Shallow Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 I couldn't resist' date=' i liked the render so much that it drove me to making this sig.What do you guys think?[/b'] Not terrible' date=' [b']but you're missing wow factor and some good lighting. Fix the depth, because it's flat as a pancake. :P Nice concept, though. That's what I was thinking. Thanks (and thanks Night Walker), I'll improve on it. Something new. =/ The text is goodThe render blends in Are those red and black strings part of the render? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Text is atrocious just like the background. Depth was bad at first, but made even more awful by the overburned render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Not terrible' date=' but you're missing wow factor and some good lighting. Fix the depth, because it's flat as a pancake. :P Nice concept, though. EDIT: CnC this one, my latest Bad. You're missing all basics. :/ Background is horrifying and bland, the colors aren't nice at all, and the text and border ruin it even more. Just look at some more nice tuts. :P Basically the above comment' date=' but you have a somewhat better understanding. :P yeah not so good, the render seems ... bad, a little bad scaled. The ice? thing behind Toshiro is really ruining it....the bg is good, the text is okay...the border seems nicegood job.... I wouldn't CnC at your level unless you know what you're talking about. No offense. :P [spoiler=Basics]Depth - Depth perception is basically how much you can make your tag/LP look like it has far and near elements. How far away you have your focal compared to a blurred object in front of it, or having something behind the focal that is slightly blurred and smaller relative to size. Basically, it's all about focus. Flow - How easy it is for your eyes to go to the focal. Easy to understand. :P Focal - The main point of your tag, the object you want people to notice the most. Abstract tags(or most of them) do not have a focal, really. Multiple focals normally never work. Concept - You gotta have a concept beforehand or else your tag will probably look like s***. Just have an image in your head beforehand and try your best to create that image. Composition - How well your tag is brought together, how well everything works and fits relative to each element. Blending - Your focal has orange lighting and your background is a blue ice wasteland. Shitty blending. Try as hard as you can to make sure your focal belongs in it's surroundings. Wow Factor - Something that will make viewers think that was unexpected or make them wonder how they did that. Just be creative. ^^^ Temporary. thanks ^^for Shallow:I like how you burnt the render, the background is good, nice text, I don't like the point of the sig that the sword is "shattered".Catman: Just like it....and I agree Shallow's commentsNeos, you know my CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 I couldn't resist' date=' i liked the render so much that it drove me to making this sig.What do you guys think?[/b'] Not terrible' date=' [b']but you're missing wow factor and some good lighting. Fix the depth, because it's flat as a pancake. :P Nice concept, though. That's what I was thinking. Thanks (and thanks Night Walker), I'll improve on it. Something new. =/ The text is goodThe render blends in Are those red and black strings part of the render?Thanks, red is, black isn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 Not terrible' date=' [b']but you're missing wow factor[/b] and some good lighting. Fix the depth, because it's flat as a pancake. :P Nice concept, though. That's what I was thinking. Thanks (and thanks Night Walker), I'll improve on it. Something new. =/ I like it very much. But you should add some lightning for better :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 Not terrible' date=' [b']but you're missing wow factor[/b] and some good lighting. Fix the depth, because it's flat as a pancake. :P Nice concept, though. That's what I was thinking. Thanks (and thanks Night Walker), I'll improve on it. Something new. =/ Yeah you know what i think of it, though ill say it again. I like it, though, lighting is obviously missing, and the entire tag needs to blend, its missing that for some reason. Oh and now i realize that just handing Co-leader out wasn't too smart, so now, by next week ill change the co leaders. As well as the members list so youre all juniors for now, but i'll edit you later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 I have an idea, in the juniors, why don't you post our app? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 I'm working on a vexel piece... anyone know how to do proper shading? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 I'd help If I knew, but I don't. =/ Manip time: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Ewww, The texture you put on his face is oversharpened and chopppy... Id like better EFX You need a better BG... A gradient won't cut it in many cases.... Lighting and Depth need a lot of work... stock pl0x I want to make a sig... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 I have an idea' date=' in the juniors, why don't you post our app?[/quote'] What? I dont understand the question. Oh and Catman, I actually like it, though sort of bland. Still a nice piece, imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 CnC Need help on shading... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Kinda like it. Though a bit Pixelly. Never CnC'ed a Vexel so I'll leave it at that. Oh and I has a piece of my own >=] CnC if you will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Text needs work... The arm, parts of the hair and necklace thing look pixelated and/or oversharpened... Glow/blur fx not looking so hawt Ur lighting is off Depth and colors need work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 I see. Thanks. Blurred effect is cool no? D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 It makes the tag look washed out =/ CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Feels over sharpened. Lighting is ok. The text isnt working for me. As well as the overall feel. Though everyt ime i see it I change how i feel about it, Hmm... I like it but at the same time i dont. Ok. Overall, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 CnC Need help on shading... Is that a vector? It makes the tag look washed out =/ CnC Good. But why the text is reverse? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 What the hell... Username: SetaGender: Tylerwill you be active?: as long as I stay, if needed...Some of your work: Couldn't bother to... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Another great GFXer... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 NW: Cannot find mistakesZXP: The text is blurred and reversed, distracts me from the focal :/And I mean, post our avi and application like you do with the co-leaders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shallow Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Seta wants to join :D Btw, anyone know why JG is banned? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 JG is banned? *Sad face sigh*BTW, this will help:http://s470.photobucket.com/albums/rr62/DarkTitanUltima/Renders/?start=0 26 pages filled with HQ renders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Seta wants to join :D Btw' date=' anyone know why JG is banned?[/quote'] Tried to start a revolt against GIMPER.net. So I don't get any shiz CnC for mah siggeh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Hey Neos got that PM I sent you?CnC: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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