Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 Into The Sunlight A free verse, no rhyme sceam. Into the sunlight, no cares at all. Just reviewing the day.Thinking about nothing bad, only the good. Seeing the sunlight brings warmth.Walking in the crowd, not hearing a sound. Warm smiles come my way, and I just grin back.I'm in an autopilot, going my same usual way. Not running into anyone or anything.I see my destination, into the sunlight. The sunlight is all that matters.The sunlight brings back the day, oh what a day! No sorrow, pain, or trouble of any sort.Everything is bright and happy, just like the sunlight. Nothing to bother me.I reach my destination, in the sunlight. Into the sunlight I remain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supersonic4ever Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 Some Haikus, plus one other poem: Haiku 1:Everyone, somewhere,Sitting in the dark, trembling,A scream is then heard. Haiku 2:Light through the windows,Visible bars of amber,Soft and delicate. Haiku 3:Refreshing breezes,Rushing through all the plantlife,Giving Sun's power. All haikus are by me. The next poem I am typing by memory, so there may be a mistake. Fire and Ice by Robert Frost Some say the world will end in fire, some say in ice.From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire.But if it had to perish twice,I think I know enough of hate,To say that for destruction, ice is also great,And would suffice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted February 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 I'll shall add them now. Thought I might add a poem. Just to tell you before you read it that I am rubbish at Poems and this was only a 5 minute job... [spoiler=Whispers]Whispers Whispers.The sound that is thereThe sound that screams to be heardThe sound that wants to be noticed. Whispers. The whistling of the windThe brushing of treesThe sound in your mind. Whispers.The sound that is thereThe sound that screams to be heardThe sound that wants to be noticed. Whispers.The crying of the grassThe rattling of the roofThe sound in your mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 It was all right. =D Just one I thought of in a moment's notice: Today, Tomorrow, and Forever Today. Today is another day. Not just a day, but a dream. This dream isn't a dream, it's life. I can control life. I can control life for tomorrow. Tomorrow, something I constantly think about. "What will tomorrow bring?" Maybe joy, happiness, or depression. Will it last forever? Forever. It's always happening. What I do today, can impact my life tomorrow, which will last forever. ^^It doesn't make sense if you don't read it carefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 Hey, Kenichi, when you put my next poem in the first post, make sure to copy-and-paste the below url with it. Thanks! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j3_85GXsKqk ^^It goes with the poem. En Mi Corazón, En Mis Sueños, En Mi Vida I found you there. En mi corazón. Just seeing you there, on that cloudy day, instantly brightened my day. I found what I was never looking for. En mi corazón. What joy awaited!After meeting you there, I yet again found you there. En mis sueños. Happy and delicate, carefree and hopefull, young and beautiful. Not to be bothered. The reality came to me, that I met you, but wouldn't meet you ever again. But with one exception- en mis sueños. At least so I thought.Then you were there. I found you again. En mi vida. I was overflooded with joy, and continue to feel that joy as love, en mi corazón, en mis sueños, en mi vida. I hope you enjoyed this one. It's my deepest yet. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted February 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 I will add them in a few days. It won't let me at the moment. I think there are too many Poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 The poetry in this thread is quite bad,It would make any critic quite glad,As the critics would speak,The poets would look meek,When hearing their word choice was sad. Limericks are so easy to write,With stanzas you put up a fight,These poems have five lines.And contain many symbolic signs,And now hopefully you see the light. Haikus are fun, too,They take no effort to write,And make little sense. Poems here are bad,I think you should stick to these,Haikus are simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 The sky red orangeI sit aside my front porchAs I look beyond ------------------------ A poor injured doveA dead man and a lone starAnd a stray dog looks And those are my haikus. I haven't written a poem in sometime, so: Melody of the Wild Dance Rush, rush,A footstep after anotherAnd anotherCorrugated arms reach toanother,gives out lukearm colors to the sceneA chirp, a cry, and hustleIt's loud as the radiowhen its up loudThe ground, barrenshares feet of all kindsrunning and jumpingA bounce, and uniformitycomes, as a beatcomes all at oncethen it stops, and returns again.But pain tosee, no foriegner everbothers takeglimpse at this natural sceneFor such irony thattheir antecedents dwelled in that hall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Well thank you Dark for making me feel good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 What a Dark feeling, I have now,that dwells in the palace of peace.What a feeling, so Dark indeed, that it should cause a need. As for what to write,I honestly have no clue,such is a haiku. