Insert_Name_Here Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying 2 Dragon-type monsters on the field. When this card is Special Summoned, pay 1000 Life Points to negate the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters. When your opponent summons one Dragon-Type Monster, discard two cards from the top of your deck to destroy that monster.Rate and comment on this possibly op'ed monster [designed to counter Dark Armed Dragon and other op'ed dragons] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 deck=Decksummon=Summon (What kinda Summon :O) Pretty good, nice pic, and good name, but the Effect is also a little boring8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy God Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Rate405, pretty much pointed out alot of those out, although.. ~Instead of "two", make it "2" OCG is good, Picture is Pretty good. 9.2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Oh, also, one, should be 1 :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Insert_Name_Here Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 deck=Decksummon=Summon (What kinda Summon :O) Pretty good' date=' nice pic, and good name, but the Effect is also a little boring8.6/10[/quote']I forgot to specify the summon [i was gonna do special summon, bt i made in like five minutes so i fogrgot about that]thanks for the rate thoughEDIT and thanks for the Rate Icy God Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Np :P Yeah, sometimes that happens to me too :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying releasing 2 face-up Dragon-type monsters on the field you control. When this card is Special Summoned, pay 1000 Life Points to and negate the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters on the field. When your opponent summons one a Dragon-Type Monster, discard two cards from the top of your deck to and destroy that monster." I noticed you kept switching back and forth between optional effect OCG and required effect OCG. Its one or the other:-You CAN use this effect-You MUST use this effect And I fixed up some little things here and there. Specifically, the summoning requirements before allowed you to tribute monsters your opponent controls. The only other thing I see is that is has the same ATK, DEF, and Level as Blue-eyes. This may be coincidence, but its just an observation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Hmm, woow, I just realized that O.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Insert_Name_Here Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying releasing 2 face-up Dragon-type monsters on the field you control. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' pay 1000 Life Points [s']to[/s] and negate the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters on the field. When your opponent summons one a Dragon-Type Monster, discard two cards from the top of your deck to and destroy that monster." I noticed you kept switching back and forth between optional effect OCG and required effect OCG. Its one or the other:-You CAN use this effect-You MUST use this effect And I fixed up some little things here and there. Specifically, the summoning requirements before allowed you to tribute monsters your opponent controls. The only other thing I see is that is has the same ATK, DEF, and Level as Blue-eyes. This may be coincidence, but its just an observation.Wah, thats alot of ocg fixes [and you mentioned stuff that most other people never even said]yeah i tried to make the summoning condition like lava golem [except without going to his/her side of the field]and the coincidence: i did that on purpose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying releasing 2 face-up Dragon-type monsters on the field you control. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' pay 1000 Life Points [s']to[/s] and negate the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters on the field. When your opponent summons one a Dragon-Type Monster, discard two cards from the top of your deck to and destroy that monster." I noticed you kept switching back and forth between optional effect OCG and required effect OCG. Its one or the other:-You CAN use this effect-You MUST use this effect And I fixed up some little things here and there. Specifically, the summoning requirements before allowed you to tribute monsters your opponent controls. The only other thing I see is that is has the same ATK, DEF, and Level as Blue-eyes. This may be coincidence, but its just an observation.Wah, thats alot of ocg fixes [and you mentioned stuff that most other people never even said]yeah i tried to make the summoning condition like lava golem [except without going to his/her side of the field]and the coincidence: i did that on purpose Oh, ok. And yeah, I noticed some stuff they didn't catch I guess.Here ya go: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying releasing 2 face-up Dragon-type monsters on the field. When this card is Special Summoned, pay 1000 Life Points to and negate the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters on the field. When your opponent summons one a Dragon-Type Monster, discard two cards from the top of your deck to and destroy that monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Insert_Name_Here Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying releasing 2 face-up Dragon-type monsters on the field you control. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' pay 1000 Life Points [s']to[/s] and negate the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters on the field. When your opponent summons one a Dragon-Type Monster, discard two cards from the top of your deck to and destroy that monster." I noticed you kept switching back and forth between optional effect OCG and required effect OCG. Its one or the other:-You CAN use this effect-You MUST use this effect And I fixed up some little things here and there. Specifically, the summoning requirements before allowed you to tribute monsters your opponent controls. The only other thing I see is that is has the same ATK, DEF, and Level as Blue-eyes. This may be coincidence, but its just an observation.Wah, thats alot of ocg fixes [and you mentioned stuff that most other people never even said]yeah i tried to make the summoning condition like lava golem [except without going to his/her side of the field]and the coincidence: i did that on purpose Oh, ok. And yeah, I noticed some stuff they didn't catch I guess.Here ya go: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying releasing 2 face-up Dragon-type monsters on the field. When this card is Special Summoned, pay 1000 Life Points to and negate the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters on the field. When your opponent summons one a Dragon-Type Monster, discard two cards from the top of your deck to and destroy that monster."thanks for that extra help[i really need to take more time so i could avoid making the same mistake over and over] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Lol.I find it helpful to look around this forum, since people here are OCG Monkeys. If theres an error, you'll see a correction for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Insert_Name_Here Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Lol.I find it helpful to look around this forum' date=' since people here are OCG Monkeys. If theres an error, you'll see a correction for it.[/quote']ill try that for now on [so i dont get bored reading ocg fixes as often xD]but seriously, ill fix it lateranymore rates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 capitalize Set, Type, Deck and Summonsone/two=1/2nice card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefire1179 Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 doesnt set= Set? other than that I think it's cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 not destroying 2 Dragon-Type monsters on the field, TRIBUTING 2 Dragon-Type monsters "When this card is Special Summoned, pay 1000 Life Points to negate the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters." <---as for this effect, don't negate their effects PERMANENTLY, make it for only 1 turn or it'll be OPed 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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