Naruto: The Untold Legacy [First Arc/Started/Accepting/ADV/PG-16/OOC]

ryuujinn · May 5, 2010

[spoiler=[b]Plot[/b]]

Naruto the Alternate Universe:

50 Years of Peace. It was made possible among all nations through the interventions of the Land of Iron and its steadfast leader, Jubei Rikudo. He single-handedly mediated every single dispute among hidden villages across the five great nations. Not only that, but he managed to make the five great Kages make amends with each other. For 50 years, there were no arguments and all missions carried out were well within the interest of the Five Great Nations.

However, 2 years ago, Jubei Rikudo has died due to a certain disease. It was not made known how he contracted the disease or how it truly killed him. What was known was that he died from heart disease due to stress. During his death, the Five Kages mourned, and the entire ninja world mourned his loss. The Five Great Nations tried to adapt and continue with the peace they've experienced, however, they failed. Disputes suddenly broke out within the different Hidden Villages across the Five Great Nations. Before the entire world knows it, the ninja world was plunged into its 2nd Ninja War.

It was bloody, and all villages involved were ravaged. None was spared. None was given mercy. Ninjas of all shapes and sizes rampaged throughout opposing nations, destroying everything they can. More than a million lives were lost, and counting. Everyone believed it would be over and peace was far from their grasp. But they were proven wrong. Two Ninja Clans surfaced from out of nowhere, hell-bent on restoring peace. Both clans possessed a unique trait, they all have Eye Techniques.

The Uchiha Clan controls the Sharingan, enabling them great feats of ninjutsu strength that rivals that of even the Five Kages. The Hyuuga Clan, on the other hand, possessed the powerful Byakugan, which sees through even the best illusions and allows them great feats in taijutsu stronger than the common iron fist taijutsu. Together, they forced the Five Kages into submission, allowing everything to calm down, and for the first time in 10 years, a Kage Summit was held in the Land of Iron, under the supervision of Jisuke Uchiha and Heisuke Hyuuga, both the leader of their respective clans. Peace was once again renewed among the Five Great Nations.

The lives of each villages moved on, scars may have been present, but wounds have already healed. Villages are now friendly again towards each other, though some of each villages inhabitants still bear deep grudges against the other villages. The Uchiha Clan decided to join the Hidden Leaf Village, seeing that the village took the worst hit during the war. The Hyuuga Clan decided to join the Hidden Sand Village, under the agreement with the Uchiha Clan to maintain the balance of power. Soon after, both Uchiha Clan and Hyuuga Clan established families in the other Hidden Villages as well, balancing the influence and stability, and improving the relationship of villages.

Little did they know that a new threat has risen. Deep in the bowels of the Land of Iron, a new leader has been proclaimed. His name is Yomi Rikudo, the successor of Jubei Rikudo. No one knows that the two leaders of the Land of Iron possessed a secret; the legendary Rinnegan, one of the three Eye Techniques. He secretly amassed his army of Samurai and prepared for war against the other nations, blaming them for the death of his predecessor. He lives a double life, acting as the mediator for the Five Kages, and at the same time, plotting his revenge, and bidding his time, waiting for the time to strike. The Akatsuki also bids their time, building their forces and plotting to overthrow the peace that has surfaced among the Five Great Nations. They work non-stop to find the secret of the legendary Eye Technique, Rinnegan, and seek entrance to the Land of Iron, where they believe the secrets to its acquisition lies.

Now, where do you stand? Are you one of the Hidden Village's Ninjas prepared for battle, and will defend their own village, or perhaps the steadfast Uchiha Clan member and Hyuuga Clan member working to foster peace? Or perhaps, one of the Akatsuki who seek only their own survival and gains? Whoever you choose, every one will be subjected to the plans of the manipulator, the Dark Steel, Yomi Rikudo, master of the Rinnegan. Will you be the one of the heroes to stop him? or one of the villains to aid him?

ARCS

First Arc: The Untold Legacy

Second Arc: A Nation's Cataclysm

[spoiler=[b]Village Profiles, Lands, and Other Information[/b]]

Hidden Leaf Village: Ninjas from this village are well rounded users of Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, and a select few specializes in Genjutsu. Currently led by a Hokage, and has friendly disposition towards other villages. Ninjas of this village can specialize in Wood and Fire techniques. Taijutsu users from this village can specialize in both speed and strength type.

Hidden Sand Village: Ninjas from this village are great ninjutsu users, and a few taijutsu users. Currently led by a Kazekage, and is friendly only to Hidden Leaf Village, Neutral to everyone else. Ninjas of this village can specialize in Sand, and Wind Techniques.

Hidden Mist Village: Ninjas from this village are great ninjutsu users and excellent genjutsu artists. Sword-user type ninjas can also come from this village. Currently led by a Mizukage, and has Neutral Dispostion towards other villages. Ninjas of this village can specialize in Water and Storm Techniques, or become specialized sword-type ninjas.

Hidden Stone Village: Ninjas from this village are great ninjutsu users, and notable taijutsu artists, and are highly durable. They are currently led by a Tsuchikage, and has neutral disposition towards other villages. Ninjas of this village can specialize in Earth and Crystal Techniques, especially Kekkai (barrier techniques of Earth and Crystal).

