How would I word this effect?

[J-Max]

Basiccly I am making a Jesse card for my Yu-Gi-Oh character Tribute set but I have hit a snag. I want Jesse to also be treated as a Crystal Beast while on the field. Here is what I have so far.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in response to a "Crystal Beast" being placed in yoru Spell & Trap Zone. This card is also treated as a "Crystal Beast" monster. While this card is face-up on your field, all "Crystal Beasts" in your Spell & Trap Zone are treated as 2 Continuous Spells instead. If this card is destroyed you can add 1 card with "Crystal" in it's Card Lore from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

[JadenxAtemYAOI]

Thanks for the advice but i'm using exclusive OCG made by me :P In the Card Lore. So cards like Rare Value can be grabbed ^_^

 

oh okay. nice idea.

[Max Darkness]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in response to a "Crystal Beast" monster's effect activating and being treated as a Continuous Spell Card. This card is also treated as a "Crystal Beast" monster. While this card is face-up on the field, all "Crystal Beast" monsters in your Spell & Trap Zone are treated as 2 Continuous Spell Cards instead*. If this card is destroyed you can add 1 card with "Crystal" in its Effect from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

* Does that mean each takes up 2 S/TC Zones or if you control 2, they are treated as 4? I'll fix that bit when you answer.

[J-Max]

Each Crystal Beast is treated as 2 Crystals. So 2 is 4 etc.

[Max Darkness]

Then this is your completed effect:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in response to a "Crystal Beast" monster's effect activating and being treated as a Continuous Spell Card. This card is also treated as a "Crystal Beast" monster. While this card is face-up on the field, all "Crystal Beast" monsters in your Spell & Trap Card Zones are treated as 2 Continuous Spell Cards instead. If this card is destroyed you can add 1 card with "Crystal" in its Effect from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

[J-Max]

*Hugs* This is fantastic! A rep is coming your way right now.! :D

[Max Darkness]

You're welcome.

[JadenxAtemYAOI]

Basiccly I am making a Jesse card for my Yu-Gi-Oh character Tribute set but I have hit a snag. I want Jesse to also be treated as a Crystal Beast while on the field. Here is what I have so far.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in response to a "Crystal Beast" being placed in your Spell & Trap Zone. This card is also treated as a "Crystal Beast" monster. While this card is face-up on your field' date=' all "Crystal Beasts" in your Spell & Trap Zone are treated as 2 Continuous Spells instead. If this card is destroyed you can add 1 card with "Crystal" in it's [b']name[/b] from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

that's all I could really help with.

[J-Max]

Thanks for the advice but i'm using exclusive OCG made by me :P In the Card Lore. So cards like Rare Value can be grabbed ^_^