Andx Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 I did make that error. I've done that a few times seeing as it was an RP originally. Fan-fic, not RP. Got it.Sure I can post the info for everyone.[spoiler=Hayate's original rough idea.]In a state of chaos the world as we know it is coming close to a brink of destruction. With the age of war all ready upon us the pirate nations have united to form a single great threat to the marines. Many of the battles up until this point where suspected as a catalyst for many countries choosing to aid the pirates in their historic adventures, but to the pirates the cost of a few of their own lives compared with the horrific events of the past where much more easy to deal with. If the people who lived in this world new the truth about the events that happened following the execution of Monkey D. Luffy the people of this world could very well be used as pawns once again for the former glorious Marine Headquarters. Even this newly formed crew of Pirates have a low percentage of stopping the Marine Headquarters from regaining their former glory. [spoiler=30-25 years prior to the RP]-Execution of Monkey D. Luffy. Mystery surrounds the actual events as to how he was captured or executed as well as whether or not he found One Piece. Whereabouts of his crew are unknown but they've never resurfaced so it's assumed they don't do much anymore. -Shortly after official news of the execution is given the Marines more boldly assault the major pirate crews with morale previously unknown. Many crews were annihilated. Many of the stronger crews took Warlord positions simple to avoid destruction. -Roughly one year after the execution. The Marines terminate the position of Pirate Warlord, making any and all pirates mortal enemies to the government. All Pirate Warlords were killed in one attack by the three admirals. All of the Warlords were gathered together in one room and then told of the announcement. They tried to get away but were swiftly killed. This day became known as the (Insert cool name here) From then on the Marines showed no mercy to any pirate and punishments became even less humane. The human slave market crashes due to most pirates of any bounty being executed as opposed to enslaved. -Pirate activity plummeted immensely. Many were too afraid to even begin a pirate adventure as many rookies were killed before they even really got going. Towns saw increased Marine activity and many who were even suspected of piracy were put to death. This search for "probable pirates" became known as (Again, insert name here later.). [spoiler=25 to 18 years before the RP.]-During this time the world experiences an unheard of "era of peace" at least according to the government. Many legends of piracy were forgotten and for years the only ships seen on the sea were Marine ships or merchant ships which were often accompanied by one or two Marine ships. Due to World Government propaganda many people began to accept the times as the amazing era of peace the government made it out to be. -Roughly 18 years ago one brave man set out on a quest, as a pirate. Though he never did anything illegal he flew the Jolly Roger proudly and assembled a large crew. Very promptly the government put him to death. This sparked great outrage and controversy. The people began questioning things. Sure it was wrong to fly the Jolly Roger but he never did anything. Yet the Marines killed him anyway. Could the people trust the government? [spoiler=18 to 8 years before the RP.]-In response the Marines backed off. They realized they had been far too harsh on the people for too long. They issued an official apology over the man's death and towns saw greatly reduced Marine numbers. The Marines knew if they continued to pressure the people how they had been that they would have a wide-scale revolt on hand. -Though the government apologized this did not appease a great number of people. A massive piracy movement began about 12 years ago. Many didn't even outright attack the government. Just the idea of pirating again was amazing to many. The old legends of Gold Roger and Monkey D. Luffy surfaced and became common knowledge again. -8 years ago, the Marines showed they would quickly crack down on the pirates again. The major crews in the Grand Line were quickly attacked and decimated but they were not completely wiped out. The few survivors left but swore their revenge on the government. [spoiler=8 years ago to current time.]-Seven years ago, Marine Commander Sengoku finally died of extremely advanced age. All expected successors died mysteriously but the government never released official information. A young man took to the helm at this moment. (Insert Hayate's character's name) took over and quickly began a truly iron-fisted rule. -A tight crackdown resurfaced but this time the people protested greatly. If the conflict was not resolved the government would have a global riot on their hands. The government quickly set up several major pirates to make them look like awful murders who killed innocents. As such, their executions appeased many. -A year ago the many pirates sharing this feeling began something unheard of. A massive alliance. They realized the only way to get to the government was a coordinated massive assault. As such the historic (Insert Name) Treaty was made to oppose the Marines. So there it is guys. Any name ideas? Any additional plot ideas? Speak your minds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 RP seems good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Here are some things i thought we could use for the names. Please discuss and tell me your opinions and if you have a any substitutions. Furthermore Andx we should decide here on who should lead both sides between you and I. Maybe a vote could work out or we can just choose it's up to you. Names: 1: Annihilation of the Oligarchy2: Apparent Apprehension 3: Unknown as I haven't figured out everything about him.4: I think instead of a Treaty we should call it an alliance. Also we should set fourth a "Pirate Code" that would list the treaty arrangements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Names: 1: Annihilation of the Oligarchy2: Apparent Apprehension 3: Unknown as I haven't figured out everything about him.4: I think instead of a Treaty we should call it an alliance. Also we should set fourth a "Pirate Code" that would list the treaty arrangements. 