DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted April 25, 2010 Report Share Posted April 25, 2010 [align=center]Hey Everyone! DigiMaster Ragnarok here with my latest Original RP. Will move MUCH quicker then my last one. But only way for it to keep moving is for YOU, the RPers, to post. I can't change the pace w/o your help. Also, Cid is Co-owner And now, without further ado, here it is:[/align] [spoiler=Plot][align=center]Welcome to a world of peace and tranquility. A world where there is no war, only peace between all nations. Humanity has finally evolved to a stage of mutual agreement. A stage of evolution that has eliminated poverty, famine, and even crime. Through endless arguments, wars, and the falling of many civilizations, the world has come to an understanding. An understanding that fighting is not for us. That we gain nothing by fighting. There is one slight problem with that understanding though. Along with all the worldly problems that were gotten rid of over the centuries, the world became more “pure.” Vulgarities were gotten rid of. Demeaning terms involved with racism, sexism, and any other “ism” that ever existed, were gotten rid of. In this day and age, the world seems perfect. It is far from it, however. Mankind has gotten bored of such a tranquil life. There is no more excitement in the world. One day though, a mad, power-hungry tyrant arose to become the president of the United States. Of course, no one actually knew he was mad and power-hungry. He always hid it. After being elected, he immeadiately attacked bordering nations. Without any wars, countries were not prepared to defend. The man swiftly crushed all his enemies, and became the supreme ruler of the world. This man came to be known from that day on as Supreme Emperor Frostwrithe. And he always was a cruel ruler at heart. The world went on as it previously was. Now with everything he ever wanted, Frostwrithe had no reason to bother with the rest of the world. He was living in the lap of luxury. At the age of 70, Frostwrithe had a heart attack. He lived, but barely. This was when he realized that he was becoming old, and could die very soon. That was when Frostwrithe hatched an idea. Over the next year, Frostwrithe had giant coliseums made all over the world. From the deepest, densest jungles, to the hottest, driest deserts, he had 5 made in total. After the coliseums were built, Frostwrithe made an announcement to the world. He had announced that once every year, a competition would be held. A tournament of sorts, to decide the greatest champion in all the world. This fight would be decided by gathering all the people in the world who’s spirit has manifested itself into a physical form. They would then fight, having only one come out on top. And what are these spirits you ask? Well, it is quite simple. Recently, humans have even been able to commune with spirits. It was discovered that these spirits roam the earth, taking on many different forms. Where these spirits come from, it is not known. What is known is that once they manifest, the form they take on could be any. Some humans have even been able to bond with the spirits. It has since been a special gift for very few. However, it is looked down upon, because of humanity’s want for excitement from this boring, tranquil world. Different people bond with different spirits, all having unique abilities. Once a spirit has truly bonded with someone, they take on a physical form, gaining the use of their ability. The time of the tournament is soon arriving. You are one of the people chosen because you have bonded with a spirit, and now it has manifested its physical form. You are not sure what exactly Frostwrithe is thinking by holding this tournament, but you know that his evil heart is up to no good. You must fight and win this tournament. You have no idea what is in store for you, but every single move you make could affect the final outcome of the tournament. Now, Frostwrithe’s secret agency has come to take you where you will be staying during the tournament. You decide whether you win or not, what your motives are, and who you will ally yourself with, if you do. But more importantly, you decide if you will live… or die.[/align] [spoiler=Rules]1. All general YCM rules2. All advanced clause rules3. No GMing4. Must have okay grammar5. You may revise your App only up to 3 times6. Breaking of rules results in a strike7. 2 strikes, you're out (banned) [spoiler=App]Delete all things in {} Username:Name:Age:Appearance {Skin, hair, eyes, clothing, weapons, etc}:Personality {doesn’t have to be too long}:Bio {make it a good length, and good content. Include about how you met spirit and such}:Spirit’s Manifestation {form it took. Can be anything, even something not real}:Spirit’s ability {Its overall ability pretty much. Don’t need much detail. Try to explain a little if possible}:Weapons {sword, staff, shuriken, etc}: [spoiler=my app]I will show you only a part of my app, that way, it can be a surprise with my character. You MUST, however, fill out every part of you application, unless I say otherwise. No secrets. You can ask to leave stuff out, but I may say no. Now, here's the part of the app I'll show you: Name: Nick HeitariAge: 14Appearance: Nick is 5’8, and is looks about normal width. He is pretty muscular however, but you wouldn’t know unless you saw under his clothes. Nick is a darker-shade of tan, and has black hair with black eyes. His hair is short and spiked back too. Nick wears blue jeans that are have torn holes in them directly on his knees, and he wears an blue and white vertically striped shirt that has buttons all along it, but he always leaves it completely unbuttoned, showing the middle of his stomach and chest area. Darren wears no shoes or socks, he just wears brown flip-flops. He carries a katana that is holstered on the right side of his jeans. Spirit’s Manifestation: Nick’s spirit has taken on a very peculiar form. It consists of golden armor that is detached and floating, but it forms a large body that looks like a robot. It has arms, hands, a helmet with one large red eye and a wide triangular blade coming out of the top of it for a head, and has a torso, but nothing below the waste. Nick’s spirit is made of many plates of armor, and floats around, hot steam filling the armor to keep it together. It has a small trail of steam no longer than a meter that forms what is almost like a ghost’s tail that replaces its legs.Weapons: Nick has an average length katana Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 [spoiler=Meh]Username:Cid RainesName: Hope KohakuAge: 16Appearance He wears