GROUND!" Gwen yelled. Devlin helped Buzzshock up.

"Thanks Devlin. Now why are you here?" Buzzshock asked.

"I saw Charmcaster." Devlin said. 'BEEP BEEP BEEP!' Buzzshock change back to Kenny.

"Our Dad has been trapped by Hex. Come on." Kenny said running ahead.

 

"Great! There's a new kid with them." Hex said watching Kenny, Gwen, Devlin walk. He sat in his chair. Albedo 10,000 walked in.

"Hex?"

"WHAT!"

"Charmcaster has reached the forest." Albedo 10,000 said.

"Good...."

 

Kenny, Gwen, and Devlin walked for what it seemed like forever. They reached the end of the forest.

"We're out!" Gwen yelled.

"Not really." a girl voice said. Charmcaster jumped from the trees and blocked the exit.

"Charmcaster." Kenny said.

"You know my name?" Charmcaster said.

"My father tells me a lot of his past villains." Kenny said.

"Well you'll never see your 'Daddy' again!" Charmcaster laughed. Kenny slammed down the Omnitrix. His feet grew wheels. His eyes became green. He was:

"XLR8!"

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 5-The Small and The Fastest]

XLR8, Gwen, and Devlin stood before Charmcaster.

"Bring it, Charmcaster!" Devlin yelled holding up his Heatblast arm. XLR8 was behind Charmcaster in snap.

"Go Ken!" Gwen yelled.

"Remember how fast XLR8 is from my Dad?" XLR8 asked Charmcaster.

"Well I have this! Genja Winka!" Charmcaster yelled. XLR8's feet were then glued to the ground.

"What the heck, Charmcaster!" XLR8 yelled.

"I got this!" Devlin yelled running up to Charmcaster. He blasted her with fire from his Heatblast arm. When the fire cleared, Devlin saw that Charmcaster had a veal of water around her.

"I have an idea! I'll be like Aunt Gwen!" Gwen yelled. She ran up to XLR8.

"Poor little child." Charmcaster said. "I have magic! Now to use my most powerful spell on you! Wait.. where's my spell book!"

"Right here!" a tiny vocie yelled.

"Who said that?"

"I did!" the vocie yelled again. Charmcaster looked to Gwen to see the book in one hand, and Grey Matter in the other.

"How do you change and get unstuck?" Charmcaster asked.

"Easy." Gwen said. "I pressed the Omnitrix sign on XLR8 and he change to Grey Matter.

"Master Controll!" Grey Matter yelled. Grey Matter jumped of of Gwen and change. His body grew. He became plant-like.

"WILDVINE!"

"And I got your book!" Gwen yelled. She opened the book and read. "Giffenis Attackis!"

"NO!" Charmcaster yelled. A Griffen flew down and grabbed Charmcaster. They flew off into the sky. Devlin's arm change back.

"I have Master Controll guys!" Wildvine yelled. Devlin pressed the Omnitrix sign and Wildvine changed back to Kenny.

"Thanks a lot, Dev..." Kenny said.

 

"AHHHHHHH! I CAN'T TAKE IT! THE KIDS GET OUT OF EVERYTHING!" Hex yelled. Hex's chair started moving. It moved to the room where Ben 10,000's cage was. Albedo 10,000 was also in the room.

"What is one way to stop your son!?!" Hex asked Ben 10,000.

"HEX IS PAYING YOU!" Ben 10,000 yelled.

"Yes I am! Now tell me what can stop your little Kenny."

"I won't say!"

"You have 30 hours left Ben." Albedo said. "Tell him what can stop Kenny or I will change 30 hours to 3 hours."

"Ok fine. I'll tell." Ben 10,000 said.

"Good..." Hex said.

"All you have to do is...."

 

 

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Pichu Newbie

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JJJJJJuuuusssstttt mmmmmaaaaaayyyyybbbbbbeeeeee

 

i had to draw Sandbox, Snakepit, and Shellhead because they were only metioned, not seen.

