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Yes' date=' but his mind is clouded by the chance to get back at me so I find it an unfair vote.

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Get back at you? We had a minor scuffle, is all. I posted on one of your competition threads that your competition was illegal, and made some comment about your OCG being bad, and you are losing the competition 3-0, but that's besides the point. I genuinely had not noticed in particular that this was you (I was too engrossed in the cards, actually), but if you don't believe me, that's fine. I'll post a proper critique.

 

LDB (Light Destruction Beast)

 

To me, this seems to be a bit of a boring title, but I think the picture's ok and in terms of looks this hasn't ruined it for me. I can't see any OCG errors, apart from a capitalisation mistake (should Attack be attack?). The effect seems balanced to me, as the destruction after three turns counters the immediate strength of a 1000 point ATK gain. The ATK + DEF too seem balanced - it is a card bent on destruction, so it does not need a high DEF, but the ATK is not massively high (for a Level 7 with 800 DEF), which makes up for the other effects. All in all, I think it is a good card that could be used in a DARK deck.

 

Lilith, Mother of the Night

 

This card does have a better name, as you would associate the name "Lilith" with vampires and so forth, and the picture does look like a vampire. But the effect:

 

When this Card is Normal Summoned half the ATK of all LIGHT monsters on your opponets side of the field. In addition Select one monster on your opponets side of the field this Card gains ATK equal to half the selected monsters original ATK.[/Quote]

 

I can see a number of mistakes here...Card doesn't need a capital, the first half should be halve, opponents is missing the second n and so forth. Also, the effect is rather bland and only the first effect actually targets LIGHT monster, which was the point of the contest. It feels like you've got a DARK monster you made and then just added in the bit about halving ATK to make it fit this contest.

 

And that is why my vote went to Light Master. Not for some petty grudge I didn't know existed.

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As we can see Psycholera explained his vote quite nicely which means that is 5-3 for me.I will Lock this Thread as soon as Aqua Girl gives me the 3 Reputation Points and the 20 Points that were supposed to be given as the prize.And please Aqua Girl don't say that Psycholera's explanation wasn't enough because as we can all see,it was more than enough.

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