Clair Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 I like it. Because I proofread it. ;D No, seriously. I don't know what it is, but I keep wanting to read more of your story. <3 Keep up the good work~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Doez Clair wanna helpz me!? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Doez Clair wanna helpz me!? XD I wil helpz u, yankey. i am good at gramar and spells and stuff. ^^ (Seriously, I'll help. <3) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Yayz :D*<3's Clair* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Good. Though X-L seemed more like a jerk, but I looked it over again and realized he was just really good friends with Larry, but was okay with Airmi winning. He didn't mention anything when Machina Fortress was Summoned... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 @Yankee:Lance appears in Chapter 4, and I need to do something with his deck before Chapter 5. @Clair:Maybe because the name is interesting?Thanks. @X-L:...He was suppose to? Sorry, haven't had a chance to re-read everyone's profiles. Teachers like X-L and Larry are all best friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 What do you need to be done to his deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 I'm going to make some support and post it in RC like Saiba does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Have you got any ideas yet Zeo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Plenty. I always think ahead when I'm doing stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 @X-L:...He was suppose to? Sorry' date=' haven't had a chance to re-read everyone's profiles. Teachers like X-L and Larry are all best friends.[/quote'] You forgot his catchphrase, that's what. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 =D nice fic. Good to see something that both uses a decent amount of real cards and isn't afraid to use actual good cards or themed Decks. Even if half the GX 'fic cliches are filled, at least she doesn't run some generic Warrior Deck. Seriously. How many fics have done that now? Such a shame she couldn't just throw out Chimeratech to eat up his field, but I suppose we can't expect the Decks to be entirely perfect for someone just joining~(She also forgot to use Frontline when Zwei was run over) Anyway, should be good, hopefully I'll remember to read it =3 *is bad at that* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Right now she's supposed to be a complete moron. If she knew what a Chimeratech was then that would have ruined the point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 I'm going to make some support and post it in RC like Saiba does. ...Or you can ask me? I AM Yankeefan ;)XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 @X-L:...He was suppose to? Sorry' date=' haven't had a chance to re-read everyone's profiles. Teachers like X-L and Larry are all best friends.[/quote'] You forgot his catchphrase, that's what. ...Oh damn. I'm an idiot. =D nice fic. Good to see something that both uses a decent amount of real cards and isn't afraid to use actual good cards or themed Decks. Even if half the GX 'fic cliches are filled' date=' [i']at least she doesn't run some generic Warrior Deck.[/i] Seriously. How many fics have done that now? Such a shame she couldn't just throw out Chimeratech to eat up his field, but I suppose we can't expect the Decks to be entirely perfect for someone just joining~(She also forgot to use Frontline when Zwei was run over) Anyway, should be good, hopefully I'll remember to read it =3 *is bad at that* Whoa, Griffin commented. o_oLol. Thanks. I wanted to give the main character one of my favorite decks instead of completely just redo-ing GX with Elemental Heroes or something. If she threw out Chimeratech in the first duel, there wouldn't be a point in making her an idiot, would there? xDAnd I totally forgot about Frontline. Damn. Right now she's supposed to be a complete moron. If she knew what a Chimeratech was then that would have ruined the point. Exactly. I'm going to make some support and post it in RC like Saiba does. ...Or you can ask me? I AM Yankeefan ;)XD xDWell, you have a point about being THE Yankeefan. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 lol, so ya, send me what you want me to fix and do ^_\\\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Prince_of_Death Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 I like this new chapter. though I found it kind of long but that is okay, since the story is good enough to make me keep reading. lol....now I just can't wait for my character to appear...I wonder how he will be introduced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 I know how mine should be introduced. He'll be hanging with his crew of mates and showing off his Red Dragon Archfiend =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 I know how mine should be introduced. He'll be hanging with his crew of mates and showing off his Red Dragon Archfiend =3 Jack is over-done XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Card games... ON MOTORCYCLES! I have no idea how my character will appear, but it's probably be over the top. Involving the holy flames of the passionate weak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Nice XDNexev's guy sounds sexy XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 I know how mine should be introduced. He'll be hanging with his crew of mates and showing off his Red Dragon Archfiend =3 Too... predictable. Card games... ON MOTORCYCLES! I have no idea how my character will appear' date=' but it's probably be over the top. Involving the holy flames of the passionate weak.[/quote'] OH MY GOD, THAT'S SO F*CKING METAL. It'll be hilarious. Nice XDNexev's guy sounds sexy XD He's HOT.And Nexev will be the only one who gets it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 What if that's how he appears? He attempts to try it out, see if it would work, then crashes into a wall cause you can't steer and play cards at the same time. Because vehicles cannot carry the burden a true hero must shouldur, the burden of protecting the values of the unfortunate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 How 'bout appearing by almost running Arimi over with the Wheel of Fortune? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 XDI'll join in the parade... You know you like my guy more...;) Also, post #99.I have the last double digit...bastards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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