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 The poetry in this thread is quite bad,It would make any critic quite glad,As the critics would speak,The poets would look meek,When hearing their word choice was sad. Limericks are so easy to write,With stanzas you put up a fight,These poems have five lines.And contain many symbolic signs,And now hopefully you see the light. Haikus are fun, too,They take no effort to write,And make little sense. Poems here are bad,I think you should stick to these,Haikus are simple. Oh Dark you...I knew you'd post something like that.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted February 27, 2011 Share Posted February 27, 2011 · Hidden by Clair, February 27, 2011 - idk lol Hidden by Clair, February 27, 2011 - idk lol The chains of deceitCorrupt the truth, keeping oneAway from heaven Link to comment
Bassa Posted March 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 Nice Poem Dark... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organized Chaos Posted March 1, 2011 Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 SleepingI lie here in bed with a smile on my faceDetermined to find divine grace.I want to wake up, get away from it allBut I know I can’t.They follow me, reaching out with blood covered hands and green-tinged fingersWanting to grasp but knowing they can’t.I’m running away with a scar on my face, I’m one of them nowSo I join the chase.They run fast but I run fasterYet I still can’t catch up no matter how hard I try.I start to sweat, they still runSo I just slump to the cold muddy floorPraying that I may hopefully die. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Roses are redViolets are blueAlone on the internet?http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r3Bd6oA9sbI&feature=watch_response Wiser words are rarley spoken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flakman4000 Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 · Hidden by Flakman4000, March 5, 2011 - just want to Hidden by Flakman4000, March 5, 2011 - just want to Since its almost st patty's day here's a limerick There once was a girl named ClairWho said she was as strong as a bearShe punched a brick wallAnd made a loud callBut no one had given a care (srry clair) Link to comment
Flakman4000 Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 There once was a girl named Clair Who said she was as strong as a bear She punched a brick wall Thus made a loud callBut no one had given a care Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 No rhyme, just free stuff. Watch the shadows fallWatch the moon rise highThe shadows grow and thriveUnder the light up high The sun shall riseThe day shall beginThe shadows run and fleeAnd the sun begins to rise I dunno what I didIt's stupid, it's sillyAnd it doesn't even matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Alright time for another poem. Sunrise over A Dream A vague poluted worldDisfigured, everywhereAs the miscreants that roamwith bizarre thoughtsAnd where I liveAn unpredictable fateI close my eyes,let the darkness seclude visionof the worldand set off to the wondersof a sunrise over a dreamAs I arrive, the feeling of reliefAs I dream over and overtureof peaceI don't sense anymore but,The only thing that expressesis that clutch on my handsas when I raise them in the faked breeze,I say, "Let it all out". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flakman4000 Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 This is not a good one but who cares there once was a boy named kanewho always traveled by planewhen set start to rise kane said his goodbyesthat was a random story of kane kane is Carter Kane from the Red Pyramid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 OMG You've read Red Pyramid? I'M NOT ALONE!!!!1 There once was a man who was drivingWho decided he wanted to start drinkingHe went to a pubGot thrown in a tubAnd got arrested for drinking and driving Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Ah limmericks and your catchy phrases. So here's the poem I made so far. Please listen to this while reading the stuff below: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AcOrhOoBiy8&feature=related Soliloquy of The Solitary Desolate,Alone,Blank as I amdamned from the outsideAn outcastI amAccompanied by no oneAnd no oneever listens toa soulOnly they listento the visionthey see st firstI am but an eternal fireThat drafts with the windand wind will galeunto a new surroundingAnd that's where I'll beforever changing,and moving,and goingStill,I am but a flareThe color I am?Blackas the night skywhile there are starswho glitterI am but matterof darknessand yet always expandingOh fateprecariously set on meA weight of the imminentscorches off my backlike a convict whom bears a braceToo much to handleSociety is but an oblivionAnd I am forced to take that matteras I sitprecariously over a bedroom balconyI thinkwhats going to happentommorowthe