Hidden Cloud Village: Ninjas from this village are adept ninjutsu users, and the best taijutsu figters. Sword-user type ninjas can also come from this village. Currently led by a Raikage, and has neutral disposition towards other villages. Ninjas of this village can specialize in Lightning Techniques, and the only village where taijutsu-based ninjas can use ninjutsu along with their techniques. Also, ninjas here can become specialized sword-type ninjas.

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Basic Ninja Types:

These are the base Ninja Types, and depending on your chosen Village, may be chosen in two ways. As focused user, meaning you choose one and obtain the full power of that type, or as dual type, meaning choosing two different types, but will halve out the power output, but increases the number of possible attack and defense styles.

Ninjutsu Type Ninja: Can specialize strongly in one element or average strength in two elements. They are well rounded in terms of physical strength. Element will depend on the chosen Village.

Taijutsu Type Ninja: Can specialize in Strength or Speed type Taijutsu. Speed will hit for less damage, but are harder to attack physically, while Strength will hit significantly stronger, but cannot be expected to move as fast. Both cannot use ninjutsu or elemental recomposition unless they came from Hidden Cloud Village. If the taijutsu user is from Hidden Leaf Village, they can choose both strength and speed as their main attribute. Taijutsu users are very durable, physically, and will less likely fall easily. Hidden Stone Village taijutsu users are twice as durable if they choose strength attribute, meaning they can take double the punishment a normal taijutsu user can take.

Genjutsu Type Ninja: Can specialize completely in the use of illusions, or use basic ninjutsu. If the Genjutsu user is from Hidden Mist Village, the illusions are stronger. Genjutsu users are very fragile, and cannot withstand a direct blow from a taijutsu user regardless of attribute, but they can use defensive illusions. Unlike in the Canon universe, Genjutsu cannot be used to completely shut down the minds of opponents. Characters under genjutsu can still fight normally, but will take damage from illusions until they can dispel it from their minds.

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Specialized Types:

Instead of choosing one of the three basic types, you can choose one of the specialized types. Take note of the constraints given to each Specialized type. Also, Specialized types can still choose to take basic ninja types, but skills and effects from the basic ninja types are only at half strength.

Kekkei Genkai Users: This can come from any village, and will have their own unique abilities. Ninjas using Kekkei Genkai are subjected to great feats, but will have equally destructive drawbacks inflicted upon themselves. Take note that the Kekkei Genkai abilities must be related to the elements available to the village they will come from (i.e. Haku can manipulate ice since he came from Hidden Mist, etc). Kekkei Genkai Users can choose to be an average Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, or Genjutsu user (meaning their ninjutsu, taijutsu, or genjutsu are not as powerful as non kekkei genkai users).

Sword User Type: This can only come from Hidden Cloud and Hidden Mist Villages. They can use swords with elemental properties, depending on the village of their choice. Sword Users have swords with names, and can specialize in ninjutsu or taijutsu (both if from Hidden Cloud Village) but with ninjutsu or taijutsu at half power. Sword users cannot be Kekkei Genkai Users.

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Eye Techniques: These special techniques can only be used by either Uchiha Clan members (Sharingan) or Hyuuga Clan members (Byakugan). These eyes imbue the users amazing feats, but are subjected to drawbacks. Eye Technique users can still specialize in any of the three basic types (ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu) with their powers at full, but not as specialized types. Names of people using one of these techniques must have either "Uchiha" or "Hyuuga" as surname, and can only belong to Hidden Leaf Village (Sharingan) or Hidden Sand Village (Hyuuga).

Sharingan: Ninjas gifted with this Eye Technique can copy ONE technique the opponent has used within the last 2 post (except Kekkei Genkai and Sword techniques), may it be Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, or Genjutsu. Illusions have less effects on Sharingan users. However, this effects are only effective when Sharingan is activated. This technique can only remain active for 5 of the USER'S POST, after which it enters a 2 post cooldown before it can be used again.

Byakugan: Ninjas gifted with this Eye Technique is given the ability to detect opponents from far away, gives the ability to be immune from illusions, and grants the usage of Gentle-Fist Taijutsu, which is twice as powerful as Iron Fist. If you choose Taijutsu as your secondary type as a Hyuuga, Gentle-Fist automatically replaces Iron Fist. Byakugan remains active for 10 of the USER'S POST, after which it enters a 3 post cooldown before it can be used again.

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Land Information

All villages are accessible by all factions, regardless of which village you came from. Hidden Leaf and Hidden Sand Village Ninjas are friendly towards each other, as does the village people they can interact with. Neutral villages may behave erratically, meaning they can either be friendly or hostile depending on your disposition.

Outlaws or Akatsuki Members are always treated as Hostile Faction, regardless of disposition. Village guards will always attack them on sight if they enter through the front, but may sneak into a village. Akatsuki Members can only be defeated one on one by Jounin Class Ninjas or Anbu, or by a team of Chuunin Class Ninjas. Take note that Outlaws and Akatsuki are two different factions (Outlaws are NPCs, Akatsuki are mostly PCs)

Land of Iron is inaccessible until I say so. No one can enter it nor survey it until I deemed the plot ready to progress to that part already.

