BLEACH: Flight of the Dead Gods IC

[Umbra]

OOC thread can be found here. Ask any public questions related to the RP there.

[Tempest Dahlia]

Reserved-

I already started the app.

[Umbra]

Blazinghydra has been accepted, and a very brief summary of his character has been added to the first post.

[Ty xy]

hey can i join

[Umbra]

hey can i join

 

Write a complete application - then I will consider it.

[Βyakuya]

Name:Shikaku(name means "assassin")

Gender:Male

Race:Shinigami

Personality:Emo, Statistic, Heartless. He usually is calm, but gets enraged in battle. He doesn't fight often, but by any means necessary, we has a small urge to kill. He usually doesn't participate with other shinigami

 

Appearance: He has a Black haori, with white outlines. It is short sleeved, and wears a white shinigami robe underneath. He also wears a hood, with long white hair. His face doesn't appear often, but his eyes shows of red, and has a scarred face.

 

Zanpakuto Sealed form: Its hilt is the shape of fire, with a small red sash at the bottom. It is purple and gold around the handle.

 

Zanpakuto-Kumori Shitsunen(name means "shadow's oblivion") A large mace with trident like end that is crooked, and is composed of black reishi.

Release Command: Awaken from the darkness...

Zanpakutou Appearance: The zanpakutou transforms into a mace like thing. It is dark purple, with with a cracked skull embroidering on it. On the end is a dark sash that is blood red. The end releases a trident like end, composed of black reiatsu energy spurring out crookedly.

Special Attacks:

Fukai Garandou(Deep Void) Stabs into ground, creating shadow, then releases shadow voids out of ground like geysers.

 

Shimaru(To strangle)-A gaping hand appears, and strangles the opponent

 

Chouzou Genkaku(Illusional Death)-The user move the sword all around in patterns, then stunning the victim. Then uses very fast shunpo to stab at all points.

[Umbra]

Name:Shikaku(name means "assassin")

Gender:Male

Race:Shinigami

Personality:Emo' date=' Statistic, Heartless. He usually is calm, but gets enraged in battle. He doesn't fight often, but by any means necessary, we has a small urge to kill. He usually doesn't participate with other shinigami

 

Appearance: He has a Black haori, with white outlines. It is short sleeved, and wears a white shinigami robe underneath. He also wears a hood, with long white hair. His face doesn't appear often, but his eyes shows of red, and has a scarred face.

 

Zanpakuto Sealed form: Its hilt is the shape of fire, with a small red sash at the bottom. It is purple and gold around the handle.

 

Zanpakuto-Kumori Shitsunen(name means "shadow's oblivion") A large mace with trident like end that is crooked, and is composed of black reishi.

Release Command: Awaken from the darkness...

Zanpakutou Appearance: The zanpakutou transforms into a mace like thing. It is dark purple, with with a cracked skull embroidering on it. On the end is a dark sash that is blood red. The end releases a trident like end, composed of black reiatsu energy spurring out crookedly.

Special Attacks:

Fukai Garandou(Deep Void) Stabs into ground, creating shadow, then releases shadow voids out of ground like geysers.

 

Shimaru(To strangle)-A gaping hand appears, and strangles the opponent

 

Chouzou Genkaku(Illusional Death)-The user move the sword all around in patterns, then stunning the victim. Then uses very fast shunpo to stab at all points.

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You clearly did not read the topic at all.

 

In accordance with the Limit Rule, I will give you one chance to edit this to an acceptable state.

 

Also, "emo" is not a legitimate description in my book, as it can mean many different things to different people.

[The Tin Trooper]

Observed:

Name: Haraguroi (Meaning Evil)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Clothing is close to what Aaroniero wore, with the ruffles and all. Long black hair, with a grey tint. Hollow Hole is located on his neck. Remains of hollow mask is a sort of spine that runs along his back, his arms and chest. Also, the remains of some horns on the side of his head. Fairly muscular

Personality: Calm, reserved. Does not rush into battle without first planning. Is cold to allies and enemies alike. Has a slackish , lazy attitude and prefers not to engage in battle.

