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Yerrrr. Im almost positive everyone is going to hate this so, mite as well get it over with.

 

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things i like are the smudging on the right and th top as well as text. Everything else is i dont know, thats why i posted.

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As usual your technically proficient but you lack composition. I'm seeing 3 distinct focals, possibly four, with the most likely focal being up in the top right corner of a weridly sized tag. Two distinct styles as well make it even more confusing to look at, and then to top it all off you put a skinny bad looking border on it to distract even more.

 

Just pick something to do right, you can do so many things, but don't do them all at once. Try focusing more on defining your focal point and your style instead of just throwing out everything you've got even when it doesn't match.

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