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List of NPCs

These are the current lists of NPCs I will introduce. More will be added in the future:

-Outlaws

-Village Guards

-Village Ninjas

-Kages (yes, you read it right, I will be controlling the Kages for the sake of the plot. They will be replaced by PCs once the plot has moved enough, in which case I will appoint the Kages depending on the performance in the RP. Note that only Jounin ranks above can be appointed as Kages.)

-Samurai (Land of Iron)

Note**: The GameMaster is the only one entitled to manipulate the NPCs actions to the extreme extent. RP-ers are given leeway to manipulate movements if only for minor reactions such as facial expressions, mood (happy, sad, angry), and automatic responses, such as blocking, or evading. No RP-er other than the GameMaster can dictate whether or not a hit lands on an NPC or if the NPC is killed. I will decide when an NPC dies for the sake of the Plot, as well as the difficulty of the NPC itself (in case of fights).

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Teams and Ranks

Throughout the course of the RP, teams and ranks will play a great role in shaping the story of the RP.

People starts off as Chuunin, unless otherwise I am impressed with the Bio in the App. Chuunin ranks cannot be expected to output powerful techniques. They will be led by Jounins in most missions, but can go solo to perform minor missions.

Jounins are more than a few steps higher than Chuunins, and are expected to be good leaders. They can output stronger techniques, and can go toe-to-toe with Outlaws and/or Lower ranked Akatsuki Members. They go to missions with their Chuunin Members.

Anbu are exceptional members of a Village. Only exceptional Applications can be granted Anbu as their status. Anbu members can do their own missions solo, and can output generally stronger techniques than Jounins, and beat Lower ranked Akatsuki Members with ease, and match higher ranked Akatsuki Members on even footing.

Akatsuki Members are hostile Ninjas that are subdivided into two:

Low Rank: These are of equal power as Jounins, and will take at least three skilled Chuunins to defeat, or one skilled Jounin. They usually accompany one high ranked member. There can only be TEN (10) Low Ranked Members.

High Ranks: These are of equal power to an Anbu, and will take at least two skilled Jounins to defeat, or one skilled Anbu. Chuunins cannot match these members regardless of numbers. There can only be TEN (10) High Ranked Members.

You can Rank Up depending on your position:

Chuunins Rank up by defeating Three Class B Outlaw or One Class A Outlaw

Jonin can become Anbu if they defeat Two Class A Outlaw or One Low Rank Akatsuki

Anbu is the highest Rank a normal ninja can attain.

Akatsuki members rank differently.

Low Rank Members can become High Rank Members either by defeating Ten Class A Village Guards from Each Village, or defeating a High Rank Member, or defeating 5 Jounin Rank Ninjas

High Rank Member is the highest Rank an Akatsuki Member can become, and only Ten of them can exist at a given time.

To Be An Akatsuki:

You need to make an App, and fill in the necessary information. Rank can be requested, but approval lies on the quality of the application, especially the Biography Portion.

[spoiler=[b]Abilities-Techniques Information[/b]]

Techniques

Techniques revolve around Elemental Chakra Composition. They have their strengths and weaknesses:

Fire is strong against Wind, but Weak against Water

Wind is strong against Lightning, but Weak against Fire

Lightning is strong against Earth, but Weak against Wind

Earth is strong against Water, but Weak against Lightning

Water is strong against Fire, but Weak against Earth

This means that if an elemental jutsu is matched against an elemental jutsu of the same level, but of a stronger nature, then the technique with the superior nature will prevail. But if the weaker nature jutsu is at least one level higher than a superior element, then it will overpower it.

There are also some Elementally Recomposed Elements that are as follows:

Wood, Sand, Storm, and Crystal Elements. For the purpose of being in an alternate universe, these recompositions have no strength or weakness when matched against another element.

Players can learn a single element (focused type) and gain access to that element's full power and potential, or two elements (dual type) and gain access to both elements average power and potential. The available elements are dependent on which village you belong.

You may use existing (Canon) techniques, or make up your own.

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Kekkei Genkai Techniques

These are extremely powerful techniques, and will defeat any element of the same or higher level, or cancel out another Kekkei Genkai of the same level. However, they will have physical drawbacks.

For the purpose of being an Alternate Universe, I am giving you the liberty of designing your own Kekkei Genkai, BUT I will check on the drawbacks. The stronger your Kekkei Genkai's effects are, the stronger its drawbacks must be, and it must not be a trivial effect (i.e Itachi's eye bleeds when he uses Amaterasu, and causes his vision to become blurry, and also has limited uses.)

Also the Kekkei Genkai must be related to the Village you chose. (i.e Haku can recompose Ice because he's from Hidden Mist Village)

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God-like Techniques (GLT)

These are extremely powerful, and nearly unstoppable techniques accessed by the stronger Ranked Ninjas. They can be accessed by Jounins, Anbu, High Ranked-Akatsuki, and Kages/Yomi Rikudo. They will vary in quantity per rank.

Jounins can learn ONE, Anbu and High-Ranked Akatsuki can learn TWO, and Kages/Yomi Rikudo can learn up to THREE. Techniques learned will be retained and cannot be changed. If you rank up during the RP, PM me the GLT you want to add to your character's abilities.

