-DOOM Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 [align=center]Alliance of Extraordinary Villains A.O.E.V. Thanks to Zeonark for this idea. Small Introduction:All A.O.E.V. activate their effects by destroying other monsters you control, or swarm like BWs. ATM, there are 6 monsters. I think about making 10 - 12. If anyone has pics that would make a good Spell or Trap card, don't hold back - PM me the pic or make a card out of it and post it here! MONSTER CARDS[/align] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN000[/color]][Credit: 25000st, Secret Rare] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN001[/color]] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN002[/color]] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN003[/color]] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN004[/color]] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN005[/color] NEW] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN006[/color] NEWEST] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN040[/color] NEWEST] [spoiler=[color=#8B4513]AOEV-EN041[/color]] SPELL CARDSSPELL CARDS [spoiler= [color=#006400]AOEV-EN046[/color]] HATEHATE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 But atm, they don't obtain advantage at all.They kill your field most of the time.The only one that can increase advantage is their Synchro, but to get it you need to throw in 2-3 cards.Don't see how they'll dominate the meta at this point... :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 wow...o.Onice cards..I really like them...:Dthe OCG is prefect just I think either=each..IMO..the pics are sooo sweet..:Dlooking forward for this set...:D rate:10/10don't usually give tat rate..:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 @Byak: Thanks for your critic. But notice, if you play proeperly, you will never have an empty field. @Traceur: Thanks mate^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 @Byak: Thanks for your critic. But notice' date=' if you play proeperly, you will never have an empty field. @Traceur: Thanks mate^^[/quote'] Well, what if, you know, your opponent runs over your monster/generic destruction? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 @Byak: Thanks for your critic. But notice' date=' if you play proeperly, you will never have an empty field. @Traceur: Thanks mate^^[/quote'] Well, what if, you know, your opponent runs over your monster/generic destruction? Bribe/Solemn/Starlight Road - Whatever you want xD Of course, everythng depends on what you draw and when you draw it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 @Byak: Thanks for your critic. But notice' date=' if you play proeperly, you will never have an empty field. @Traceur: Thanks mate^^[/quote'] Well, what if, you know, your opponent runs over your monster/generic destruction? Bribe/Solemn/Starlight Road - Whatever you want xD Of course, everythng depends on what you draw and when you draw it. I'm just saying, you should give them a card that would let them gain advantage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 @Byak: Thanks for your critic. But notice' date=' if you play proeperly, you will never have an empty field. @Traceur: Thanks mate^^[/quote'] Well, what if, you know, your opponent runs over your monster/generic destruction? Bribe/Solemn/Starlight Road - Whatever you want xD Of course, everythng depends on what you draw and when you draw it. I'm just saying, you should give them a card that would let them gain advantage. ok. If i had Spell card images, i would ;_; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 When I saw Pyromaniac, I thought "finally another Pyro-Type that is not FIRE", but then I read the effect. And I really don't see how they work: half of them have harsh costs, but the other half have decent effects. The only good cards are the Pyromaniac, Spikytail because of its Special Summoning effect and, of course, the Synchro. Boneplate is plain bad, it costs you 1 monster or 2 if you use its first effect. And only for 2000 ATK?, not a fair trade in my opinion. The second effect of Spikytail is random: Why would you Special Summon an A.O.E.V of yours on your opponent's field? If you could somehow recover it easily, then it could be fine, but you didn't make an A.O.E.V card for that. Well, the Woodsman steals monsters, but at the cost of one of yours so where is the advantage? In addition, Spikytail would do better as a Tuner monster. Finally, The Dragon is messed up. First of all, remove the discarding cost: destroying it with an effect is enough to special summon it. After all, it will be hardly destroyed by an effect since it has low ATK/DEF.Also, I bet you thought "I can use the Dragon for fulfilling the cost of Boneplate and then discard a card to Special Summon it". But that wouldn't work, because the cost of Boneplate is not treated as an effect, and therefore the Dragon would be destroyed not by a card effect, but by a card mechanic. This same effect wouldn't work with the effect of Woodsman, Battle Dragon or the first effect of the aforementioned Boneplate neither, because they destroy an A.O.E.V. as a cost, and since the the destruction of the Dragon is not the last thing to happen, you miss the timing and cannot discard a card for its Special Summon. Finally, the Spell Card is bad: it costs you 3 cards (the monster, the discarded card, and the "Extraordinary Greed" itself), only to gain 2? You end losing 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Ok. This cost thing makes sense. At least you knew what i aimed for xD I'll change it immediately. Ok, now to Boneplate, the Spell and Woodsman. The monsters all have quick effects, they are Spell Speed 2. Same with the Spell card. But you're probably right, I'll remove the discard effect/cost whatever. Spikytail: I tried to make them Splashable. You can use this with Tomato, Rat, Pyramid Turtle etc. Or use in a Beast Deck with Moja. Or use it with these Gradius machine things, but this is probably not that good since spikytail is not a machine. EDIT: forgot to mention Glads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 With all of these costs, they're somewhat underpowered. Like the Synchro, remove it from play if you don't have another AOEV? Really? Boneplate's last line isn't needed.Spikytail, I don't understand with it's last effect. Woodsman is fine.Dragon is decent because it's a Foolish Burial for AOEVs. But it's discard 1 card part kinda turns me off(lol) because it's basically a mini Stardust.Pyro... is basically a Swarming Topaz, which is good enough. On the spell, where did the discard 1 card come from? I don't remember that. O_o Underpowered, but just remove some of the Drawbacks and they'll be fine. ;DThen again, we haven't seen too much of the set. If they have effects involving being discarded (Dark Worlds?) and whatnot, the drawbacks could actually help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 I removed the discard cost of the spell. The posted lore text is the correct one^^ Oh and for Spikytail, I'm going to make a card like Giant Rat. Destroy Spikytail or use it for a Synchro Summon to Special Summon the Giant Rat like monster to your opponent's side of the field. Then destroy it with one of your monsters to Special Summon 1 A.O.E.V. monster from your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 These are really nice images, Doom, and Boneplate is probably my favorite of the cards so far. They're pretty good overall effect-wise, but I just thought I'd alert you to the fact that the Draw Card is a -1. Keep up the good work, and thanks again for the image! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 The posted lore is the corect one. Thanks mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 BUMP ;_; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 UPDATED AOEV-EN005 added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 BUMP ;_; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 I believe it's tribute (not destroy) 1 AOEV monster you control. There are also a few OCG errors. Gold borders are nice. Effects are also pretty well thought out. Maybe extraordinary greed should be a normal spell though? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 It's supposed to be a Quick Spell, so that it's chainable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 I see you made the proper changes (mostly replace "to" with "and"). Now the effects of most your A.O.E.V. should trigger. The Metal Eye is an awesome addition; I could say it was just the card it needed: it brings the A.O.E.V.s you need, and you can destroy it with another A.O.E.V. to destroy a card. I like how it works well with Evil Woodsman and Pet Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Thanks mate^^ ! rep for your comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted April 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 BUMP ;_; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 now that I'm back, it's time I rated your cards, HP Doom as always, the OCG is just fine only thing I may change is the spell card. Yes I know it's a way to make up for Pot of Greed being banned, but still, it should have some other effect 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted April 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 It doesn't need more effects xD Thanks for your comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted April 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 BUMP ;_; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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