 

Zanpakuto:

Name: Shitsunen

Appearance: A katana that splits into two segments on the blade. The hilt is in the shape of a rectangle, with a moon embossed onto it. The handle is black.

Shikai Release Command: Swiftly Kill, Shitsunen!

Shikai Appearance: The Zanpakuto is now a large battle axe, measuring 2 metres in height. On the blade of the axe, there is what appears to be a Demonic figure, engraved into it. The handle is made up of Hollow Bones, and there is a red sash, for the grip of the axe.

Shikai Abilities:

 

Festering Decadence: Deividoo fires a bolt of pure black reiatsu at his enemy. Once it contacts someone, their flesh on that area starts to decay. Small undead Hollows then appear from the gaping wound, and feed on the seeping blood. The more they drink, the bigger they get. These zombi-Hollows can also temporarily act as Deividoo's Fraccíon.

 

Vitiating Grip: Deividoo breaks off a part of his axe's handle and sticks it into his Hollow hole. The handle fragment then turns into a fang, which can then be used by Deividoo to hurl at an enemy. On contact, the fang secretes a toxin that morally and physically corrupts the body, albeit very slowly.

 

Resurrecíon:

Name: Demonio

Appearance: An orb, located on Deividoo's hand. Teh orb glows, and shows numerous Kanji, such as the kanji for war, death and time.

Release Command: Awaken, Demonio!

Manifestation: Deividoo has now transformed into a massive Demon, much like the one depicted on the Shikai Shitsunen's blade. Although the shape of the demonic Deividoo can change to his will, his primary form is that of an Undead demon, with rotting skin, bony wings, broken horns and a breastplate made of bone.

Abilities:

Metamorphosis. Deividoo can change form, changing from an Undead Demon to a War Demon, Poison Demon, Death Demon; any type of Demon he chooses. Of course, this is not permanent. After a certain time, Deividoo changes back to his Undead Demon form

 

Rising the Slain: Tilagios Dievidoo, in his Undead form, can bring the dead, be it Hollow, Arrancar, Bount, Viziards, or Shinigami, to life. They're life force is supplied by Deividoo, who can grant upon one of his lackeys great strength, in both physical and spiritual terms. And, he can kill them merely by thought, and gains reiatsu and strength equal to the killed minion.

[Guest Tainted Black]

A Good Bleach RP? Am I dead? LOL

 

Anyways, Reserved. I'm working on my app, but it depends when I can submit it.

[Βyakuya]

Name:Shikaku(name means "assassin")

Gender:Male

Race:Shinigami

Personality:Calm, Statistic, Heartless. He usually is calm, but gets enraged in battle. He doesn't fight often, but by any means necessary, we has a small urge to kill. He usually doesn't participate with other shinigami

 

Appearance: He has a Black haori, with white outlines. It is short sleeved, and wears a white shinigami robe underneath. He also wears a hood, with long white hair. His face doesn't appear often, but his eyes shows of red, and has a scarred face.

 

Zanpakuto Sealed form: Its hilt is the shape of fire, with a small red sash at the bottom. It is purple and gold around the handle.

 

Zanpakuto-Kumori Shitsunen(name means "shadow's oblivion") A large mace with trident like end that is crooked, and is composed of black reishi.

Release Command: Awaken from the darkness...

Zanpakutou Appearance: The zanpakutou transforms into a mace like thing. It is dark purple, with with a cracked skull embroidering on it. On the end is a dark sash that is blood red. The end releases a trident like end, composed of black reiatsu energy spurring out crookedly.

Special Attacks:

Fukai Garandou(Deep Void) Stabs into ground, creating shadow, then releases shadow voids out of ground like geysers.