Unlike other techniques, God-Like Techniques cannot be countered, and can only be blocked (meaning evasion is out of the question). These attacks will cause severe damage to anyone caught by it, and will cause considerable damage even if it was blocked. These techniques cannot be easily blocked, and will require very high level techniques to block them (accessible only by ranks equal to or greater than Jounins).

However, there will be very very critical drawbacks to using these techniques. One, there must be ample amount of time to set these techniques up, meaning there should be at least ONE (1) POST dedicated to just setting up the technique. This leaves the user very vulnerable if he or she is careless.

Second drawback, AFTER the usage of technique, it will enter a cooldown of at least 10 of the USER'S POST before it can be used again, and that limit may increase depending on the severity of what the technique's effect can do.

Last drawback, the user will experience physical weakness, or even temporary disability of using techniques, up to being unable to move for a certain time, all depending on the severity of the technique.

Think about all of these three drawbacks when designing your God-Like Techniques.

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Sword Techniques

These techniques all revolve around swords. They may increase the speed of the user, incorporate elemental attacks, and the like. Sword attacks varies in elements but is limited to what elements the village you chose can use.

Sword attacks that are elemental are affected by the Elemental Chakra Composition strengths and weaknesses. And sword techniques cannot incorporate long-range strikes. Meaning unless you chose ninjutsu as your secondary type, you cannot engaged opponents in long-range combat.

Sword Users cannot use Ninja Tools such as Shurikens, Kunai, etc. And are limited to using summoning scrolls.

You may design your own sword techniques, but are subjected to my approval, as all the other techniques.

[spoiler=[b]RULES, PLEASE READ[/b]]

1. All Basic YCM Rules Apply

2. Strictly NO GOD MODDING. I will be watching posts closely. If I see you escaping every and all attacks thrown at you or using techniques not approved, that will be considered as GM-ing. Of course, it is not limited to just that.

3. Posts must be at least 4 lines long, no less. You are given one chance to edit a post, until you are warned.

4. Any unnecessary arguments must be done over PM, not in the RP. The Game Master can mediate if the argument is related to the RP.

5. No DUPLICATE GLTs or Kekkei Genkai ir . If a person already has a unique power, you cannot copy it or make minor changes to it and call it yours. Use your creativity and be unique.

6. The Gamemaster's words are the law. Live with it.

7. Vulgar words are allowed, but only up to a certain extent. Do not fill your post with 60% vulgar words.

8. NO OOC ONLY POSTS. This is not tolerated and will be equivalent to two violations unless otherwise there is a very very very very good reason behind the post.

9. FIREWALLING IS IMPLEMENTED IN THIS RP. Definition: Firewalling is the act of cutting off the writer's knowledge from the character's knowledge. Your character's cannot be all-knowing and cannot know what other people know unless it was explicitly made known to all.

10. You can state in the Application under "Rank" section which rank you want to be, but its approval will depend on how well the application was made (50% criteria come from Bio).

11. Grammar. Please check your grammar. While this is minor, I would appreciate it if we can practice good grammar. Typo-graphical errors are naturally occurring, but don't push it too much that the entire post is nonsense.

12. When engaged in battles, let the fight evolve by creating a brief description of what's happening. Saying that "I use raikiri, and hit [insert opponent's name here] in the chest. He dies, I win." is unacceptable and borders on God Modding. Also, NPCs will die when I say so. This means you cannot kill them even if they're already on their last remaining limbs. You cannot also kill anyone just because you like it. PM me if you want to kill a player, and that player must agree first via PM.

13. You are allowed to make 2 characters, but they must be both under the same Village/Faction. Also, you are allowed to create only ONE Specialized Type/Eye Technique User Ninja/Sword User Type. Therefore, if you will create another character, that one will have to be a basic type. Ranks will depend on the quality of the Application, but may be requested on the application field "Rank".

14. Have Fun. :)

First and Second Violations merits warnings. In case of God-Modding, the post is ignored, and will be requested for deletion if necessary. Third Violation and you're booted out.

[spoiler=[b]Apps[/b]]

REMOVE EVERYTHING IN PARENTHESIS

[spoiler=Ninja App]

Name:

Gender:

Village:

Appearance: (No Pics, At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE )

Personality: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Biography: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Rank: (Put your desired Rank here, but it will be subjected to approval depending on how well the Application was done.)

Ninja Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu):

Attribute Type: (For ninjutsu, specify whether Focused Type (one element) or Dual Type (two elements)| For Taijutsu, specify whether Strength Type or Speed Type (put both if from Hidden Leaf Village)

Element: (Must be related to the village chosen, ignore if non-Hidden Cloud Taijutsu User)

Skills-Techniques-Jutsu: (put here your desired jutsus. if it's custom made, describe its effects, and any drawbacks coupled with the technique.) (SPOILERS PLEASE)

[spoiler=Kekkei Genkai Ninja App]

Name:

Gender:

Village:

Appearance: (No Pics, At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Personality: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Biography: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Rank: (Put your desired Rank here, but it will be subjected to approval depending on how well the Application was done.)

