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Kingdom Hearts 3 : Reconnect [1/??? chapters/ Birth By Sleep Spoilers]

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~Marluxia~

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Yeah.

[spoiler= More?] "Marluxia!" Said sora, dashing toward him.

"the name is Lumariax, and your are in a world full of loss, pain, and suffering. But you have a choice. You can either enter this door, or this one" He raised his hand and two dark corridor appeared, one Leading back to Destiny Islands, the other leading to another new world. He continued. "If you go to your home world, Something will be different. If you go into the other, A new adventure will appaer. What is your decision?"

 

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Fixed horrible grammar on that 'More?'. Relax, I didn't change a thing, expect for adding torment and Keyblade Bearer.

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"Marluxia!" Sora said, dashing towards him.

"The name is Lumariax, and you are in a world full of loss, pain, suffering, and torment. But you have a choice. You can either enter this door, or this one." He raised his hand and two dark corridors appeared, one leading back to Destiny Islands, the other leading to a new world. "If you go back to your home world, something will be different. If you go into the other, a new adventure will appear. What is your decision, Keyblade Bearer?"

 

 

 

I'll fix the chapters later.

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