The Final Sorrow (Not a Yugioh Fan-Fic) Chapter 1

[Yatsu]

[align=center][spoiler=Plot]A world of magic and myths awaits a young boy and a select few. The story follows a young boy chosen by some divine force to be it pawn. Ivan is pushed into a world of two sides and it appears Ivan is on the side of darkness, but is it really the wrong side. Both sides have magical warriors known as Seraphim and Dark Seraphim. The light has ruled with an iron fist in this world for over 10 Millennia, and the darkness has had enough so they have decided to act. Can Ivan Tristeza help save the world or will the "Lord's" plan to wipe out existence come to pass?

 

 

[spoiler=Major Characters revealed]

Name:Ivan Tristeza

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Age:16

Background:Ivan is a trouble maker marked with the name "Ivan the Terrible" by many adults his peers think of him as rebel but his few friends know very well Ivan is not the reason behind the many mishaps that seem to follow him. On Ivan's sixteenth birthday his mother goes missing Ivan believes his own bad luck is the fault of her disappearance. Ian goes to sleep and wakes to find himself in the world of Calbz a world divided in war between light and dark, but which side is good and which evil.

Deity:A wolf puppy he finds when he wakes up in Calbz.

Specialty:Combat

Side: Dark Seraphim

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1: Welcome To Calbz]

Hi, my name is Ivan Tristeza, people tease me calling me "Ivan the Terrible", usually because where I go trouble never seems to far behind. Like this one time when I was six, my mother and I (My dad is dead says my mom) moved into this new apartment and not even to seconds into unpacking a flock of pigeons flew into the house and dropped presents all over the house. It took us, mostly mom, two months to get the smell of pigeon poop out of the house. Another time when we moved again, we moved a lot, when I sat down in my new school some kid gave me a dirty look and twenty minutes later when he got up to go to go sharpen his pencil and sat down again the chair completely broken and he had fallen to the floor, of course my name was the first out of his ugly mouth and I didn't help myself when I said his fat ass was probably the reason the chair broke [And trust me he was HUGE!]. So anyway today is my sixteenth birthday and my mom never came home to pick me up from school then when I finally arrived home later that night, and after a couple of hours after that my mom still hadn't shown up. After a while I got worried but she must have just been held up at work [Her boss was a jerk.] So after I called everyone of my 7 friends [Pathetic I know] to tell them the party was cancelled I decided to hop in the shower. As soon as I walked out and slipped and when I got up I looked at what I slipped on there was so much water on the floor it looked like someone had poored half of the Hudson River into my bathroom.

"I have to clean that up," I said to myself.

I walked out into the hallway into the deserted appartment, it felt as though there was no other soul inside of Apartment 44. "Hmm, weird," I said. I opened the fridge to see what there was to eat. "Oh great week old pizza," I popped that sucker in the microwave and started munching as soon as it was done. "HOT HOT HOT," I screamed and I swore I heard laughter in the background. I turned and searched the deserted apartment "Who's there?" I asked. Nothing asnwered, "Of course I'm just going crazy." I turned the TV on still eating my pizza and then the doorbell rang. "I guess mom lost her key," I said to myslef and walked to the door. When I opened the door I started saying, "Where have you been Missy," but stopped to see that it wasn't my mother. In fact it was one of her close firends, Miss Beamer.

"Is your mother here?" Miss Beamer looked worried.

"No, was she at work?" I asked starting to wonder where else she would be. "

No," Miss Beamer replied scared, "I haven't seen her all day I was hoping she was skipping work to spend some time with you on your birthday."

"Ummm, haven't seen since this morning," rembering when his mom gave him an embarrising birthday gift, a plush toy wolf puppy. After that my instincts kicked into overdrive as we called everyone my mom knew, then everyone Miss Beamer and I knew. "Where on earth is she," I wondered.

Not on earth, an angelic voice answered my rhetorical question. The voice spoke as though every word was an enlogated musical note.

Where else than, I asked biwildered. I mean where else could she be, Pluto.

Not even close, the voice chimed began to laft, How about another realm.

"WHAT," I screamed aloud. I seemed to starttle Miss Beamer who was now on the phone with officials.

"Yes we have tried everywhere, we cannot find her," Miss Beamer spoke into the phone. She hung up the phone and sighed, "Ivan do wish to stay at my house tonight or are you fine by yourself?" she seemed to not care either I answered I was more than likely going with her.

"I'll stay just in case she shows up," I said hoping that would work.

"Okay, call if she does," Miss Beamer said and stroud out the front door. I must've stayed awake for hours waiting. I stared at the plush dog as if it was the one who kidnapped my mother.

No, something like it though, it was that voice again.

"What do you mean," I asked it, nothing happened. "Pssh, I think I'm going crazy," I laughed like one of those evil maniacs in the bad kid cartoons I imagined the lightning flashing behind me.

You're a weird kid. the voice seemed to join in on my maniacal laughter. After nearly 10 minutes at staring at the stuffed animal I broke and finally fell asleep. I woke up and found myself in a green pasture. Where in gods name am I I kept repeating the question inside my head for a solid 5 minutes before something answered.

"We're in Calbz, you ingorant human," a rough and firm voice replied.

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Don't mind at all