Kekkei Genkai Description: (Describe your bloodline limit, its uses and/or abilities, its origin if you want, etc.)(SPOILERS PLEASE)

Secondary Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu): (ONLY IF APPLICABLE. YOU MAY SKIP THIS IF YOU WANT)

Attribute Type: (For ninjutsu, specify whether Focused Type (one element) or Dual Type (two elements)| For Taijutsu, specify whether Strength Type or Speed Type (put both if from Hidden Leaf Village) (SKIP IF NO SECONDARY TYPE WAS CHOSEN)

Element: (Must be related to the village chosen, ignore if non-Hidden Cloud Taijutsu User) (SKIP IF NO SECONDARY TYPE WAS CHOSEN)

Kekkei Genkai Abilities / Jutsu:

(put here your desired jutsus. if it's custom made, describe its effects, and any drawbacks coupled with the technique. For Kekkei Genkai, drawbacks are required.) (SPOILERS PLEASE)

[spoiler=Sword User Ninja App]

Name:

Gender:

Village:

Appearance: (No Pics, At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Personality: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Biography: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Rank: (Put your desired Rank here, but it will be subjected to approval depending on how well the Application was done.)

Sword Name and Appearance: (describe your sword. SPOILERS PLEASE)

Secondary Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu): (ONLY IF APPLICABLE. YOU MAY SKIP THIS IF YOU WANT)

Attribute Type: (For ninjutsu, specify whether Focused Type (one element) or Dual Type (two elements)| For Taijutsu, specify whether Strength Type or Speed Type (put both if from Hidden Leaf Village) (SKIP IF NO SECONDARY TYPE WAS CHOSEN)

Element: (Must be related to the village chosen, ignore if non-Hidden Cloud Taijutsu User) (SKIP IF NO SECONDARY TYPE WAS CHOSEN)

Sword Abilities / Jutsu:(put here your desired jutsus. if it's custom made, describe its effects, and any drawbacks coupled with the technique. For Sword Abilities, explain their effects and application clearly.)

[spoiler= Eye Technique Users]

Name: (Must end have either Uchiha (Sharingan) or Hyuuga (Byakugan) as Surname)

Clan: (Uchiha or Hyuuga)

Gender:

Village: (Hidden Leaf (Uchiha) or Hidden Sand (Byakugan))

Appearance: (No Pics, At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Personality: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Biography: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Rank: (Put your desired Rank here, but it will be subjected to approval depending on how well the Application was done.)

Ninja Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu):

Attribute Type: (For ninjutsu, specify whether Focused Type (one element) or Dual Type (two elements)| For Taijutsu, specify whether Strength Type or Speed Type (put both if from Hidden Leaf Village))

Element: (Must be related to the village chosen, ignore if non-Hidden Cloud Taijutsu User)

Skills-Techniques-Jutsu: (put here your desired jutsus. if it's custom made, describe its effects, and any drawbacks coupled with the technique.) (SPOILERS PLEASE)

[spoiler=[b]Akatsuki App[/b]]

[spoiler=Akatsuki Ninja App[/b]

Name:

Gender:

Village: (put "Missing Nin" without the "" at the end of the village name)

Appearance: (No Pics, At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE )

Personality: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Biography: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Rank: (Put your desired Rank (low or high) here, but it will be subjected to approval depending on how well the Application was done.)

Ninja Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu):

Attribute Type: (For ninjutsu, specify whether Focused Type (one element) or Dual Type (two elements)| For Taijutsu, specify whether Strength Type or Speed Type (put both if from Hidden Leaf Village)

Element: (Must be related to the village chosen, ignore if non-Hidden Cloud Taijutsu User)

Skills-Techniques-Jutsu: (put here your desired jutsus. if it's custom made, describe its effects, and any drawbacks coupled with the technique.) (SPOILERS PLEASE)

[spoiler=Akatsuki Kekkei Genkai App]

Name:

Gender:

Village: (put "Missing Nin" without the "" at the end of the village name)

Appearance: (No Pics, At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Personality: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Biography: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Rank: (Put your desired Rank here, but it will be subjected to approval depending on how well the Application was done.)

Kekkei Genkai Description: (Describe your bloodline limit, its uses and/or abilities, its origin if you want, etc.)(SPOILERS PLEASE)

Secondary Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu): (ONLY IF APPLICABLE. YOU MAY SKIP THIS IF YOU WANT)

Attribute Type: (For ninjutsu, specify whether Focused Type (one element) or Dual Type (two elements)| For Taijutsu, specify whether Strength Type or Speed Type (put both if from Hidden Leaf Village) (SKIP IF NO SECONDARY TYPE WAS CHOSEN)

Element: (Must be related to the village chosen, ignore if non-Hidden Cloud Taijutsu User) (SKIP IF NO SECONDARY TYPE WAS CHOSEN)

Kekkei Genkai Abilities / Jutsu:

(put here your desired jutsus. if it's custom made, describe its effects, and any drawbacks coupled with the technique. For Kekkei Genkai, drawbacks are required.) (SPOILERS PLEASE)

[spoiler=Akatsuki Sword User Ninja]

Name:

Gender:

Village:(put "Missing Nin" without the "" at the end of the village name)

Appearance: (No Pics, At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Personality: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Biography: (At least 4 lines, SPOILERS PLEASE)

Rank: (Put your desired Rank here, but it will be subjected to approval depending on how well the Application was done.)

