Hollow Ichigo! Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 [spoiler=Plot]A short time after Aizen was defeated and the war was over. There was a new threat. Not a hollow or bount but an arrancar. It was a great arrancar at one time holding a high position. He was supposed to be put to death Aizen told Grimmjow to handle it. Unknown to Aizen the espada and Grimmjow were brothers. Grimmjow set him free and told him to get to shelter. He went into Menos Forest and was undetected throughout the entire war. It's now over Grimmjow came for him and they would start a new life. But oh too soon they were spotted by Toshiro Hitsugaya and his squad. Grimmjow was too weak to fight and gave himself up so his brother could live. Raiga was his brothers name and it was never heard even Grimmjow didnt know it. Toshiro killed Grimmjow in front of his brother. Angry Kira released his Zanpakto which, translates into Red Wind, and killed Toshiro and his whole squad. He dissapeared with only a red smog like cloud. With orders given by the New Captain Commander Raiga must DIE. [spoiler=App][spoiler=Shinigami App]Name:Age:Gender:Zanpaktou name:Sealed appearence: Release phrase: Shikai Ability:Shikai Appearence: Bankai Zanpaktou Name:Bankai Appearance:Bankai Ability: Appearance: Bio: Personality: Special skills: Stats~Speed: ??/10Strength(Physical): ??/10Defensive Capabilities: ??/10Reiatsu: ??/10Kido: ??/99(This symbolises which Kido(Bakudo & Hado) you can perform. You can performany underneath that number)Zanjutsu(Art of weilding a Zanpaktou): ??/10 [spoiler=Arrancar/Espada App]Name: Age: Gender: Zanpaktou name: Sealed appearence: Relesed Ability: Realesed Appearence: Final Relese(if one): Zanpaktou Name: Final Relese Appearance: Bankai Ability: Mask Placement: Bio: Personality: Special skills: Stats~Speed: ??/10Strength(Physical): ??/10Defensive Capabilities: ??/10Reiatsu: ??/10Cero: ??/10Cero Level: [spoiler=Rules]*One character *ADVANCE CLAUSE!!!*PG-16*No OOC only posts*All YCM rules apply*No God Mod [spoiler=My App]Name: RaigaAge: UnknownGender: MaleZanpaktou name: Shandai SheinSealed appearence: 5' 9" wears a typical arrancar outfit with red trim. Red is the color of the inside of the cloak as well. On his neck in red is a tattoo with the number 11. Under his eyes which are also red is a small squigley line each eye having a different squigle.Release phrase: Burning desire bursting flameRelesed Ability: turns his typical katana zanpaktou on fire and spins the flame. Forming a small fire tornado on the blade. He can now control and regenerate the fire on his blade.Realesed Appearence: His arrancar clock gets holes in the back other than that its the same.Final Relese(if one): His wings of flames are still there squigles get longer hair turns red and the masked arm cetches on fire.Zanpaktou Name: Pyro Necro SheinFinal Relese Appearance: The holes in the back of his cloak sprout wings made of fire and he gets fire claws and fire claws. His hollow mask located at the bottom of his jaw now covers his entire right arm.Bankai Ability: Allows user to control fire and wind. FlightMask Placement: His hollow mask located at the bottom of his jaw now covers his entire right arm.Bio: Unknown other than Grimmjow is his brother.Personality: Quiet while some what hatefulSpecial skills: Fire and wind controlStats~Speed: 10/10Strength(Physical): 7/10Defensive Capabilities: 7.5/10Reiatsu: 10/10Cero: 10/10Cero Level: Normal If your character is not one with the app listed post an app ie Quincy or something and i will modify the app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 Just going to say this, but your Rp has some major flaws. Although I agree that Grimmjow should be alive, as he just vanished, Ulquiorra had number four, so your plot doesn't make sense. He cant have been an espada at the time of Aizen, as they were all alive a weak before Aizen will have died. And, I hate to break it to you, Yamamoto is dead. And you spelled Zanpaktou wrong. Plus your app is rubbish, as it doesn't ask for: Bio, Personality, Rank/squad, Bankai Abilities. It doesn't even have Gender! If you fix these things I will post an App, for the New Captain commander. (Oh, and you shouldn't put "Except for me" in the rules, it makes you sound like a young child) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blablafodfpå Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I agree with Magnet, This is stupid in my opinion. Please put more effort into your plot so we'll atleast get interested, i may join if you change the storyline or improve it. If you improve or change the story i can give you a hand by improving that application of yours. Hope you take those advices now.. see ya :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I would like to reserve I am not as picky as the others around here it seems but I will PM you my application and if you dont accept I will try another one I have Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted April 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 okay guys thanks for the input will change asap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 You still need to edit the App properly. And you keep spelling Zanpaktou wrong. Also, if you didn't see in my first post, I reserved the Captain commander position for when you fix the app. I also reserve Hisagi as the new captain of squad 9. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted April 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 you get one character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 The app sucks. I wouldn't join if there is a sucky app. Plus what about apps for arrancar or bount or quincy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 I will edit the app for you HI(Cool Initials). And damn you for only one app. If this RP starts and there is no captain of squad 9 Can I make him? [spoiler=Ideal app]Name:Age:Gender:ZanpaktoU name:Sealed appearence: Release phrase: Shikai Ability:Shikai Appearence: Bankai Zanpaktou Name:Bankai Appearance:Bankai Ability: Appearance: Bio: Personality: Special skills: Stats~Speed: ??/10Strength(Physical): ??/10Defensive Capabilities: ??/10Reiatsu: ??/10Kido: ??/99(This symbolises which Kido(Bakudo & Hado) you can perform. You can performany underneath that number)Zanjutsu(Art of weilding a Zanpaktou): ??/10 Here is my app: [spoiler=My app]Name: Sukai Tero(Meaning: Sky terror)Age: 12000Gender: MaleZanpaktou name: KukyoSealed appearence: Twin (Identical) Muramasa's, each five shaku(150 Cm) long. Serpents carved out up handle. Hand guard looks like an S on each one.Release phrase: Asphyxiate.Shikai Ability: To Create Vacuums of any shape. These have a restriction of a size of 5m squared and cannot leave his touch. He can only create two at a time.Shikai Appearence: Invisible to all but Sukai. Can be any shape.Bankai Zanpaktou Name: Gokei Kukyo.Bankai Appearance: Same as ShikaiBankai Ability: Same as Shikai, with no restrictions.Appearance: Later, busy.Bio: AbovePersonality: AboveSpecial skills: AboveStats~Speed: 10/10Strength(Physical): 9/10Defensive Capabilities: 9.5/10Reiatsu: 10/10Kido: 98/99(This symbolises which Kido(Bakudo & Hado) you can perform. You can performany underneath that number)Zanjutsu(Art of weilding a Zanpaktou): 9.5/10 I am extremely busy and my Computor is about to turn off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted April 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 Thank you so much & yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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