1. Sounds good. Unless something better comes up that's the name.2. Not sure. It's cool but I'm not sure it fits. But until something else comes up that will stick.3. Okay then.4. That works. Now what to call it..... Here are some things i thought we could use for the names. Please discuss and tell me your opinions and if you have a any substitutions. Furthermore Andx we should decide here on who should lead both sides between you and I. Maybe a vote could work out or we can just choose it's up to you. I thought you and I were going to play the Marines and everyone else be the heros. Due to the alliance there could be multiple captains in the group. But if you want yourself or me on the good side I'm okay with it, I'll still make the high up Marine character I was planning regardless. I'm okay with leading either side so whatever side you'd like to lead is yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Names: 1: Annihilation of the Oligarchy2: Apparent Apprehension 3: Unknown as I haven't figured out everything about him.4: I think instead of a Treaty we should call it an alliance. Also we should set fourth a "Pirate Code" that would list the treaty arrangements. 1. Sounds good. Unless something better comes up that's the name.2. Not sure. It's cool but I'm not sure it fits. But until something else comes up that will stick.3. Okay then.4. That works. Now what to call it..... Here are some things i thought we could use for the names. Please discuss and tell me your opinions and if you have a any substitutions. Furthermore Andx we should decide here on who should lead both sides between you and I. Maybe a vote could work out or we can just choose it's up to you. I thought you and I were going to play the Marines and everyone else be the heros. Due to the alliance there could be multiple captains in the group. But if you want yourself or me on the good side I'm okay with it' date=' I'll still make the high up Marine character I was planning regardless. I'm okay with leading either side so whatever side you'd like to lead is yours.[/quote'] Well the original plan was for us to be pirates and for s to run the marines as well. My thought was one of us could be the Main Captain of the pirates while the other one was a crew member and the one who is a crew mate can be the head of the marines while the second runs the lesser ranks of the marines. So our main character are pirates and we work with the other pirate's, while we occasionally take control of certain marine characters when times call for it. If you remember I suggested we had some type of a sub plot other then just the war that the pirates where doing while we weren't directly battling the marines. Something like finding out what happened to Luffy's crew or something from the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Well the original plan was for us to be pirates and for s to run the marines as well. My thought was one of us could be the Main Captain of the pirates while the other one was a crew member and the one who is a crew mate can be the head of the marines while the second runs the lesser ranks of the marines. So our main character are pirates and we work with the other pirate's' date=' while we occasionally take control of certain marine characters when times call for it. If you remember I suggested we had some type of a sub plot other then just the war that the pirates where doing while we weren't directly battling the marines. Something like finding out what happened to Luffy's crew or something from the past.[/quote'] Okay that makes more sense. I can take charge of the good guy side as the Marine character I had in mind was never meant to be in charge. By the way, what all do you want in the app? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Well thats what I was thinking from the start but wanted to hear what you thought before I gave my opinion on the matter of how we where going to do things between the government and Pirates. I'm still at a loss of a name for the pirate code though so if you think of anything before I let me know and I will do the same. Lets just use your app from RPU if you want otherwise not much will change. I know I don't want all the same fruits from the anime/manga but I don't want to limit everything as somethings can have different types of attacks that differ from how they where used in the manga/anime. I'm gonna head to bed for now I will check back tomorrow and I will try updating the application code then. For the government I have thought of a app yet so just think of the basics and I'll do that tomorrow as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 I'm still thinking of something for the alliance/code as well. Okay that works for the app. Just pm the Marine app, or post it here if you really want, when you finish it if you don't mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Ok and I sure will post the marine app when I get to it. Currently I'm discussing my app with Umbra via PM just in case he reopens to accept new members, which at this point is highly likely considering Taion isn't doing to good and it just started. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Ok and I sure will post the marine app when I get to it. Currently I'm discussing my app with Umbra via PM just in case he reopens to accept new members' date=' which at this point is highly likely considering Taion isn't doing to good and it just started.[/quote'] Thanks. I've had an idea for my Marine character for a few days now and wouldn't mind getting some work done on it. Though I will need to know your character before I can do the bio for mine. Yeah I've seen in Umbra's RP. I really hope Umbra kicks him out. By the way, did you notice I used the shikai and resurrecion from the character I never got to use in your RP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Yeah I noticed, and atm it seems I wont be getting in even if he reopens it as he says my gravity abilities have a lot of wrong Physics in it. So unless he gives me a break and allows me to take out the gravity completely then I'm pretty much screwed out of joining. I'll crack down on the marine app right now and send it when it's done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Yeah I noticed' date=' and atm it seems I wont be getting in even if he reopens it as he says my gravity abilities have a lot of wrong Physics in it. So unless he gives me a break and allows me to take out the gravity completely then I'm pretty much screwed out of joining. I'll crack down on the marine app right now and send it when it's done.[/quote'] Since when did physics matter in Bleach? I mean people are regularly skidding on air. Whatever, that sucks though. I also feel sort of bad for Tempest as I sort of one-upped him by posting my app right after him. Regardless it looks interesting. Oh, if it helps, I'm sure you'll be able to get into Tempest's RP when it's finished Primal. Thanks. I'll be waiting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Yeah I know, further more he mentioned my appearance was plain and didn't give him a good description of how my character looks. I had to lol when he mentioned that because Taion only has like two sentences for a description compared to my stats and paragraph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Yeah I know' date=' further more he mentioned my appearance was plain and didn't give him a good description of how my character looks. I had to lol when he mentioned that because Taion only has like two sentences for a description compared to my stats and paragraph.[/quote'] I'm still wondering why Umbra accepted him in the first place. I'd ask but the thing is I don't think Umbra would appreciate it too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 OK so we now have the marine apps almost a 100% complete, maybe we should post up the RP while we work on our Pirate apps. That way it gives us time to get some members and make our own apps. Oh wait we still haven't made positive decisions for the names we where discussing earlier. Anyone else from the club have an opinion on this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 I think a PM to the club members might be in order to get any activity going again. Just a note on my Marine app, I'm making very slight tweaks so I'll have to give you the completely finished app when you're ready to post the RP.Now then, to get on the Pirate app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 What are you guys talking about? It sounds interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 What are you guys talking about? It sounds interesting. The One Piece RP we have in the works. I can send you the info we have so far if you'd like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Final_Ryeden~ Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 SN: ~Ryeden_Ogata~Specialty:I can make sigs, um one piece episode links and stuff, entertainment lolz Favorite One Piece Character: Ace and Luffy, Ace is just awesome, his attitude and everything. Luffy, what could i not say about luffy.Least Favorite One Piece Character: I like them allMore Info: Andx i'm sorry and uh i want to start over i did with shadow so give me another chance and i'm not asking for u to join my club or anything again just let's be friends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted April 24, 2010 Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 Come on people, let's see some activity. I may just have to send that PM to the members.--------[spoiler=[i]Chapter 7[/i] What a Misunderstanding! John Duels Emanuel!]It had been four months since Emanuel and Frozox had left the Autumn island. A lot had happened. Emanuel thought he had avoided dying by using his fox form so the next day he of course reverted to his human form. Then he fell ill again. Before the week was over Emanuel realized that he could only be remotely healthy in his full fox form. Neither her or Frozox understood was wrong. So for the last four months Emanuel had really only spent about two to three hours in his human form. Even in his fox form Emanuel had days where he could barely move without tiring himself out. In this time Emanuel and Frozox had fought against about three other Marine establishments that were oppressing the people of the East Blue. Emanuel had finally decided on a name for the crew and had Frozox formally announce it to the last Marine captain they fought. The result, the two New Dawn pirates were both given bounties. Of course, the Marines assumed Frozox, the human, was the captain and they didn't know Emanuel's name. "Black-Frost Frozox, Captain of the New Dawn Pirates" and "The New Dawn Kyuubi" were both given bounties of twenty million berries. The two were off to another island. It seemed all they had been doing was defeating Marines. The wanted posters had only just reached their hands."Hey! Why are you suddenly the Captain?!" Emanuel said at the sight of the poster. Frozox chuckled."Let's see. The Marines see a man who uses the very dangerous Black Ice, and a blue fox with nine tails that never talks in front of anyone but his friend. And you're saying they should assume the fox is the captain?" Frozox said jokingly."