Sword Name and Appearance: (describe your sword. SPOILERS PLEASE)

Secondary Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu): (ONLY IF APPLICABLE. YOU MAY SKIP THIS IF YOU WANT)

Attribute Type: (For ninjutsu, specify whether Focused Type (one element) or Dual Type (two elements)| For Taijutsu, specify whether Strength Type or Speed Type (put both if from Hidden Leaf Village) (SKIP IF NO SECONDARY TYPE WAS CHOSEN)

Element: (Must be related to the village chosen, ignore if non-Hidden Cloud Taijutsu User) (SKIP IF NO SECONDARY TYPE WAS CHOSEN)

Sword Abilities / Jutsu:(put here your desired jutsus. if it's custom made, describe its effects, and any drawbacks coupled with the technique. For Sword Abilities, explain their effects and application clearly.)

[spoiler=[b]My Apps[/b]]

[spoiler= Shuuhei Raigeki]

Name: Shuuhei Raigeki

Gender: Male

Village: Hidden Cloud Missing Nin

Appearance:

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Personality:

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Biography:

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As a kid, Shuuhei has already experienced the pain of death. His family was slaughtered during the 2nd Ninja War by Iwagakure Ninjas and left him for dead during a rainy night. It was then that a certain ninja of Kumogakure found him and raised him as his own son. It wasn't long before Shuuhei was able to hold a sword that he committed his first crime, he killed his own step-father. It was an accident. Shuuhei's latent powers suddenly awaken, enabling him feats of strength unforeseen by his mentor. In a hazy mist of blood and sweat, Shuuhei decapitated his mentor unknowingly, being in a state of frenzy himself. Once he calmed down, he was awe-stricken and sad at the loss of his mentor in his own hands. He left Kumogakure afterwards, and seek refuged in the far mountains near the Land of Iron.

It was there that he trained and honed his craft, practicing with the katana his mentor left him. He named the sword "Kaminari Ken" and he often would talk to it during free times. He also trained in the arts of taijutsu and ninjutsu, seeing its application in his own sword style. His sword style is flashy and quick, similar to lightning, and he kills with utmost efficiency. It took him more than two years to master his craft, after which he departed the mountains and head over to Hidden Cloud Village once again.

It was there that he became a high ranking Jounin, completing missions others deemed highly dangerous and fatality was sure. He earned his scars by completing those missions and bringing the Hidden Cloud Village untold honor and dignity. He was even offered the position of Raikage once, but he declined it, saying it would be a waste of time. This angered the current Raikage, and ordered for him to be punished for spitting on the title of "Raikage". It was a bad day, as it rained, Shuuhei's inner demons went berserk, killing the Jounins sent to punish him, and even proceeded to killing the current Raikage, in which he failed because more ninjas arrived. From then on, he was banished and considered as a Missing Nin.

After a few months, he joined Akatsuki on the premise that he can live freely and as he wants it to be. In exchange, he will follow orders given to him without question, to which he agreed almost casually.

Rank: High Ranked Member

Sword Name and Appearance:

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Secondary Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu): Taijutsu + Ninjutsu (Since he's from Hidden Cloud)

Attribute Type: Focused Type + Speed Type (Half Power both because Ninjutsu and Taijutsu are secondary type)

Element: Lightning

Sword Abilities / Jutsu:

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Kaminari Ken holds power to produce its own current of electricity. Whenever it strikes a target, it generates cackling noise similar to thunder, and a direct hit to flesh causes electrocution. Shuuhei can the following notable abilities with his charged katana:

Thunder Smash: Shuuhei sends a massive lightning bolt towards his blade, causing it to cackle and produce sparks. It glows brighter and brighter until it makes contact with an object, causing an outburst of electric current that causes damage. If it hits metal, it will cause that metal to be charged and produce a similar outburst which damages everything nearby, except Shuuhei. This attack can only be used during thunderstorms.

Cascading Slash: Shuuhei jumps up to the air and angles his sword towards the opponent, filling it with chakra. As chakra builds up in his blade, numerous lightning bolts hit the ground around the opponent, closing off any escape routes. He then proceeds to attacking his opponent from above, performing a downward vertical slash aimed at the opponent's head, which cause the lighting around them to explode upon the blade's contact with any part of the body of the opponent. The lightning effect can only be used during thunderstorms.

Lightning Release, Thunder Crash Technique: Shuuhei causes a temporary thunderstorm directly above him, causing the skies to darken within an area of 100 meters. The thunderstorm lasts a maximum of 5 posts, and has an internal cooldown of 2 posts after the effect has expired.

Torrential Strike: Shuuhei points the tip of his sword to his opponent, and performs numerous stabbing attacks. Each time he performs a stab, his arm becomes charged, causing electricity to build up. After ten charges, the tip of the sword releases a massive burst of energy, causing lightning bolts to explode everywhere around the target, damaging anything caught within it. This attack cannot be used for 3 posts after its initial use.