a black underarmor tee with small jacket on that is currently open. He has on levi black skinny jeans and white athletic shoes, He is 180,1 centimeters tall, and weighs around 8,9 kilograms. He is very muscular but skinny, never keeps his vest open for merely showing off his godly chest. He has a scar over his right arm, which stretches down to the palm of his hand and a huge scar that reigns over his chest. His hair is red, short like a short wide which streams to almost but not quite his neck, and his eyes are fire red with a hint of white. His skin is vanilla tanned, smooth easily as baby's skin mixed with oil and has no piercings what so ever.Personality: Hope cares only for himself. He grows bored when there is no conflict or violence in the world. He does not hesitate to send them to their deaths for his own personal benefit, and only finds remorse in their loss if they are unable to properly complete a task. He also possessed incredible self-control of his emotions. He constantly displayed an emotionless personality. He only showed surprise when opponents proved more powerful or skilled than he had expected, and even then he didn't lose his composure. He did not possess any arrogance, and fully justified any statements he made about his power, even complimenting his opponents at times on their abilities. In addition to being an extremely powerful warrior, Hope had equally impressive intelligence, and was shown to be very wise. He was exceedingly sharp and observant to any situation at hand, as he was rarely surprised or caught off guard. Hope is a quiet person, does not want to talk yet considers himself a mute. He is also calm as well, ruthless and also fearless, not afraid of going down to the devil without a good fight. Bio: Hope considers himself to be a rather lonely person, until he was undergoing a rather drastic bond with his spirit, Alexander, a spirit that can extend the length of his swords, in which his entire life changed. He still spends his life alone, but he knows that when anything goes his way, he has the power to fight back and realized that everything he does will never be the same. Having heard from a friend of his mother's that his elder sister and even his own mother - Xiayou and Yoruichi - were both killed by high authorities with powerful spirits, Hope sought out to find the killers but had no luck. He thought of searching the killers once again, but in the end, he still had no luck. Xiayou - his sister - had been slain by Frostwrithe's goons , while Yoruichi - his mother who once had a spirit of her own - had been annihilated by Frostwithe's goons as well. This lead to him being in a state of denial, just staying quiet, not saying anything that occurred and hoping that he would get his revenge on his mother and sister's killers. But then again with no luck, he still patiently waits for the right time and day to finally strike. Spirit’s Manifestation: [spoiler=Alexander] Hope's spirit takes on the form of the robot, Alexander. Alexander wears a bleach captain outfit but without the sleeves. I know it may sound crazy but picture the robot wearing such an outfit. Spirit’s ability: Alexander has the power to extend his blade length to greater or lower heights.Weapons:Hope carries 3 wakizashi swords and Alexander carries 3 normal katanas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted April 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I'm sure you know this, but accepted. All I can say is be careful with powers. Not just you, but everyone who wants to join. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I know my limits. So.... i think u should have people present you their applications via pm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted April 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 ...why? that just shortens this. Also, plz try to keep conversations like this to PM Cid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 Alright if you say so. How many people do we need in order for the roleplay to start? I'm dying to just explode with ideas and creation for my character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I'd like to reserve please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted April 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 Reserved. Also, I would like to think near 4-6 Cid. Cuz it's a tourney. Though we will have NPC chars to fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I like it. 4-6 and we already have two. and some NPC chars that we will be fighting. Brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoko Kurama Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 Username: »SoçïäL SläµëR«Name: Zakyre RultiAge: 15Appearance: 5'8" 135 lbs. Thin, but not skinny. Rainy-styled bleach blonde hair falls over his forehead, and covers most of his left eye. A pair of deep violet tinted eyes compliment his blinding hair. His tan tinted skin gives the appearance that he spends a lot of time in the sun. He wears a purple shirt, with his left arm being a long sleeve, and his right a normal length sleeve. His left sleeve also has a thumb hole in the cuff, and covers half his palm. On his other arm he wears a some white wraps, covering his forearm. For pants he wears a pair of black cargo shorts. He also wears a pair of purple converse and some ankle high socks.Personality: Zakyre is rather energetic, and very outgoing. He is usually wired up, and always ready to do something. In times of worry or panic, Zakyre will shake off all emotions, and think of happy things. He could be referred to as preppy, but just the same he is only a hyper teen. Often times he will get cocky during a competition, but when he gets serious he is very tricky and wise. Not someone to underestimate. Bio: Zakyre has lived a normal life. He grew up, or is growing up as a common teenager. After girls, failing school, the simple things. But unlike most other teens Zakyre has a secret. When he was thirteen, he was threatened by his entire school. The told him they would abuse and neglect him on a daily basis, if he didn't dig up his grandfathers grave, and steal the sword he was buried with. Being who he is, Zakyre did it. After digging up the grave, and taking the sword, a Zatoichi to be exact, he showed it to all of his schoolmates, who then respected him forever more. He is now very renowned and 'cool'. But, within weeks of his epic grave feature, Zakyre started noticing strange things. Cold chills, falling objects, and very often, his sword floating. He was suspicious, but didn't mind it. Nothing could hurt him. Or so he thought. Exactly one month after