..... Still." Emanuel said."Hey, they realize they shouldn't mess with you. Notice our bounties are identical?" Frozox pointed out."Yeah I guess." Emanuel said. He then proceed to scratch the back of his head with one of his hind legs."Doesn't that worry you?" Frozox said."What?" Emanuel said."You act like a real fox pretty well. In fact, too well sometimes." Frozox said."Act? I don't feel like I'm acting. In fact it feels pretty natural." Emanuel said. A look came on Frozox's face that sort of said 'Wow...'."You do realize that's worse than I feared don't you?" Frozox said."Is there something wrong with the fact that I live as a fox for a few months and comfortable move like one?" Emanuel said."So it doesn't bother you that you're forgetting what it's like to be human?" Frozox said."No." Emanuel responded. At that the two laughed. The small boat landed at the next island. The two stepped off the boat and walked into the peaceful village. Before long they, or rather Frozox, gathered that the Marines were not present in this village. It was a sort of relief to the two. Unknown to Emanuel and Frozox, and even to himself, John Noir arrived in the same town about an hour after the New Dawn Pirates."Four months of searching and nothing so far. Perhaps here?" John thought. Most would have given up on the search after the first week. Not John. He didn't so easily go back on things he set his mind to. While others surrendered John would push on. Frozox and Emanuel had gotten some food in a local restaurant."Well I should go check on Krook. I don't expect anything has happened on an island like this. I should be back soon. Do your best to not scare the towns people." Frozox said."Hey, I like think I give off more of a 'Oh how cute!' vibe rather than a scary one." Emanuel said."Right, you keep telling yourself that." Frozox said. He took his leave and while the people might have objected to the large fox in the room, they recognized him as part of the New Dawn Crew from the new wanted posters. They had a good respect for the pirates who had only removed oppressive Marines from islands. John however had yet to receive these posters. As Frozox headed back to the ship John was headed into the center of town. Deep in reading as he walked, John didn't get a direct look at Frozox. As the two passed John didn't respond at first. Then it clicked."Was that?" he thought as he turned around. However Frozox had already sped off to the ship. "That had to be him!" John thought. John walked back to the shore where the various boats were docked. He saw Frozox step into his small vessel. John warped to the top of a nearby tree. He didn't feel the need to talk to Frozox while he was doing something. Instead he would wait for him to come back into town. Staying in the restaurant had quickly bored Emanuel so he left. In the four months he'd quickly gotten used to the various odd looks the people gave a man-sized fox. A little girl ran up to him and tried to pet him. Her mother quickly ran up and grabbed her away."No! Leave the animal alone! It might hurt you!" she said with a concerned look."I'm pretty sure I'd know whether or not I'd hurt someone." Emanuel muttered. The mother looked at him with a sort of disbelieving look on her face. She shrugged it off. The fox couldn't possibly have talked. Emanuel decided to head back to the ship just to see what Frozox was up to. Frozox had gone inside the small little cabin area on the ship that held the small kitchen. John was keeping a good watch for the time that Frozox came out. To his great astonishment John saw a large blue fox walk up to the shore. "What the heck is that? Some pet of someone living here?" John thought at the sight. The fox then began to step onto Frozox's boat."Is that thing after him? I can't have that!" he thought. At this he drew his rifle and fired a shot for the fox's back left leg as a warning to stay away. To his greater amazement the fox not only responded but disappeared. The bullet missed and the fox was no where to be seen."What? Where is it?" he said. As he looked the fox was now on the same tree limb as he was."How did it get up here?! What exactly did I just aggravate?" he thought as he quickly jumped off the tree to the floor below. The fox quickly followed."I don't know what you are but if you fight me you're going to die here!" he yelled. He drew his sword, a very strange weapon. It acted like a whip when in use. John swung the blade and it curved outward at Emanuel."Tekkai!" Emanuel thought. At this his body became about as hard as steel. The blade collide and wrapped around Emanuel's neck. However it made no cuts. "Just how much do I have to do to hurt this thing?!" John thought at the sight of his ineffective sword. The fox then did something