GOD-LIKE TECHNIQUE (GLT)

Ultimate Technique, Seven Wrathful Guardians of the East: Shuuhei absorbs the thunderstorm into his blade, causing it to glow brightly. He then sheathes his sword and moves into a drawing stance. Lightning Crashes down to the area around him, engulfing him in a prison of pure energy. Anything near him is electrocuted, and are rendered immobile. He then causes the lightning prison to explode, doing initial damage to anything caught within the explosion. After the explosion subsides, seven massive pillars made of lightning surround his target, disabling movements, and causing minor damage. He then draws out his katana very quickly, aiming a critical strike at the opponent's chest. If the blade tip touches the flesh, the target is killed. If it does not, it causes severe damage to the target, either way, the technique ends.

**DRAWBACK: When Shuuhei uses this GLT, he must focus for 1 POST, doing the preparations for the technique. The technique enters a 15 POST Cooldown after its usage, and cannot be used until the cooldown is finished. He cannot use another GLT for 5 posts. Also Shuuhei cannot use his sword arm and sword abilities for 3 Posts after the usage of the technique. His body is also stressed out from the technique, lowering his overall durability and limits his speed, meaning he cannot move too fast and if he takes a hit, he will surely break a bone or two.

Ultimate Technique, Great Sealing Sphere of the West: Shuuhei stabs his sword to the ground and does several hand seals. A massive thunder cloud engulfs the skies directly above Shuuhei and his opponents, cackling widely. An infinitely many sets of lightning cascades down to the ground, creating a cage around Shuuhei and his opponents, disabling the use of any ninjutsu or genjutsu. The cage, however, does not disable Kaminari Ken's abilities, and allows the use of his thunderstorm based attacks. The cage allows Shuuhei and his opponents to fight in a limited space of about 50 meters as long as the cage is in effect. The cage loses its effect after 5 posts, or if Shuuhei is knocked unconscious or is killed.

**DRAWBACK: When Shuuhei uses this GLT, he must focus for 1 POST, doing the hand seals and other preparations. The technique enters 10 POSTS cooldown after its effect expires, and cannot be used until the cooldown is finished. He cannot use another GLT for 6 posts. Also, after the effect expires, Shuuhei cannot use any Ninjutsu or Genjutsu for the next 3 POSTS.

For Accepted Apps List, Please refer to my POST #6 Below. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Ultimate Assassin Ninjew · May 5, 2010

For Akatsuki, can a character have an eye technique and a kekkei genkai?

.:Abarai Renji:. · May 5, 2010

Name: Rekkin

Gender: Female

Village: Hidden Sand Village Missing Nin

[spoiler=Appearance]Physique: Rekkin stands on about 184 centimeters and weighs around 75.6 kilograms. She sports alot of hair ornaments, all which are made of glass, including several beads strapped into her neck hair, a tiara made of glass and mixed with gold, and two larger beads strapped to the sides of her hair, which frames the front of her face. Her hair is in chest lenght, and is colored dark violet with a string of crimson red along her left side. She also has heterochromia, as her right eye is brown, while her left eye is deep crimson.

Clothing: Besides sporting alot of beads and head ornaments, she also wears a scarlet silk cowl around her neck, which stretches down her chest, down to her waistline. Her upper body is dressed in a boiled leather vest, her arms being dressed in silk gloves which stretches over her arms down to her hands, with holes for the fingers. Her lower body is dressed in regular, black pants while she wears leather sandals at her feet.

[spoiler=Personality] Rekkin is usually calm and collected, but can lash out on anyone that comments her hair style in a bad way, may it be friend or foe. She is usually excited during fights, as she takes pleasure in causing pain. She usually acts before thinking, however, and rather relies on her Kekkei Genkai to win a battle. She can, however, think up quick-use strategies from time-to-time.

She is rather calm, like mentioned earlier, and can almost act "lazy" and irresponsible. She is by far the laziest-appearing of the Akatsuki, even though she does have the will and strenght to do things on her own.

Although when someone speaks of her past in a bad way, she tends to get emotional and depressed, or infuriated, depending on the situation. She highly despises her past experiences, hence her reasons for being an Akatsuki.

She loves to drink Sake whenever she gets the chance, and displays an even more carefree personality while being drunk.

[spoiler=Biography]As a child, Rekkin was much of a regular child, having parents who cared for her, friends to play with, but sometimes had a hard time to follow up with the others in the Academy. Her times as a child were brought to a short end, however, as a big riot in the Hidden Sand Village occured. Many families were slaughtered, and love-bonds were broken and shattered. This is where Rekkin discovered her Kekkei Genkai ability, when she accidentally combined a Sand Shuriken Jutsu with a Fire Style; Phoenix Flower Jutsu, and created a lethally sharp Shuriken made out of pure glass. This made the Ninjas in the village see her as a lethal weapon, and possibly, the ultimate mean of winning the struggle.

She was torn between the two sides, as one side contained her best friends, while the other was where her family was still alive. She could not decide which one to choose, and so, both sides were forced to struggle anew, but not for the riot's sake, but for the sole purpose of capturing Rekkin and bringing her to their side. Countless lives were lost in front of her eyes, and much more blood was spilled. In the end, the riot had caused so much life losses, that both of the sides decided to call it off, but the damage was already done. During the struggle for Rekkin, both her parents had been slaughtered in cold blood. With sadness in her mind, and pain in her heart, she left the Hidden Sand Village, and never returned.