day after thatwhats to comeAnd I don't knowwhat do to do for the next dayBut as I sip some coffeeI thinkforget itAs the world revolves around meI think nothingfor I dream to be in a stateof deathI don't want to die,but I want to feel what demise isI wantto see, feel, hear, touch, and tastetrue insignificancyAway from the outer worldAnd as I close my eyesand lay down on that bed, Isay, "let it all out""I'll one day be ridden of this curse'"I'll one day find a true heart in the world""And in order to do that,""I'll go anywhere""And with that in mind, I'm not aloneanymore" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted March 30, 2011 Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 "I look up and gaze upon your light smile,Drifting low I tumble down and down,I see your eyes and your brilliance, I smell your confidence and feel your bravery,But still I look further,Upon your thoughts,Within your hopes,Having seen frowns of past,Moments of the present,Smiles of the future,We witness your troubles your struggle,Stand with you through the pain,Holding your tears in one hand,Your dreams in another,Our heads upon my shoulder,I look up and see that forced smile,Drifting between this world and the nextI see your eyes,Pupils dialated,And I smell your fearful presence,Feeling your courage,But I look further,Past your skin,Past the smile,Within your past,As though I were reading your palm.Moments and smiles and frowns,In your skin,I witness your trouble and your travesties,Standing against the pain,Arms facing outward,Hands pressed flat against eachother.Your head rests against my shoulder and I spread myself into you." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted March 30, 2011 Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 Glad to see you've taken my poetic advice, - hurhur - guys. So let's try again,What did I say about you?You can't write poems. Stick to haikus, please,As they take a lot less thought,Which suits you quite well. Reiteration,How I hate it so, so much,But you guys make me! Make sure to listen,My advice will help you much,Cheerio, mateys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Dark, I love your stuff.Barely found this thread and you are like my IDOL! *note the sarcasm* Anyways, I guess I can post somethings here: [spoiler=A Truth We Ignore]A Truth We Ignore I am no prophet,I am not god,I am just a messenger,I am just one. Humans are selfish creatures,Humans are ignorant,And for that they’ll soon pay,For the damage they’ve done. The questions come to my head,And they dare not go away,They’re frightening,Sometimes they ache my heart. My body drops,I see so much blood,I see my family,In a portrait stained red. My eyes drop,My surroundings are blank,It all makes sense,But it’s so hard to accept it. I can no longer dream,I can only see darkness,I can only see the stars,They are always on the sky never besides me. I hate what I have dreamed,I wish I was stupid!Maybe then,I could ignore the images! But I can’t say no to the message,I can’t just turn away,If I do,We’ll all suffer in inhuman ways. I wish I was ignorant,I wish I was… [spoiler=Death Comes]Death comes… Death comes & it goes,In the sky,In the earth.It’s just how life flows. I was alive, I was meNow I’m in bedIn a tomb,In my grave. Death comes, death goesIn the calm sea so blue,In a winter so cold,It’s just how life rolls. I’m dead, yes, meMy home, my familyI left without warning,Leaving them misery. It comes again, and then it goes.A graveyard of crosses,Full of tombstones,Where there’s nowhere to go. “A zombie I am!”“A zombie I’ll be…”I scream out loud,& raise my hands above me. I was dead, dead was me,But I realized,It was all a dream. I woke up, it was all a dream,A selfish nightmare,Trying to prank me. I see I’m alive,I see that I live,I see the sky,I see my feet.. My family is here,I love them so.And when death comes,I’ll let it go. Now is not my time,Death shall not take me.But when it becomes my time,The love towards my family,The love towards my life,The love towards this world, and these times,will never go. [spoiler=Rose of Endless Petals]Rose of Endless Petals You are the last one,The rose that chose me.You can never truly answer my questions. I grasp your thorn-filled body,It hurts.The color red truly suits you. I pluck you out of the ground.My hand’s smothered in blood,I can’t see the drops of my red tears in your petals. In this day I plucked your bloodshed petals,One by one, trembling,I only have so many days left. For the years I’ll pluck your petals,Waiting for the answer:Is there love for me? During the last few years I’ve plucked you,Day, and night.I’ve been awake, bleeding out for the answer. It seems I’ve come to an end,And still no answer…There are white roses in my feet… I could never find the answer,Because you could never answer my question.I could never finish plucking your petals of darkness,No matter how I tried.How can anyone finish plucking you?No one can…I tried to…but…I could never finish plucking a rose of endless petals. I wrote The Rose of Endless Petals in 2008...so I don't mind that one being horrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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