Allesk Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Oh man Uwaki and Kaosu are unstoppable. haha They are the replica exterminators Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namelessk Posted August 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 It seems they are. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 Name: Umi NiiroAge: 280[spoiler=Appearance:] Umi is a very slender girl. Despite being 280 she looks as though that she is 19. She has a fair complexion that seems more fair then it is due to her vibrant red hair. Her hair goes down a little past the shoulders. It is layered, making it seem more thick on the top of her hear and thinner as it goes down. On the right side of her head rests a red rose. The rose is more positioned more on the front of her head. In the light her eyes are a lime green but otherwise they appear to be more olive green. She wears glasses. The frames are red, but only outline the bottom of the lenses. So the top of the lenses are free. She has a thread like cord as thin as fishing-line that goes from one side of the frames around her neck to the other side. It rests loosely on the back of her neck. These glasses amplify her vision for she already has 20/20 vision. She has a wide mouth and she she grins her teeth resemble that of a shark somewhat. She wears the normal vice-captain shinigami outfit. She also wears white gloves. [spoiler=Personality:] Umi's personality is as her name implies. She can calm and gentle, at some moments. But she can change suddenly. her personality is like that of an ocean. She can be harsh and unforgiving. However if you respect her and treat her nicely she will be kind and gentle. There are some acceptations though. She respects those above her no matter how they treat her. She knows her place and does not forget it. Normally Umi acts silly and joyous. Squad: 4Vice Captain[spoiler=History:] Umi was enrolled into the shinigami academy at a young age. She advanced normally like the others. She excelled in kidou. She trained with it and mastered a select amount of them. It was not until after she graduated that she achieved her shikai. After achieving it she realized her Shikai was more accustomed to the fourth squad. She trained alongside her captain Rnaki. She learned how to shunpo and became very good at it. She learned that it was her job to heal others and if she wasn't able to keep herself safe then how would she be able to keep others safe. So she trained her speed. Learning how to move as quickly as the captains. After a while she had mastered her shikai. It wasn't long until she was made Vice captain. . [spoiler=Zanpakutou]Zanpakutou Name: BuraddobankuZanpakutou Appearance: Buraddobanku is a shiny silver blade. It is the size of an average zanpakutou. There is no guard on the blade and the hilt is wrapped in a red lace. The blade rests in a sheathe that is made of steel. The sheathe can act just like blunt zanpakutou for Umi. The sheathe is a lime green. The sheathe is just slightly longer then the blade itself so it has a better reach, almost as long as the entire Zanpakutou itself but slightly shorter.Shikai Release Phrase: "Sow what others have reaped Buraddobanku!"Shikai Appearance and Abilities: The sheathe forms into a metal thimbles on each of her fingers on her left hand. and thread wraps around her palm, the thread is stronger then steel. Her zanpakitou forms into a somewhat long needle. The needle can change sizes getting bigger or smaller at will. The thread is strong enough to block slashed form a zanpakutou. The needle can move independently. The needle has the ability to cut and inflict pain as a normal zanpakutou does. But it also as the ability to sow cuts closed. The reaitsu in the thread heals the wounds over time and the sowing keeps from bleeding. While her shikai is active if Umi cuts her self open with her own needle she can manipulate her own blood, using reaitsu to alter it and heal others. It is not a means of attack or defense only to heal. Although she must watch because using to much can make her bleed out. [spoiler=Kidou] She is is able to use hanki on each of the kidou spells she has mastered. [spoiler=Bakudou] 39. Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield) 62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence) 73. Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal)81. Danku (斷空, Splitting Void) [spoiler=Hado] 32. Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash) 54. Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames) 63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon) Skills: Offense 6/10Defense: 7/10Strength: 6/10Speed/Dexterity: 10/10Intelligence: 9/10Kido: 9/10Spiritual Pressure: 10/10Total: 60/70 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allesk Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Well Looks like Joey is back. So Rnaki is back as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Well I made a vice captain for him. =] And I'm thinking about making another vice-captain for squad 2 if that is alright. I have so much time on my hands lately and have nothing better to do so i figure why not make some apps. I love how dead the rp's were today.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namelessk Posted August 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Ah...I fell asleep after work today. I'll be up pretty much all night. It sucks because no one will be up with me to post. Your app looks great. I see nothing wrong. Accepted (1/2) If Ryuujinn isn't able to accept it as well in like 2 days, then just go ahead and begin RPing with your character. Also, nice to see you back Joey. Welcome back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 I can be up all night heh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namelessk Posted August 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Oh, alright cool. I might be slow in posting because I'm on the other forum posting on stuff too. If you want, you can come there because there's a chat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 I might check it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allesk Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 I should be able to be up most the night.. nothing better to do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryuujinn Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Hope/Little Monster: Accepted (2/2) go play with that.. xD.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namelessk Posted August 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Well since you're up too Kaze, come to the chat as well! Click my signature! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allesk Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Ehh that has a chatango it makes my comp freeze up D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Why does everyone have two names =/ So confusing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namelessk Posted August 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Oh, alright. I forgot about that. That sucks. :( Oh, about the two names. Well, Allesk and I have known each other from xat when we used to speed RP before we moved to forum RP about two years ago I think. That's how we know Ninjew as well. Personally, I didn't want to use the name 'Jazz' as my name on here, so I made it something much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 ohh I see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 What happens when we kill a replica? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 It depends. If you kill your own you die too.If you kill someone elses then nothing it just dies. But damage you inflict on your own replica reflects back onto you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Oh thats simple then, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namelessk Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Sorry about not posting today. I had things I had to take care of that were really bothering me. I will post tomorrow definitely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Chaos Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Name: Tentei TenmaAge: 80[spoiler=Appearance:] Tentei stands about 6 foot 5 inches with black hair down to his waist, normally kept back in a pony tail. He is muscular with a bulky build his shoulders are not very broad but the rest of his body is like that of a proffesional body builder, he is rather intimadating figure with scar's that cover most of his upper torso, the most noticable one is from his right shoulder to his left hip, witch was made by a Vasto Lord that had apeared in the human world. Tentei's eyes are a blueish collor that appear to be empty and lifeless. He wears the normal robes of a vice captain, but it is cut and torn from his many battles. His face is his most appealing feature, his face has only on scar that goes from just above his right eye to his cheek, which was also made by the same vasto lord that gave him the one on his chest, his face is rather soft and friendly except for the scar. [spoiler=Personality:] Tentei is very calm and relaxed while he is with his friends, but tends to be shy around people he doesn't know, he tends to talk only to his friends and captain, he is never in a bad mood, but he tends to be very blunt and straight forward no matter what the situation. In battle Tentei is very literal he considers every angle and allways tries to stay one step ahead. He is very level headed letting nothing get to him or set him off, he shows no emotion in battle making it very hard to read what he is thinking. His strategies seem to be strange, but somehow manage to get him through most situations. Squad: 11Captain or Vice Captain: Vice CaptainSeat(If not Captain or Vice Captain):[spoiler=History:]Tentei was born to a very low ranking clan that had never raised a soul reaper as succsesful as Tentei. He was brought up as any normal boy was, but he was different, he had a will to fight. He trained long and hard every day to make himself strong, he trained till he would pass out from exhaustion. His teen years were alittle more layed back he was the youngest in squad eleven, even though he wasn't as old as the other members of the squad he was still one of the stronger members, not counting the third seat and up. He still trained vigorusly keeping his skills in check, he promoted to third seat at the age of 19 and soon after he was sent on a mission with the captain and vice captain to the human world. There had been a number of hollows appearing and one had a very strong spiritual pressure. When they arrived on the scene they were greated by a very powerful vasto lord, Tentei was nearly killed in the fight against the hollow, but he surrvived. He was left with two perment reminders of the battle that nearly ended his life, he rarely speaks of it and ignored anyone who asked about the scars. Soon after he unlocked his Shikai, he trained even more vigurously after he gained his Shikai pushing his limits everytime, acouple of times he was accually brought to the infermery for treatment because he kept pushing his body to its limits. Finally he achieved Bankai at age thirty, he was also promoted to Vice captain, and is a very formitable Shinigami [spoiler=Zanpakutou]Zanpakutou Name: Adauchi[spoiler=Zanpakutou Appearance:] a long two handed katana whos blade from a distance looks like it has a serrated edge, but up close you can tell that the sword has seen much abuse. the sword's hilt wrap is the only decrotive part of the sword, it is red with black lines running the length of the hilt, the wrap was orriganally white, but was stained red by blood. The hilt gaurd is a black circle with a few stracht marks from the many battles the sword has seen. Shikai Release Phrase: Destory them......... Adauchi![spoiler=Shikai Appearance and Abilities:] in its released form Adauchi resembles a giant red claymore. the blade is massive compared to its sealed form, the hilt and hilt gaurd form a large Y shape with an eye in the split of the Y, the hilt cap resembles a pair of bat wings with a small black runy in the center. the blade on Adauch's released form is accautully serrated giving it stronger offencive capabilities. Adauchi has an ability similar to Zangetsu's Getsuga Tenshou except the blast is fired in a straight line that veries in size depending on the time it was charged, it is refered to as Muchitsujo Doki, the beam is a blood color, it normally takes a few seconds to charge. Dew to its size Adauchi is slow, but its attacks are devistating when they connect to an opponent. Bankia: N/A Kidou: N/A does not use kidou Skills: Offense 10/10Defense: 9/10Strength: 10/10Speed/Dexterity: 5/10Intelligence: 9/10Kido: 0/10Spiritual Pressure: 8/10Total: 51/70 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Vice-captains aren't allowed bankai. Or else I would have given Umi one. And I don't know for sure but I doubt your age is allowed since he is so young. You app makes it seem like your guy has gone through lots of training to get where he is which would mean his age would have to be a lot older, but that is just me. The Owner and Co Owner may think differently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Chaos Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 well his training was very intense, and like it said he pushed himself till he was on the floor passed out almost every time, which yes has some set backs(my speed is low), and what I was going for was him unlocking the full power of his bankia later on, if that would be ok with owner and co-owner. And, as for his age, he is alittle young, so that I can agree could use a change(consider it was 2 in the morning when I was making this), but I will wait to here owner/co-owner's opinion before I make any changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li††le Mons†er Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Alrighty then. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
namelessk Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 @Lord of Chaos I see nothing wrong with the app except for the age and the Bankai. The age needs to be way higher. Thirty for a soul born in Rukongai is at least like 10 or something in real age. Spirits age slowly. Now, about the Bankai, I'm debating whether or not I should let you have that since there isn't anyone else with a Bankai as a Vice Captain. Allesk's character did, but he remade it without the Bankai. Bankai is reserved specifically for Captains. Tell you what, I'm thinking about making a sequel to this RP once the third Arc finishes. You can have the Bankai in that one. Is that cool? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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