odd. The nine tails behind it all flexed. The fox then swung them all inward and the strangest things appeared in the air. Nine thin, pale blue, waves fired off in John's direction. In order to avoid it John had to warp. He got away, the sword disappearing from Emanuel's neck as well, but one of the blades grazed his shoulder. John reappeared about twenty feet away. The cut bothered him, not because he was hurt but because of how the fox had inflicted it. "It seems I'll have to try harder to fight this thing." John thought. He warped closer to the fox, this time only about eight feet away. He swung the sword out again, Emanuel jumped up a few good feet into the air to avoid it but it never passed where it should have. John and the blade had disappeared. The fox looked around as if searching for him. John reappeared above it and the sword finished its arc, leave a six inch long cut on the fox's back. John warped back to the ground and saw the fox had already gotten back into position. Then the strangest thing happened. The tips of the fox's tail ignited into blue flames."What?!" John said. The nine tails flexed straight behind the fox, the nine flames combining. A large sphere of blue fire was steadily forming behind the fox. Just as the fox seemed ready to attack the door to the cabin Frozox had entered opened."Stop this!" Frozox said."What? Don't talk to me! This guy's the nut who just attacked me out of no where!" the fox said.".... WHAT!!!" John said. The fox had just spoken. Frozox and Emanuel then told John what was going on, including Emanuel's illness. Emanuel briefly reverted back to his human form to prove what they were saying was true. Right after he took his fox form on again. John in turn then described why he had attacked Emanuel and also told them how he'd been looking for them."So I'd like to join your crew, if you'd have me." John said after recounting his story."Sure, you said you can cook? Well you're tough and I'm tired of eating plain stuff. You're in!" Emanuel said afterwards. John was happy to know he had been allowed in. Of course he'd never show it outwardly. The crew then set off, this time with two small ships as John had his own. [spoiler=[i]Chapter 7 to 8 Transition[/i] Traveling on the Ocean. New Friends Make it More Exciting! (I'm still not sure why I did this when I wrote it. Well here it is however pointless.]The group had been traveling for a month since John joining the crew and Emanuel and Frozox were both loving it. The food he could make with their seemingly simple ingredients was simply amazing. John did like his time with the crew, particularly the most recent ousting of oppressive Marines. Though all three were getting on talkative terms John favored speaking with Emanuel. Of course, John didn't exactly do the most talking. There was something about Emanuel that was intriguing. Everything seemed simple to him but he wasn't a fool. Frozox and John might have become better friends if weren't for the fact that neither of them cared for too much talking. Emanuel had been concerned as of late. He'd been traveling for five months, turning nineteen in that time, but he still hardly knew how to go about achieving his goal. A goal that he soon learned John shared. Perhaps that had helped them become friends. Regardless, Emanuel was truthfully just wandering aimlessly defeating some Marines along the way. Frozox and John didn't seem particularly concerned though. Emanuel had been on John's boat for the past hour or so simply talking. Emanuel had raised his concern about not knowing where to go."So you do worry about things sometimes. I was wondering if anything could get to you. If I were you I wouldn't worry about it." John said."If you were me you'd have other things to worry about." Emanuel said."True, I don't think I could stand the fleas." John said with a grin on his face."Very funny." Emanuel said. His tails stopped swaying with the breeze for a bit."I wouldn't worry because you've just started. If things are confused now then you just have to wait. Time clears most issues. Before long you'll see what needs to be done." John said."You don't say." Emanuel said."All we have to do is continue what we're doing." John said."That simple?" Emanuel said."I thought you of all people would make it that easy." John replied."Right, I generally would. Thanks." Emanuel said. The journey continued on with various conversations and very little to do. Emanuel put his concern aside for the time being. They would be approaching an island the next morning. Though they knew nothing about it, this island was home to a future crew member. Musica Island was at the horizon. [spoiler=[i]Chapter 8[/i] What's Wrong With the Island of Music? The Blues Dominates the Town.]"Cool! We actually set a course and got there!" Emanuel said at the sight of Musica Island."You do know that's how a ship normally functions right?" John said. The idea that he'd missed people who were simply wandering for four months had an oddly annoying effect on him."Well it's not that we don't know how to set courses, it's just that we usually end up off track by a good mile or so." Frozox said calmly."Yeah, the fact that we're right in line with the port is something else!" Emanuel said excitedly. It clearly had him excited as all of his tails weren't just swaying, but wagging quickly."Incredible." John thought. Musica Island was a typical spring island. There was a good number of trees and a few lakes. Of course the trees were much more concentrated in areas where cities hadn't been built. Now of course Musica Island stood out with one fantastic