 

Shimaru(To strangle)-A gaping hand appears, and strangles the opponent

 

Chouzou Genkaku(Illusional Death)-The user move the sword all around in patterns, then stunning the victim. Then uses very fast shunpo to stab at all points.

 

Zanpakuto:Spectre

Name:Olvido(spanish for Oblivion Kanji for forgetful)

Appearance: His appearance is similar to Ulquiorra's, though he has a open sleeved shirt, with a little opening on his chest, showing his hollow hole. His skin is pale. His mask show of half of a mask that looks like Ichigo's, though it's bigger, with a horn and has different patterns.

Release Command: Awaken....Olvido!!

Manifestation: He is more bigger. His mask covers his whole face and some of his chest. He wears a big coat of black.

Appearance: {The appearance of your Hollow Zanpakuto: The other part of your body that is used to contain the rest of your Resurrecíon. Does not have to be a sword - or even a weapon.}

Release Command: {The phrase used to release your Ressurecíon, followed by it's name.}

Manifestation: The mask is now covering the face that looks like Rudobon's(in Bleach if you know or not.). The mask covers to his chest, with a big hole in his chest that seems like a void. His arms resembles a skeleton's as they are enlarged.

Abilities: Asolar(Spanish means obliterate Kanji means to extinguish)The user charges all kind of unexpected negative energy into his chest, wiping out everything in sight. Anything caught, melts and deteriorates.

Sonido

Cero

Tough Hierro

Grandioso Sombra Cero(Spanish for grand shadow Kanji for infinite blur heavy performance hollow flash)The user collects a ton of reiatsu. A large cero charges on his chest. The entire cero is black, wiping out whatever is opposite of its kind.

 

Now can you accept? Sorry but I get brief a lot.

[CarlinFan]

Reserve, please. Currently working on app.

[Taion]

Name: Saseru

Gender: Male

Personality: Bright, naive, narcissistic.

Appearance: He wears a black,tattered, haori with a white under robe. He has spiky blond hair and bright blue eyes and a scar at the end of the eyebrow on the right eye.

 

Zanpakuto:

Name: Setsuna

Appearance: A katana that is 6 feet long. The sheath is a dark blue color and has black markings running down it. The handle is red.

Shikai release command: Disintigrate, Setsuna!

Shikai appearance: The sword grows an extra 3 feet and turns pure red. A red aura begins to radiate from the sword and it becomes white hot.

 

Shikai abilities:

Scorch: Saseru raises the sword and brings it upon the ground. The ground cracks and shutters and flames erupt from the cracks in the ground.

Burn Up: Flames engulf Saseru's body and sword and speed increases.

 

Resurrecíon:

Name: La Quemadura (spanish for burn)

Appearance: A pair of red claws strung around his waist.

Release command: Burn, La Quemadura!

Manifestation: Saseru turns red and horns jut out of his arms and head. His eys turn red and Skulls form on his shoulders and knee caps. This only happens when he is absolutely enraged. when he calms down he returns to normal.

 

Abilities:

Embodied Flame: Saseru once again becomes engulfed in flames and his strength and speed increase ten fold. Anything caught in his flame disintegrates?

 

Can I join? If I can when does this start?

[PrimalFear]

Reserved and App all ready sent via PM I'd prefer my app be anonymous like Blazing Hydra if you would be so kind Umbra.

[Umbra]

As I have seen a few common errors in the applications I've seen, I will simply list them here.

 

* Under any circumstance, you CANNOT compare your character to an existant one. Descriptions like "like Ulquiorra's" or "like Starrk" are not allowed. The application form is a test of your abilities of character design, not Kubo's.

 

* Observed are not like Vaizards; they do not have masks, neither in or out of their Resureccion.

 

* Pictures are not allowed, under any circumstance.

 

* Shikais have Japanese names, Resureccions have Spanish names. Those of you that don't follow this, go back and re-do. Pluses also have proper Japanese names, not Engrish, western-y ones.

 

Those of you who have violated one or more of the above, consider yourselves not accepted. The rest of you are still in review.