the grave was searched, he was visited. By a spirit. It followed him to home from school, and attacked him while he was sleeping. The spirit pinned him to the wall, and began to question him, and tell him what it was he had done. Zakyre retaliated by offering the sword and telling him it was a dare. The spirit understood, he too was once a peer pressure influenced teen. After long hours of reminiscing and talking about the teenage years, the spirit asked Zakyre if he would allow him to be his spirit, his escort of sorts. Zakyre instantly accepted his company, and ever since, they have been 'friends'.Spirit’s Manifestation: Fatal (thats his name :P) is the common perception of a skeleton. A bunch of connected bones, fully capable of movement and such. Surrounded by a navy blue glowing aura, he wears a black top hat with a white strip through the center. He also has a monocle on his left eye, a long black cloak tied around his neck, and carries a cane. The cane is perfect size for Fatal's height. It resemble a wand, black with two white tips, but is much thicker. To top it all off, the cane can morph into a thick steel chain. Spirit’s Ability: Fatal has the ability of deception. He can trick the mind of others, with misleading images and sounds. However he may only use it on one person at a time. He cannot deceive multiple people. In order to see past his trickery, you must have the willpower to do so, otherwise it will haunt you forever.Weapons: A Zatoichi and two Keris/Kris daggers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I'll let the ability slide although let it drop to at least 2 or 3 three people if they look at Fatal's hat. Other then that accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoko Kurama Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 Ehh, he only uses the ability on one human at a time. He isn't capable of fooling the minds of everyone in the stadium during the tourney or anything. And to break out of it they just have to have the willpower to see past the trickery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 Include that then you are accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoko Kurama Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted April 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 lol Cid, looks like your doing a great job of judging these apps. You are right, his ability seems good in that it is limited enough. Very good. Social, I should hope you can't trick everyone in the stadium. I figured people would get the misconception that the stadium was like a roman colosseum or something. And I was right. The giant colosseum is not like a normal one. It is in the shape of a giant, impenetrable circular wall, but it encompasses HUGE amounts of land. A single round in the colosseum can last for weeks! (in RP time. Don't think things would go fast enough in real world if they lasted that long though) You could spend days looking for opponents. Depending on the location, you could walk through entire deserts, jungles, and various other landscapes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Random Dude Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 Reserve please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted April 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 kk, reserved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 As long we find our opponents and challenge them, i don't care where we find them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 username:ekim1793Name:Regal StoneAge:17Appearance: regal has white hair. red eyes and a tan skin tone. regal wears a pair of blue jeans and a sleeveless blue shirt. Personality:calm laid back he tends to be very kind to people weither he knows their evil or not. ever sence he almost died 2 years ago he knows to keep a positive outlook on life. he always trys his best in life because of this he tends to secced. Bio:when regal was 15 he got lost in the moutians of japan in the winter time. for awhile he was ok but after 2 day a blizard struck that was strong enough to have frozen him to death. after wondering around for a day he was almost at the point of death. suddly a large glowing wolf the size of a large lion appared and showed him a cave to hide in. over the next week after the storm the wolf took care of regal and nursed him back to health and theve been together ever sence.Spirit’s Manifestation: a large blue-gray wolf that is about the size of a large lion. can speakSpirit’s ability:iceWeapons:brass knuckles and steelwires Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted April 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 Okay okay... pretty good Ekim. Few things though. 1) for your personality, I see what you mean sorta, but I need more detail. Things like if he ever gets happy, how he treats his friends, or if he doesn't make friends, why. Also, what do you mean by a strong sense of justice? Explain more in your app. 2) You describe your spirit as a large blue wolf that shoved your character into a cave. One problem though. It couldn't have. Spirits are not able to do ANYTHING physical until they manifest, which only happens AFTER you and that spirit develop a very strong bond. And the spirit would not have a physical form, such as looking like a wolf, BEFORE you met it, so make sure you don't say it looked like one before and after its manifestation. Lastly, 3) For your abilities, you say that it can fuse with you for speed and strength AND have Ice powers. But that is two powers. Trust me, one of those alone is plenty. Once the spirit takes a physical form, it can't move like that. It's like you and an ACTUAL wolf trying to fuse for more power. Wouldn't work, since you both have physical bodies. Now say your spirit was a slime creature that covered you to give you more strength. That would work. But ice control and boosting (increasing strength and speed) are separate powers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 I'll take control in your absence digimaster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted May 6, 2010 Report Share Posted May 6, 2010 I'd like to reserve please. I'll try to have my app out tomorrow or later tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted May 13, 2010 Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 Reservation accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted May 13, 2010 Report Share Posted May 13, 2010 I want to join this, but I won't be able to be on very much. Would that be OK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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