Guest War Torn Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 I made this story for an English Assignment. Its very good and I hope you like it. Note: It's about 10 pages when done. [spoiler=Prolouge]War has been apart of life for years. Some have more importance than others, some teach lessons. I remember of the time where a great war happened. The war was so great that it lasted over three hundred years. It was between multiple kingdoms throughout the world that started in the year 2395. Things returned to how they were during the time of Absolute Monarchs. This change happened during an organized revolt against Democracy. I am the descendent of the person who organized all this. It happened because there wasn’t strong enough leadership to control health regulations. People thought that rulers with absolute power were better off. That happened in the year 2095. People accepted the idea of Absolute Monarchs as a way of life. What they did not know was that another war would begin 300 years later by a family with a dark secret. I am the last survivor of this family and I can only say that we have a demon with the lust for war. It was that same demon that started this war. It is now the year 2700 and I have decided to break my silence and tell my story. [spoiler=Chapter 1]“Long live King Jonathan!” shouted a noble while crowning the new king. “Long Live King Jonathan!” shouted the rest of the crowd. They all continued shouting together until signaled to stop. It was Germany in the year 2680 and my younger brother Jonathan was crowned king of Germany at the age of 15. Our father had just died and a new king was needed. Even though I was the oldest I was not crowned king. On my father’s death bed, he said clearly that Jonathan was to be the next king. I was furious and left Germany. You could say that I let my demon take total control of me at that point. I left and went on a wild rampage, conquering near-by neutral kingdoms that weren’t in the war at the time. I was 25 at the time. When I was done conquering I was 30. My brother knew that near-by kingdoms were falling, but he didn’t know who was responsible. When he found out that it was I who was responsible, he set out to find me and punish me for the wrong I had done. “My lord,” said Jonathan’s top advisor. “You can’t leave the kingdom with an army of a couple thousand. May I remind you that we are in the middle of a war and if the rival kingdoms or your brother happen to find you, you will be killed and Germany will be in a total panic.” “I am aware of the danger,” replied Jonathan. “But I must free my brother from the demon that controls him. If I don’t, the world is doomed.” “I can see what you mean my lord, but you could take an army of 20 thousand with you on your journey. It can give you more protection from your savage, blood thirsty Necrons your brother calls an army.” “If I do, then it would be like an invitation for my brother to come and destroy me and Germany. Do you want what happened to Austria and Hungry to happen here?” His advisor was speechless with Jonathan’s wisdom and left him alone. Jonathan set out three days later. I knew that he was coming for me from the demon inside me. Jonathan had a demon inside him and his demon communicated with mine which in turn told me he was coming. I prepared an ambush for him on the German-Austrian border. I commanded a force of five thousand to kill as many of his troops as they wanted, but to bring Jonathan to me. “My demon has told me that my brother is coming for me,” I said to my troops. “If he wants that I shall help him. Go out to the German-Austrian border and wait there. Then, once he arrives, kill as many of his troops as you want, but I command for you to bring my brother to me.” My troops gave a loud cheer and flew off to the border. My armies weren’t normal humans. They were humans fused with nanobots I created to make them deadlier and with abilities that regular humans couldn’t comprehend. My soldiers were like killer bees striking unsuspecting people during the summer. [spoiler=Chapter 2]Coming Soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Jolta Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 School Assignment? I would use my current running Fanfic as a School Assignment. Go ahead and read it, its about a girl who kicks ass using a high-tech watch. *Slams Watch* Leviathan! Ssssso, today I will breifly comment on the ssssstory. Interesssssting there were German kingssss in the Future. I exssspected butt-kicking watchessss like mine. Doesssn't sssseem to sssuck, a sssuspect ssssomeone will insult the “Long live King Jonathan!” shouted a noble while crowning the new king. “Long Live King Jonathan!” shouted the rest of the crowd. They all continued shouting together until signaled to stop. Yessss, being very young, sssuch linessss sssurprisssse me. They are awesssome. *Times out* Sss- I mean, so in other words, pretty suitable for me. Yeah, apparently, Ann 10 was my character. Crab decided to use her for his Foefic comments for being Ssssuetiful. I screwed her up in a sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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