Space Mission Alpha

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[align=center]Space Mission Alpha

 

In the Year 2572 a Space Cruiser called SC-Alpha was hit during a Meteor Shower. All the Systems were down and the Survivors could not Contact Earth. This story however is about one sertain Survivor, Joe McDoeun.

 

Chapter 1

 

Joe woke up laying on the cold floor, it was almost pitch black. Joe could see a figure hovering above him holding two lights. "Hello my Friend, are you feeling okay?" Said the voice. "Woah, were am I?" questioned Joe. "Well my friend, you are on SC-Alpha of course, we were caught in a Meteor Shower or something. I would contact Earth so that we can get help but..." said the Voice. "But what?" asked Joe. "But the door in locked." said the Voice. "Oh and my name is Mark O'Malley. Take a torch before I eat your limbs" Said Mark. "There is an upside to being locked in here, I made a friend with this Alien fellow named Honk Honk, he would have bitten me if I wasn't a Doctor and helped him." said Dr. O'Malley. "So there is a Man Eating Alien in here, who could turn on us at any time, in a room... That's locked." Then Honk Honk charged at the Locked Door and smashed it open, but then Honk Honk disappeared. "Why didn't he do that before?" said Dr. O'Malley. Then a small black Kitten walked into the room and had Blood dripping from it's mouth. "Oh my. A Flesh Eating Kitten. Here take this Assult Shotgun. If we're going to survive we have to get to the Top of the Ship.

 

Dr. O'Malley and Joe ran down the hallways of the Ship and took the endless corners. "If this is the most High Technology Space Ship, why does it have so many stairs!?" Yelled Joe. "Because the Power is out and the Teleporters aren't working." Yelled back Dr O'Malley. Then Dr O'Malley tripped and was hanging off the edge of the walkway. "Help me up Joe!" Yelled Dr. O'Malley. Joe reached out to Dr O'Malley but the Dr was dragged off into the Darkness. "The Code is 5 Digits, they are 725-" Yelled O'Malley before his voice faded off. "725 What Doctor! 725 What!?" Yelled Joe into the Darkness. Joe had to keep going. No matter what. Joe kicked down the last door before entering the Top Floor. But before he could kick it down he heard something behind him, he turned quickly and there was a Giant Red Alien about to rip off his head.

 

Everything for Joe was in slow motion, like in one of those Dramatic Movies. Then the Alien was shot four times in the back. The Alien's purple blood sprayed onto Joe. "Who are you!?" Yelled Joe. "Just call me OS-53." said a Soldier in Dark Red armor said, his helmet blocking his face. "If I didn't come you would be Hyurian Food." said OS-53. "Wait... Hyurian? Is that what these are!?" Yelled Joe. "Yes! I was trained in Aim and Speed. Unlike alot of OS's who trained in Heavy Arms and Dodging." Joe watched as OS-53 kicked down the door and shot seven times. "All Hyurians Eliminated." Joe was shocked. He looked in the room and saw seven Hyurian corpses. "You must have majored in Aiming." said Joe. "Actually I got a B- in Aiming. The Best of my class was OS-29. He could shoot once and three targets were dead. He cut his bullets into three and made his own gun. Which is why he also majored in Arms Making." Said OS-53.

 

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[Kaisu]

Umm..

 

I think it's a bit too fast-paced. It's kinda random.

 

Also, it's very short, AND not much description.

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Umm..

 

I think it's a bit too fast-paced. It's kinda random.

 

Also' date=' it's very short, AND not much description.

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Theres only going to be 4 Chapters ...