Zimiri of the Muse Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 [spoiler=intro]This fan-fic is a alternate version of the time line of FF VII Crisis Core. Once Zack died cloud became suicidal and blew up the mako reactors and the force caused a ripple in the time stream and going back in time. [spoiler=prologue] Zack Fair grabbed Cloud's head and pulled him close."Cloud, take my sword, live my legend, and tell my story" Zack said with what little strength he had left. He dies with a blood covered face and a smile on his lips. Tears slipped silently down Cloud Strife's dirt streaked cheeks. He rose and cast a fire materia cremating Zack as so he will not be left to rot. Cloud pulled a small vial and scooped some of Zack's dust in it."I will never forget you, my comrade" Cloud said silently. He picked up Zack's sword and walked off. He was slow and sluggish from the mako addiction. He arrived at the city in a few days, he had wired all the mako reactors in the area to explode. He climbed to the top of the shinra building and shouted to the streets."You bastards killed him! You killed Zack Fair! Now its time for revenge!" Cloud shouted as he flung himself from the building with a silent middle finger. He grinned and pushed the detonate button. There was a series of explosions and the plate starting collapsing at an alarming rate. The ozone layer was shredded and radiation wiped out the earth. Then things began to move backwards. The explosion had altered the time space continuum. In this other dimension time rewound and picked up where Zack breaks free of Hojo's test lab. Every role has been switched. Cloud breaks free and saves Zack. When the desert scene arrives Zack awakens and tells Cloud to let him come and help. Cloud says no and when Zack tries to follow cloud knocks him unconscious. Zack awakes and sees cloud dying and all the shinra dead. As Zack runs to him he says "Zack you..." then dies. Zack blames himself for Clouds death and turns evil. He starts recruiting a new army to destroy all of shinra, then take the world. Angeal, Genesis, and Sephiroth are all untied and pure good. They have stopped the degradation process and are trying to save Zack from himself. The group they have formed are called "the fallen angels" well that is the prologue to my new fan fic. i tried to turn it into an rp a while ago but it flopped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 Oh I played Crisis Core, poor Angeal Copy that died. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted April 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 yes, poor lazard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 I was talking about the other one, the winged dog.But lazard was great also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 OMG I KEEP SEEING YOU DO THIS FOR THE LAST TIME, ITS FFVII CRISIS CORE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted April 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 crap sorry, brain fart, will fix now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 hah lol i mean you even put FFVII for the title and put XII for the spoiler warning lolfail um... your story was ok, it could use work, punctuation, use the character's personalities better (i dont think you captured the real "Cloud" [& "Zack"]) so yea... kthxlolfailbai! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted April 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 lol i face-palmed myself for that fail. the thing is the personalities arent supposed to be the same, this even from the beginning. It is an entirely different reality so they arent supposed to be the same. Yes, my punctuation needs work but i made the story as i went so i made a lot of mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted April 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 working on chapter 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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