Today, she is a member of Akatsuki, and as she claims herself; "My only reason for joining is because of revenge. Revenge against the cold-blooded murderers that killed my family, and countless others in front of me. I will destroy all of those that did not help my village... when they most needed it." With these words, she is a cold-hearted, lethal killing machine, ready to lash out on the world with but a single command.

Rank: High-Ranked

[spoiler=Kekkei Genkai]Glass Style

With her Kekkei Genkai, Rekkin can combine Sand Ninjutsu and Fire Ninjutsu to create solid glass. However, the glass made from the both Ninjutsu types is much more durable than normal glass, and can also be much more sharper if formed to a weapon. The glass is almost impenetrable, and can only be destroyed by a really powerful Taijutsu or Sword Style attack. The glass can also be dismaterialized into sand, should Rekkin need it for a Sand Style Ninjutsu.

Secondary Type (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu): Ninjutsu

Attribute Type: Dual Type

Element: Sand & Fire

[spoiler=Kekkei Genkai Abilities / Jutsu]Fire Style

Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu (火遁・豪火球の術, Fire Style: Grand Fireball Jutsu)

Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu (火遁・鳳仙火の術, Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu)

Katon: Kasumi Endu no Jutsu (Fire Style: Misty Flames Dance Jutsu)

Sand Style

Suna no Yoroi (砂の鎧, Sand Armor)

Sabaku Kyū (砂縛柩, Sand Coffin)

Suna Bunshin no Jutsu (砂分身の術, Sand Clone Jutsu)

Sabaku Sōsō (砂瀑送葬, Sand Burial)

Suna Shuriken (砂手裏剣, Sand Shuriken)

Glass Style

Glass Clone Jutsu - This Jutsu is just like any other Clone Jutsu, except that the clone created is made of animated glass, which is able to appear "bleeding" through a large enough Chakra transplantation made in the initiation of this Jutsu, which may leave the user exhausted.

**DRAWBACK - This Technique can't be used for ONE(1) post after the effect is negated, and/or if the clone is destroyed.

Glass Wall Jutsu - The user slams his/her palms into the ground to create a wall of impenetrable glass, which can be used for both offensive and defensive means. The defensive side being that the wall is almost impenetrable for most attacks, except a powerful enough Taijutsu or Sword Style Technique, and the offensive part being that with further manipulation, the wall can shoot off numerous glass spear projectiles on command. This technique, however, will greatly drain the user's Chakra, and he/she has to rest for a few minutes after using the technique.

**DRAWBACK - This Technique require TWO(2) posts of initiation, and can't be used for THREE(3) posts after the effect is negated. Rekkin can't use any Kekkei Genkai Jutsu for TWO(2) posts after the effect is negated, or the barrier is destroyed.

Glass Weapons - By using the Glass Style, the user can create a numerous array of weapons made of the glass produced by the Jutsu. The amount of Chakra consumed depends on the size and shape of the weapon.

**DRAWBACK - Rekkin can only use a maximum of TWO(2) large-sized weapons(halberds, claymores, etc.), THREE(3) medium-sized weapons(shortswords, small axes, etc.) or SIX(6) support weapons(SHurikens, Kunais, etc.), and requires at least TWO(2) posts of cooldown after usage.

**ALL Glass Style Ninjutsu require to have one Sand Style Ninjutsu and one Fire Style Ninjutsu to complete the technique. Hence why the level of Chakra used is higher than usual.

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I know that the Fire Style ain't related to the Hidden Sand Village, but I need it for my unique Kekkei Genkai, as you may see. Hopefully, this is acceptable.

ryuujinn · May 5, 2010

'Ninjew said:
For Akatsuki' date=' can a character have an eye technique and a kekkei genkai?
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For the purpose of this RP, Eye Techniques can only belong to Uchiha or Hyuuga, and since they are peace-keepers and the protagonists of this RP, they cannot be Akatsuki Members.

So I'm afraid no.
@Abarai Renji: Request Granted, and since I can see the logic behind the technique, Fire-subtype may be used in the Kekkei Genkai.

2 things, however:

1. Please Note that personality requires at least 4 lines.

2. Specify concrete drawbacks to the custom techniques. You may refer to "MY APP" at the top of the page for details on how to make concrete drawbacks.

--->Good Appearance and Bio Details, but I cannot start you as High Rank unless you fix those things you need fixing.

@Everyone else:

Note that I will give considerations for ranks if I can see a promising App that has at most only 3 flaws that I can see. Otherwise, I'm sorry, and please understand that the APP reflects how much effort a person is willing to give to an RP. :)

.:Abarai Renji:. · May 5, 2010

Added drawbacks on the Kekkei Genkai Jutsus, and added three lines on the personality. HOpefully it's enough.

ryuujinn · May 5, 2010

Due to Limitations: I will post my Accepted APPS here. Sorry for the inconvenience.

[spoiler=[b]Accepted Apps[/b]]

[spoiler=[b]High Rank Akatsuki[/b]]

[spoiler=.:Abarai Renji:.]