~The Game~ Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 So i might as well join. Headphones pump to the music like a drum,The radio's blarin' and I can't stop starin'at you~ My girlfriends drunk, all she want's to do is hump,and the DJ can't keep up, with the feeling, the toneand the mood~ Your eyes, like fire, you're voice is hitting higherThe scene is overrated, and all I can smellis booze~ I don't belong here... My buddy's f*cked up, everybody's throwing up,My parent's know I'm gone, Now I'm probably on the news~ The Moon is going down, and when the sun comes around,The headaches, the nausea, the morning will leave usconfused~ I don't belong here.I don't belong in this room! ... That failed. >.>Prepare for the hate! ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 It sounds like a pop song. If you want to talk about booze sex, and parties, rap or rock 'n roll should be the genre. Now, people are going to post "l0l, rap is crap!!1LOL!@!1!!shift!1!" :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Game~ Posted April 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 its actually a soft rock in my mind. Its about a party, and how you know you shouldn't be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nnoitra Jiruga Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 Yep,I think you should make it a more hard rock song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 its actually a soft rock in my mind. Its about a party' date=' and how you know you shouldn't be there.[/quote']When I read it, I thought it was a pop song. I'd love more lyrics and it to read it like a rap/rock song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Game~ Posted April 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 its actually a soft rock in my mind. Its about a party' date=' and how you know you shouldn't be there.[/quote']When I read it, I thought it was a pop song. I'd love more lyrics and it to read it like a rap/rock song. Sorry >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 its actually a soft rock in my mind. Its about a party' date=' and how you know you shouldn't be there.[/quote']When I read it, I thought it was a pop song. I'd love more lyrics and it to read it like a rap/rock song. Sorry >.>Don't be. Also, this should probably be in the Music section. EDIT: You mods move fast :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Should have been posted in the thread for songwriters/poets. I thought it sounded like an electro/synth pop song. Basic rhymes, but I liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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