Yu-Gi-Oh! Tales Of A Galaxy (PG-13?) - Chapter 7, Glads suck.

[Guest Zeonark]

Also - Machina Armored Unit summons an EARTH not a LIGHT monster. >_>

 

"Once per turn' date=' when a Machine-Type monster is destroyed by battle and sent to your Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster with lower ATK and [b']the same Attribute from your Deck.[/b]"

 

Doesn't say EARTH or has to be Machinas.

Someone needs to check the Wikia again. ._.

[~Oleon~]

Wow.

The cards they have in my country must be so freaking different. o.O

[Toffee.]

The cards they have in my country must be so freaking different. o.O

Nah... you just need to read the cards now-and-then ;)

[-Griffin]

The cards they have in my country must be so freaking different. o.O

Nah... you just need to read the cards now-and-then ;)

Don't overwork the poor thing.

[Yankee]

So..When is chapter 4?

[Clair]

My fault. I'm going to proofread it now.

 

I was supposed to proofread yours too, now that I've remembered.

 

Gah. I'm such a bad editor. D:

 

Sorry, Yankee and Zeo.

[Yankee]

My fault. I'm going to proofread it now.

 

I was supposed to proofread yours too' date=' now that I've remembered.

 

Gah. I'm such a bad editor. D:

 

Sorry, Yankee and Zeo.

[/quote']

 

I already posted mine...

But care to help me continue...?

[Clair]

My fault. I'm going to proofread it now.

 

I was supposed to proofread yours too' date=' now that I've remembered.

 

Gah. I'm such a bad editor. D:

 

Sorry, Yankee and Zeo.

[/quote']

 

I already posted mine...

But care to help me continue...?

 

Yeah, if you'll let me. ;D

 

If I'm not prompt in returning PMs, please forgive me. I can't spend all my time on the computer. ^^

[Yankee]

Sure, I'll let you. ;)

 

PM me tho, so I know you're on ^_\\\

[Clair]

After I'm done editing Chapter Four of this fic, you're next. ;D

[Yankee]

I <3 U Clair ;)

[The_Prince_of_Death]

Man I can't wait to see chapter 4 I'm so excited to see how my character comes into play and what exactly is the position of the character....I really can't wait for summer so I can help with fan-fics but before them I need to work on my shop items.

[Guest Zeonark]

Chapter 4 is up with multiple screw ups on my end.

 

J, instead of Laid-Back, came out Lazy.

Tom, came out as the serious, yet easily irritated character who knows a bit about Drake.

X-L somehow looks like an... well, you'll just have to read and see.

But Scarlet? Not sure if I got her personality right, but she came out almost exactly like I wanted. o_O

 

You guys might kill me. Lol. Also, Featured Cards (Similar to GX) have been added to the previous chapters and will be added into any chapters with duels.

[Nexev]

Pretty interesting.

 

Duel Academy is understaffed.

[Guest Zeonark]

Indeed.

I'll probably pull out some of GX's character or throw in a 5D's character in as staff for teh lulz.

[Clair]

Chapter 4 is up with multiple screw ups on my end.

 

J' date=' instead of Laid-Back, came out Lazy.

Tom, came out as the serious, yet easily irritated character who knows a bit about Drake.

X-L somehow looks like an... well, you'll just have to read and see.

But Scarlet? Not sure if I got her personality right, but she came out almost exactly like I wanted. o_O

 

You guys might kill me. Lol. Also, Featured Cards (Similar to GX) have been added to the previous chapters and will be added into any chapters with duels.

[/quote']

 

Sorry if I messed up your personalities. D:

 

Keep it up! ^^

 

Indeed.

I'll probably pull out some of GX's character or throw in a 5D's character in as staff for teh lulz.

 

PROFESSOR BANNER.

 

And Yanagi. For the lulz.

[Guest Zeonark]

Nah, you didn't mess them up.

 

Banner? That would be lulzy.

Yanagi as a teacher would be so funny, yet so full of win.

 

...Tanner and Yanagi for teachers, anyone?

[BulletMan]

I almost died laughing! LOL!

 

And my guy, how u pictured him, came out better than I thought! WOW!

[Kaisu]

Cut off on another duel, eh?

 

Ah well, seems alright. It's all dialouge though.

[Guest Zeonark]

I almost died laughing! LOL!

 

And my guy' date=' how u pictured him, came out better than I thought! WOW!

[/quote']

 

o_O

Better than you thought? I thought I had made him come out horribly wrong. Lol.

 

Cut off on another duel' date=' eh?

 

Ah well, seems alright. It's all dialouge though.

[/quote']

 

Like I said, I'm better at dialogue than descriptions. /:

[Kaisu]

Oh well, it's lulzy xD

But seriously, Arimi's stupidity can get a bit annoying 0-O

[BulletMan]

Also, have you replied to Solar Version chap 1 yet? I don't think so...

 

And yes. You should put in a joke sometime about why he's called "X-L". XD

[Guest Zeonark]

Oh well' date=' it's lulzy xD

But seriously, Arimi's stupidity can get a bit annoying 0-O

[/quote']

 

She gets slightly smarter around the middle 20's.

 

Also' date=' have you replied to Solar Version chap 1 yet? I don't think so...

 

And yes. You should put in a joke sometime about why he's called "X-L". XD

[/quote']

 

Will reply when I get the chance.

 

...

*Writes down joke* >D

[Toffee.]

lol@how I end up bieng lazy

Either way, it still works XD

[The_Prince_of_Death]

Chapter 4 is up with multiple screw ups on my end.

 

J' date=' instead of Laid-Back, came out Lazy.

Tom, came out as the serious, yet easily irritated character who knows a bit about Drake.

X-L somehow looks like an... well, you'll just have to read and see.

But Scarlet? Not sure if I got her personality right, but she came out almost exactly like I wanted. o_O

 

You guys might kill me. Lol. Also, Featured Cards (Similar to GX) have been added to the previous chapters and will be added into any chapters with duels.

[/quote']

 

Tom seemed fine to me...as far as I can remeber my app I sent. though what was the reason for not being in that one room? I'm intrigued by that very much.....I'm not going to re-read the other chapters to see the GX cards, just too lazy and busy to do it. And I don't see anything about him being easily irritated.