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The Story of Pyka. A Naruto Story


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This story is a Naruto story and will take place at the same time the real Naruto is taking place. But Naruto will only be mentioned once or twice. I have pictures for the characters but I will have to upload them so they are comming soon. My computers tab key won't work and I tried using the space bar instead but that wouldn't work at the beginning of a paragraph either so I just put them in different colors. A new chapter will be added every Sunday unless I state other wise.

 

 

My name is Ameratso, Pyka. And this is my story.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1: Attack of the Kyubi]

One peaceful night in Konohagakure, a red chakra started to flow through the village. Then, the Kyubi appeared right outside the village. The villagers started screaming in panic as the shinobi rushed to get them to safety.

My parents left me in my crib so they could go help our familly friend Minato Namikaze fight the vicious Kyubi. I was only two but I could still vaguely hear the screams of panic from the villagers while I was laying in my crib. I sat up to try to see out the window but I couldn't. I stood up with support from the crib's rail. Suddenly the crib's rail broke and I fell out of my bed! Now even though I was panicked I could see a bunch of scrolls that my parents used to read that were set up in a sort of formation that looked like stairs. I started to climb up the scrolls. It was a short adventure but when I got to the top I was increadibly tired. I looked outside to see the red chakra and the villagers who were still running in panic.

I leaned out the window to see a better but I guess I leaned out a little bit to far because I fell out the window and landed on the roof of the Ichiraku Ramen Bar. I rolled off the roof and onto the ground. A passerby shinobi saw me and summoned a hawk to take me as far away from the village as his chakra would let him.

I was on the back of the hawk looking down at the battle between the Kyubi, Minato, and my parents when one of the Kyubi's tails lashes out and kills the bird. Minato saw this but he didn't know it was me so he just summoned one of his toads to take me as far away as possible.

While the toad was carrying me off I could still see the Kyubi lashing out it's tails to try and kill my parents and Minato. This was one of the scariest moments of my life because I didn't know if they were going to survive or not. But the only thing I could do was to believe in them and fall asleep. As soon as I was about to fall asleep there was a huge explosion in the direction the battle was. It must have been one of the tails I think as I gently fall into a sleep.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2: The Dream]

As I sleep on the toad's back I have a strange dream. I am in a cave wearing a black robe with red clouds on it and a green, black, and blue scarf wraped around my waist which also has a sheath and a sword on it. My hair is a sky blue and is spiked and puffy. There is a red scar running from my right cheek to my chin as if someone had dragged a blade there.

I am fighting a girl from Konohagakure. Her hair was a bright red-orange color, with long bangs covering her right eye, along with two green clips holding the rest of the bangs out of her left eye. Her hair was pulled into short pigtails in the back. She used the Kasari-gama* as a weapon.

I pulled out my sword and charged her. She dodged just in time. The girl pulled out the Kusari-gama and started to spin it above her head. Then, she threw the weight side of the Kusari-gama and trapped me.

"I don't want to fight you!" I only want to take you bake to the village." The girl crys to me.

"The villagers would never forgive me for what I did. And even if they did I am to ashamed of what I did." I yell back to her.

"Fine then how about if I win then you come back to the village." The girl says.

"And what if I win?" I ask.

"Then I leave you alone and let you stay here." The girl says.

"Heh. Fine deal. It's not like you'll ever be able to defeat me." I say.

"Oh. It's not just me you'll be fighting." She says suspiciously.

Then a middle-aged man came charging at me with a Kusari-gama. I jumped out of the way just as he swipes at me with the sickle. I unleash a cloud of poison. Both the girl and the man throw the weight end of the Kusari-gama at me. I hit the ground and wake up and at the same time the toad disappears and I drop into the sand in front of Sunagakure.

*=The Kusari-gama is a combination of a sickle (short scythe) and a long chain with a weight attached to the end of it. The sickle was used in a slashing or stabbing motion, as well as used to block and hook opponents weapons. By holding the chain portion of the weapon, the sickle could be swung around to get a greater reach with it. The chain portion of the weapon was most often used for trapping an enemy or his weapon. Once tangled up with the chain, the ninja could finish him off with the sickle. This was a weapon the ninja invented out of farming tools they used.)

 

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Guest Neo Fusion

ah, major foreshadowing here, cool

so he becomes a bad guy, eh? kinda wondering how a baby can intelligently narrate, but hey, ur story

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