Nexev Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Well I read it and it's pretty interesting, the airhead is a bit saddening but I'm one of those people who like underdogs and get really annoyed when a protagonist winds up too powerful. So I like her. I can make a character but I am not good at decks (as weather knows since mine wound up being a bunch of random cards that followed a theme so they could be useful when the plot demanded) or card-making so it might not be a good duelist so much as a good character, and I'd need to know what is going to happen better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 @Kai: Nah. She's more popular. @Nexev:Well I could fetch a deck for the character. Just tell me what you'd basically want. Like Harpies or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Still. You're still popularz Also, tell me when you're done ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Okay then sure, I'll make a character then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Still. You're still popularz Also' date=' tell me when you're done ^^[/quote'] Actually, I am done. But I'm still proofreading and re-writing a few times. Okay then sure' date=' I'll make a character then.[/quote'] I'll send you the App. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 This is pretty lulzy so far.Episode 2 is effectivly going to be called: "Win within 20 turns!"*Assuming Larry is using Final Countdown* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 I believe Final Countdown allows you to win within 15 turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 It's 20.. Also, Zeo, finished rewriting yet? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Oh yes it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Chapter 2 is up. In this chapter, people who declare they drew something good are idiots. X-L is introduced, forgot to mention that he's... er... big. And I got his personality wrong X-L, sorry. Right now, he's the friendly, yet overly excited teacher who's friends with Larry. Larry's personality is drawn out a bit more here too. Also, Japanese attack names FTW. If it sucks, sorry. Just don't bash me for it, I'm not the best writer in the world. And Kai, I forgot to send it to you. Sorry. I'll send you the edited Chapter 3.Oh, and for everyone else, you're getting introduced in chapters 4-7. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Did Larry summon two monsters in one turn? That's against the rules isn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Did Larry summon two monsters in one turn? That's against the rules isn't it? Did I seriously make that mistake? SCREW THE RULES, HE HAS ANCIENT GEAR GOLEM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 @ Nexev: THAT WAS THE TEST! IF SHE HAD NOTICED, SHE WOULD HAVE WON. NOW SHE HAS TO WIN LIKE NORMAL DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 She's an idiot.She would've NEVER noticed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 How do you know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Because I came up with Arimi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Oh yes, well I suppose you are right. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Appear now!" Larry commanded' date=' slapping his card into a new Monster Zone. The orb containing the Trojan Horse disappeared, and many gears rose up out of the floor. Arimi watched in shock and fear as the gears clanked together, forming the body of a new monster. The machinated metamorphosis continued until a head was formed. A single red eye glared at Arimi shining through the black face of the monster, Ancient Gear Golem.[/quote']I <3 the detail on Gear Golem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Appear now!" Larry commanded' date=' slapping his card into a new Monster Zone. The orb containing the Trojan Horse disappeared, and many gears rose up out of the floor. Arimi watched in shock and fear as the gears clanked together, forming the body of a new monster. The machinated metamorphosis continued until a head was formed. A single red eye glared at Arimi shining through the black face of the monster, Ancient Gear Golem.[/quote']I <3 the detail on Gear Golem *cuts self* I wish I could do that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 You did me perfectly. Or, lunatic me that I described to you. So far, I can't wait to see the end result... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Appear now!" Larry commanded' date=' slapping his card into a new Monster Zone. The orb containing the Trojan Horse disappeared, and many gears rose up out of the floor. Arimi watched in shock and fear as the gears clanked together, forming the body of a new monster. The machinated metamorphosis continued until a head was formed. A single red eye glared at Arimi shining through the black face of the monster, Ancient Gear Golem.[/quote']I <3 the detail on Gear Golem I'm glad you liked it. <3 *cuts self* I wish I could do that... YOU CAN.WITH THE ANCIENT EPIC GEAR POWER FROM LARRY. You did me perfectly. Or' date=' lunatic me that I described to you. So far, I can't wait to see the end result...[/quote'] I did? Huh.End Result should be fun~ Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Sooo.. When should 3 be coming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Later. Like in a few days or the end of the week later. /: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 I wrote part of the first chapter of my FF...This makes me cry because I still sux DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 It'll probably be better than this. I mean, you have a better story planned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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