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Yeah!!!! It turns out both jumpking and lightmaster forgot to add me:)


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I've got 150 posts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...where's the whiskey?

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Congratz Caiba, well i already gave you a Rep to congratulate you but Congratz anyway. And Jumpking, honestly tell me something, does it look like i am trying to compete wth your organization?So you have 15 Members and we have 16 Members, we are almost equal and honestly i don't care if our Organization is bigger or your Organization is bigger, i made this for fun not some silly competition with you.Okay?

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ok here are the angel is sayed i send. only two for starting i need comments from everything but picture (it's not my own made)

 

and seriosly how i can do that hide/show thing?

 

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When an "Angel" monster on your side of the field battles with an opponent's monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Then, negate the attack and this card battles with the opponent's monster that battled with the "Angel" monster. During either player's Battle Phase, when this face-up monster battles, you can discard 1 "Angel" monster, to end the battle phase and remove this card from play until the end phase.

 

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If this card is face-up on your side of the field, other "Angel" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. When an "Angel" monster you control would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.

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Okay now that you posted them i will gladly comment on them. Okay first Card just to see if there are some OCG Errors:

 

When an "Angel" monster on your side of the field battles with an opponent's monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Then, negate the attack and this card battles with the opponent's monster that battled with the "Angel" monster. During either player's Battle Phase, when this face-up monster battles, you can discard 1 "Angel" monster, to have this monster gain ATK equal to the ATK of the opponent's monster it is battling, until the End Phase.

 

Above all the first card has some OCG Errors and this is how it should look fixed. Now the Effect, well you basically made it an Honest for the Cost of a monster which is not Balanced, it is simply broken. Remove that Effect and add another one. Above all the other effect is not overpowered and it is kind of Original so i give this card a 6/10, replace the Honest effect and it will become a 9/10.Now the second card OCG Fix:

 

 

If this card is face-up on your side of the field, other "Angel" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. When an "Angel" monster you control would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.

Okay now second card, less OCG Errors but Still it is a Simple Effect that protects Angel Monsters, nothing new. But still balanced enough. The OCG was fixed it is a little balanced but nothing Original so i will give it a 4/10 and it will become a 7/10 if you fix the OCG.

 

Overall, with fixed OCG i would give these Guys an 8/10 with the fixed OCG and a the removed Honest Effect. Anyway i still think you need to put a little more work into them and please change the Pictures these don't really fit them. So i guess that is it work on them a little better and they will be Great.

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