 

EDIT: Taion, not accepted. It's not elaborate enough.

[Βyakuya]

Does this mean I'm not in by ONE mistake? =(

[Umbra]

Does this mean I'm not in by ONE mistake? =(

 

You have also ALREADY tried and failed once. Not to mention that you repeated that mistake at least twice.

[Taion]

Wait what did I do wrong? O_o

[Azure Flame Kite]

I've seen your app, I think he means you didn't elaborate enough. Like your personality, for instance. Also, Reserve, please.

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Name: Jun Misaki

Gender: Male

Appearance: Jun's most prominent features are his spiky rose-colored hair and the x-shaped scar on the right side of his face. He stands at 5'10 and his body is toned but not noticeably muscular. He wears a standard shinigami uniform, but the right sleeve is torn off to the shoulder for the sole reason of making him look cooler.

 

Personality: Jun can best be described as hedonistic, carefree and reckless, and his motto is to live to the extreme, which he applies to everything he does. As such he prefers to fight his opponents head on seeing any disadvantage as a chance to improve his fighting skills. Though once every other week he has what he calls a 'slow day' where he adopts a laid-back personality. He becomes fairly shy around girls he isn't direct friends with, and is nervous whenever he talks to one. He is a fiercely loyal friend, and will gladly give his life to save his friends.

Zanpakuto:

Name: Kazekiba

Appearance: Kazekiba takes the form of katana, which Jun places on his back

Shikai Release Command: Bite them to death, kazekiba

Shikai Appearance: {How is your Zanpakuto modified by it's released powers? What happens to it?}

Shikai Abilities: {The special powers your Zanpakuto possesses in it's Shikai state.}

 

Resurrecíon: {Unlike Vaizards, who gain Hollow powers by using a mask, the Observed use a separate Zanpakuto, much like Arrancar.

Name: El toro tiburon(bull shark)

Appearance: {The appearance of your Hollow Zanpakuto: The other part of your body that is used to contain the rest of your Resurrecíon. Does not have to be a sword - or even a weapon.}

Release Command: {The phrase used to release your Ressurecíon, followed by it's name.}

Manifestation: {How is your appearance changed by the Resurrecíon?}

Abilities: {The powers you can use while your Resurrecíon is released.}

[Taion]

Name: Saseru

Gender: Male

Personality: Bright, naive, narcissistic. He is normally a bright happy person but is easily enraged. Once enraged theres no stopping him. He normally lives by what he believes and doesn't take advice easily. He also has a terrible fear of water.

Appearance: He wears a black,tattered, haori with a white under robe. He has spiky blond hair and bright blue eyes and a scar at the end of the eyebrow on the right eye.

 

Zanpakuto:

Name: Setsuna

Appearance: A katana that is 6 feet long. The sheath is a dark blue color and has black markings running down it. The handle is red.

Shikai release command: Disintigrate, Setsuna!

Shikai appearance: The sword grows an extra 3 feet and turns pure red. A red aura begins to radiate from the sword and it becomes white hot.

 

Shikai abilities:

Scorch: Saseru raises the sword and brings it upon the ground. The ground cracks and shutters and flames erupt from the cracks in the ground.

Burn Up: Flames engulf Saseru's body and sword and speed increases.

 

Resurrecíon:

Name: La Quemadura (spanish for burn)

Appearance: A pair of red claws strung around his waist.

Release command: Burn, La Quemadura!

Manifestation: Saseru turns red and horns jut out of his arms and head. His eys turn red and Skulls form on his shoulders and knee caps. This only happens when he is absolutely enraged. when he calms down he returns to normal.

 

Abilities:

Embodied Flame: Saseru once again becomes engulfed in flames and his strength and speed increase ten fold. Anything caught in his flame disintegrates?

 

there i think i fixed it.

[Azure Flame Kite]

Yeah, that's much better, but the appearance might be considered too vague, but it's not my decision and I have no authority over this thread.