All ten of his aliens were metioned in the anime of Ben 10 when it was in the furture with Ken 10

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I'm disgruntled. AND I'M RAYGIN MAAAAAAAAAAAD for some reason. Well, let's begin to explore some of this stuff that needs some nitpicking.

 

It's confusing! Here's your plot: Kenneth Tennyson, Ben's son, just got his own Omitrix. He is so excited. Then a past evil villian of Ben's returns. And traps Ben. Now Kenny needs to save his father from the past villian. And he can't do it alone. With his 10 aliens, he starts his adventure to save Ben 10,000 and maybe even the world.

Ugh, you didn't spell OmNitrix right, you have sentence fragments, you ALSO mispelled villain (just 2 'i's), and then you have a really boring, normal-sounding plot! People USUALLY have a guy come back mysteriously and pull some crap that the main hero can't do, forcing other guys weaker than them to somehow do it better! I don't see how this sounds groundbreaking. And even FURTHER into the confusion I go as I begin to wonder, 'how come there's a SECOND ONE?!', until I remember that one season finale, giving it some plausibility...

 

But either way, it doesn't really look like anything that special. It also seems like you're going to handle the futuristic technology in an overdone, bland way (take this as your cue to get really creative with it all), and the worst thing about it all is that YOU DIDN'T EVEN WAIT TO POST THE FIRST CHAPTER YET?!?!?! Posting the topic before the story is a really weird idea. It's like, "Yo everyone I have a story and I want you to have the fortune of reading it when I get around to finishing it okay bye!" It sounds really irritatingly prideful, as if we should all get ourselves hyped up about your magical fantastical delicous writings before we GET even a SAMPLE! Aren't I able to make it sound really douche-ish?

 

Well, anyways, all I can say is all that: Your plot looks boring and not all that well-written, even, making it seem like the REAL story won't look well. At least fix up the plot summary, and make it presentable. If not, you'll probably get... sixty, maybe seventy views before you give up on the project.

 

But hey, look at what I did with the abysmal plot of Yu-Gi-Oh! GX. I made it... SOMEWHAT more entertaining... so that means that you COULD be even better with this than I am right now; who the hell am I to judge?!

 

Well, back to my rantings. How DARE you join a YGO forum and make yourself all Pokemon-related! Go join PE2K, ya bastard!! Furthermore, what the hell's up wit' all these new Ben 10 fanfictions suddenly?! I mean, Ken 10, Ann 10, is there gonna be a third one?! And why can't they have more original names, like BOB 10, or JIMMY 10, or even YUGI 10?! No, I don't wanna read Yugi 10, and I'm sorry for letting my evil side take control of the keyboard for that paragraph. Let what I said BEFORE this paragraph simmer and think about what you're gonna do from here.

 

*NOTE: The last paragraph was to be taken hilariously. Any harm dealt to people who like Ben 10 and Poke'mon has been coincidential and accidental. Please do not kill Weather Report.

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ummm sorry to burst your bubble but Kai Green is the confirmed mother of both Kenny and Little Gwen' date=' doesn't mean they couldn't have had a divorce but I'm just sayin

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This explains why Kenny has tan skin.

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i know she is but she was only in one episode and i like julie more

 

I too like Julie, but just pay attention. Kai Green was only in one episode, thus she is not qualified to be Ken's mother, even though Word of God says she is. However, Ken, who was also only in one episode, is qualified to be the focus of your fanfic. You don't deserve justification, but let's just say that Julie is the biological mother of Ken in the possible future (Just like how Ken 10 is just another possible future) and that this Ken is an entirely different Ken from the show.

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can you stop posting in foe fic if your going to talk crap, here let me explain

 

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Is it just me or did a 12-year-old kid who claims to have been shot, stabbed and tazered just say that the only light in his misery would be a person he doesn't know making fun about a story written by HIMSELF an internet website?

 

yeah...seriously

 

first off, why would we belive youve been shot stabbed and tazzered, can you tell us why? second, he's right, how would that help your already miserable life, to see how suckishly horrible your foefic is. he already made fun of your sexist plagerism you call a fan-fic (btw ash and dawn suck as a couple)

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