Predator

[TripleH_13]

[Verebazs2]

OCG (Official Card Grammar) fix: Trophies Collection: "While this card remains face-up on the field, increase your Lifepoints by 1000 for each monster you destroy." OP, try this instead: "While this card remains face-up on the field, increase both players Lifepoints by 1000 for each opposing monster they destroy."

Berserk: "Send every card on the field, and in either player's hand to the Graveyard. Increase your Lifepoints by 500 for each card sended to the Graveyard by this effect." Also OP.

Two Predator Team's name is just silly, and the effect doesn't make any sence.

Super Predator: "This card cannot be destroyed by Battle. Once per turn you may inflict 1000 points of damage to your Opponent's Lifepoints" OP again.

Predator Warrior: When this card destroys a monster your Opponent controls, inflict 1500 points of damage to his/her Lifepoints.

Controlling Preadtor: "While this card remains face-up on the field pay 500 Lifepoints during each of your End Phases. If you don't destroy this card." Not worthy.

Hunting Preator: " This monster can attack each monster your Opponent' controls."

I can't read Preador Kings effect, you should post it separetly in spoiler tag ( use this code, without stars: [*spoiler*]effect[/*spoiler*]) but I can tell you it's OP (over powered). There's a rule of 5000 you know, which states that no monster cards can have higher original ATK than 5000.

Pics aren't the best, but I have seen far worses. Just try avoid using pics with text on them. Also try searching for pics at other sites than google, eg. Deviantart, Photobucket.

All at all 5/10, not bad for a starter.

[quarterback98]

You like to bring people down dont ya Verebazs2. These cards aren't that bad but, you do need an OCG fix

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7.5/10

[.:Shaymin:.]

Predator king needs a card lore

 

The pics are not at HQ and are not Hi-Res

 

OCG Errors

- Monster=monster

- defense=DEF

- Enemy=opponent

 

The effects are too confusing and not up to date

 

3/10

[Verebazs2]

You like to bring people down dont ya Verebazs2. These cards aren't that bad but' date=' you do need an OCG fix[hr']

7.5/10

 

No, I don't like bring people down, you get it wrong. I just say what I think, and try to help. It seems you haven't met with flamers yet. If I'd love to bring people down I'd simply say "These cards are horrible, go f*ck yourself" and such things, and wouldn't take the trouble of giving OCG fixes. Now tell me honestly, which would have been better: if I'd lied you that your cards are great, in which case you could have saved your bubble for a bit longer, and let a flamer to pour the truth on you, on a way I quoted, or to give you some useful advises, along the truth? Believe me you don't want to know what's like when a flamer "bring you down".

[.:Shaymin:.]

You like to bring people down dont ya Verebazs2. These cards aren't that bad but' date=' you do need an OCG fix[hr']

7.5/10

 

Ya no one really carez

 

I am the one who brings people down sometimes

[TripleH_13]

Predator King Text: "this monster cannot be destroyed in the fight and remains from any effects of Spell, Trap and Monstercards untouched. once in each of your Standby phases you are able to do up to 2 monsters as a special summoned on your side of the field Swear. if all monsters of your Enemy are a position in defence, this monster can attack the life points of your Enemy directly."

and thanks for the tips

[Verebazs2]

Predator King OCG fix: "This monster cannot be destroyed by Battle. This card cannot be selected as a target for the effects of Spell, Trap and Effect monster cards. During each of your Standby Phases you may Special Summon up to 2 monsters to your side of the field. If your Opponent controls only defence position monster cards, this card can attack his/her Lifepoints directly."

Terribly OP, and one sided, this is 1/10 sorry.

You don't have to post effects and new cards in a new reply, just click on the edit button at the low right corner of the thread.

[TripleH_13]

THX!