[Umbra]

Taion, the only problem I see is that Shikai abilities usually only affect the sword itself; thus, Burn Up doesn't really work. But as it is only a minor error, I grant you permission to fix it. When you have, consider yourself accepted.

 

JCB, you do know your form isn't filled out completely, right?

[Taion]

Name: Saseru

Gender: Male

Personality: Bright, naive, narcissistic. He is normally a bright happy person but is easily enraged. Once enraged theres no stopping him. He normally lives by what he believes and doesn't take advice easily. He also has a terrible fear of water.

Appearance: He wears a black,tattered, haori with a white under robe and a red sash and headband. He has spiky blond hair and bright blue eyes and a scar at the end of the eyebrow on the right eye.

 

Zanpakuto:

Name: Setsuna

Appearance: A katana that is 6 feet long. The sheath is a dark blue color and has black markings running down it. The handle is red.

Shikai release command: Blast, Setsuna!

Shikai appearance: The sword grows an extra 3 feet and turns pure red. A red aura begins to radiate from the sword and it becomes white hot.

 

Shikai abilities:

Scorch: Saseru raises the sword and brings it upon the ground. The ground cracks and shutters and flames erupt from the cracks in the ground.

Burn Up: Flames engulf Saseru's sword and his speed dramaticly increases.

 

Resurrecíon:

Name: La Quemadura (spanish for burn)

Appearance: A pair of red claws strung around his waist.

Release command: Burn, La Quemadura!

Manifestation: Saseru turns red and horns jut out of his arms and head. His eyes turn red and Skulls form on his shoulders and knee caps. This only happens when he is absolutely enraged. When he calms down he is able to return to normal.

 

Abilities:

Embodied Flame: Saseru once again becomes engulfed in flames and his strength and speed increase ten fold. Anything caught in his flame disintegrates.

 

there i think i fixed it again so i suppose im accepted i think oh and i made a few alterations to shikai commands and appearance.

[ryuujinn]

Observed:

Name: Shishiomaru

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Shishiomaru stand's 5'7" tall, weighing around 130lbs. He has middle-length, messy black hair, with his bangs dropping down the right side of his face, covering his right eye. He has a pair of sunset-orange eyes, and very pale white skin. His nose down to his mouth is always covered with a cloth, similar to what ninjas wear, and it is colored black. He wears a dark-blue shirt which sports a large shrunken drawing on the front. A white jacket lined with blue strips that extends from shoulder blade to the coattails at the back is worn on top of the shirt. He wears a white hakama with plated armors on the side. The armor overlaps each other, similar to what ancient samurais used. Each of his foot is covered in black bandages, and he wears a white waraji on both foot.

 

Personality:

Shishiomaru is erratic, and unpredictable. He keeps mostly to himself most of the time, but may become suddenly hyperactive. He can also become extremely quiet and composed. When he likes the surroundings, he is energetic and active. If he dislikes the surrounding, he is silent and indifferent. He has a habit of changing up his attitude depending on what he feels.

 

 

Zanpakuto:

Name: Jishaku

Appearance:

Jishaku, in its unreleased state, is a wakizashi with a circular cross-guard embedded with a minus sign (-) in the middle. The handle is colored mustard-yellow, and the blade is 12" long, with a hollow middle portion. The blade itself is 4cm wide, with a 1cm wide hollow portion in the middle which extends from the tsuba until around 3inches before the tip.

 

Shikai Release Command: Repel, Jishaku!

Shikai Appearance:

When Jishaku is released, the wakizashi transforms into a trident with a lightning design cascading from the tip towards the middle. The trident's tip sizzle with electricity and erratically disperses a charge every few seconds.

Shikai Abilities: Jishaku allows Shishiomaru to imbue his reiatsu with negative charges, producing static and lighting. This causes his attack to become negatively charged.

 

Kaminari Ken: Shishiomaru punches the ground or an object near him with negatively charged fists, causing a massive burst of thunder to explode around him, causing minor damage in 1 meter radius around him, producing a smokescreen of static clouds 5 meters wide, and charging everything the thunder hits negatively. (The charge is applied if targets are hit by the 1 meter radius explosion. The static cloud serves only as smokescreen effect, just like smokebombs.)

 

Byakurai: Shishiomaru points Jishaku towards a target, firing off a pristine white lightning that erupts from the three points of his Zanpakutou. The lightning will pierce the target's defense if its positively charged. However, it the target is negatively charged, this attack is dispersed instead, causing minor to no damage.

 

Shintenraiho: Shishiomaru charges up Jishaku with enough negative charges, causing the trident to glow white, and sparks of electricity to fly off. The energy can then be released in a straight line, damaging anything in a straight path. This ability becomes more devastating if it hits a target that is positively charged. If this hits a negatively charged object, its damage is halved. However, this ability cannot be fired consecutively under any circumstances, and will require an internal cooldown (this ability becomes active after 5 posts of the user since the ability was used).

 

 

Resurrecíon:

Name: Magneto Negro

Appearance:

Magneto Negro is a long nodachi hanging from the back of Shishiomaru, supported by a long leather strap that goes over his left shoulder to the his right waist. The blade is black, and non-reflective, with a wavy chrome pattern in the middle. The cross-guard has an oblique design with an embedded plus sign (+) in the middle. The handlewrap is black, while the base handle itself is white.

 

Release Command: Condense, Magneto Negro!

Manifestation:

Shishiomaru's face becomes covered in black mask, covering his entire head. The mask has only holes for the eyes, with each holes having a big plus (+) sign colored white. His body clothing also becomes completely black, except for his skin, which remains pale white. His nodachi dissolves and reforms into a pair of black gloves with a big plus (+) sign inscribed in the middle of the backhand.

 

Abilities:

Magneto Negro allows Shishiomaru to condense his own reiatsu into a solid form to create positively charged projectiles of varying strength.

 

Lanzador Oscuro: Shishiomaru condenses his black reiatsu and several solid particles into a lance-like projectile which is a meter long. Once thrown, the lance travels a linear path, and will implode on the first obstacle it hits. The implosion only affects the target hit. If the target is positively charged, this attack will cause very minor damage. If the target is negatively charged, this attack pierces defense such as hierro, armor, etc. This cannot be fired in quick succession, and will require another ability to be used first before another Lanzador Oscuro can be fired again.

 

Bala Negra: Shishiomaru can fire a black ball of condensed energy in quick successions. The energy does not explode when it hits, and instead implodes, causing damage to the target. When this hits an object or a person, it leaves a positive charge. Positively Charged objects are nearly immunized to Lanzador Oscuro's damage.

 

Magneto Hierro: Shishiomaru can condense his reiatsu to form a black, overlapping armor around him reminiscent of a samurai's standard armor. The armor is durable enough to withstand a cero oscuras at point blank range, but cannot withstand consecutive hits from the same cero. If there are any negative charges around, the armor absorbs them to become more durable. The more negative charges it absorbs, the stronger it gets.

 

 

*Note: Application of Opposite Charges cancel each other out. A negatively charged object applied with a positive charge will negate both, and become neutrally charged again.

[The Tin Trooper]

Made changes to my app.

[Umbra]

Made changes to my app.

 

Not enough - you just changed the name in one place, not throughout the entire app, and you're still comparing your clothing to other characters.

 

ryuujinn, I will need more time to look at your app, but it sounds promising

 

EDIT: After consideration, I have decided to turn your application down, ryuujinn. Your Shikai abilities are too overpowered, in my opinion. Not only can you ionize everything in a certain area with Kaminari Ken, practically making it explode, and on top of that you can fire off the equivalent of a double 88th-level spell at your targets, and produce lightning. Combined with your resurrecíon, which lets you turn everything in a 5-meter radius into a weapon, it's just too much. I like the idea, but it's too much.