feature that couldn't be found anywhere else. A very unique structure, a three hundred foot tall treble cleft stood from the capital city Allegro con Fuoco. This black painted, steel structure stood as a symbol of the island's dedication to music. Truly Allegro con Fuoco was the music capital of the East Blue. Any musician's dream would be to visit the town at least once. In truth Emanuel had not just merely decided to come visit this island. He had a reason to come. He'd once heard that one of the Straw Hat pirates had been a musician who after the crew had disbanded had visited that island a few times. Emanuel's plan was relatively simple. The Straw Hats knew about the Blank Century, or rather Emanuel hoped they did. He figured that if he could find one of the crew members and get the information on it that he would then be able to form a plan on how to go about defeating the World Government. All Emanuel could hope for was info on the location of one of the crew members. The two small boats, that had been tied together with a ten foot rope so as not to get separated, pulled into the harbor of Adagio city, the main port town of the island. Allegro con fuoco, where Emanuel figured he would find the best info, was roughly an hour away from Adagio on foot. Adagio itself however would most likely be the superior town to resupply at. As they stepped off the boat Emanuel reminded them that they had to resupply but also needed to get to the capital city."Well I can resupply, you guys can get off to the capital in the mean time. I'll meet you there later." Frozox said. All three agreed so Emanuel and John headed off to find the path to Allegro con Fuoco. As they moved through the town the typical reactions to the large fox were present yet something else was there. It seemed almost like some people hadn't noticed him; like they had something else consuming their mind. However only John really took notice of it, and even then he couldn't place it. It didn't take all that long to get through Adagio; it was more of a port than a full on city. After a few minutes of walking the two were at the northern edge of Adagio, at the large paved road leading to Allegro con Fuoco. No townspeople could be seen which was odd considering what the path was."Looks like we have a good bit of walking to do." Emanuel said. He had read a sign that stated Allegro con Fuoco was about an hour away."That's of course only if walking is your only option." John said. He lightly gripped Emanuel's right most tail and in the blink of an eye the two were a good distance away from the port, in fact it was only a dot now. Another sign stated that Allegro con Fuoco was only thirty minutes away now. "Wow! I completely forgot you could do that!" Emanuel said. He'd seen John warp during their fight and John had described the devil fruit allowing him to do so but since he hadn't used it for a good bit of time Emanuel had forgotten. John's breath had become heavy which was odd to Emanuel."John, what's wrong?" Emanuel asked."Nothing... just a bit tired from the trip. Warping myself is one thing, but taking others takes it out of me." John answered."Well looks like we only have a half-hour of walking to do now, let's be on our way." Emanuel said. Back in Adagio Frozox had first decided to head into a local bar. The store was very close and Frozox needed something to drink. As he entered a man with very pale blond hair walked past him screaming."I give up on you depressed people! I've never been so bored among so many girls. The capital had better be better than this!" he yelled. As he walked out he nearly fell over so it seemed quite obvious that he was drunk. He claimed he would be headed to the capital yet made no motion in the correct direction. Frozox ignored him and went inside. As he entered and sat down at the bar, Frozox took immediate notice of the fact that the usual energy and chaos of taverns was completely missing. No one seemed happy, even fewer were actually drinking or eating anything. Everyone looked down and had a very depressed look about them. And though a very strange man had just been yelling at them, they weren't talking about it, or anything else for that moment. The silence was one Frozox had seldom ever experienced and he had certainly never expected it to appear in a tavern. The bartender approached and Frozox thought to ask him what was going on."Excuse me sir but what exactly-""Don't ask. Don't talk about it. If you don't know about it than don't try to find out. Now if you're not going to order kindly leave." the bartender said as he had cut Frozox off."... No I think I'll be going." Frozox said. At that he left the tavern thinking about what had happened. Thirty minutes had passed and Emanuel and John were progressing well. They had had light conversation and were just about to the city. As they approached the large treble cleft seemed even more massive. The town seemed like one that would not only be teeming with activity, but music and happiness as well. And yet as the two entered they saw none of this. Hardly anyone was about and various platforms that were clearly for performers were empty."Something doesn't seem right here." Emanuel said."I see what you mean, I'd expected more... activity." John said. As they entered they saw someone being restrained by two or three other men. The man being restrained was holding a violin."Let me go! I can't take it anymore! I have to play! I have to play, just once!" the man screamed."You know you can't! Now come back inside!" one of the others yelled back."No! I'd rather die than never play again!" the man yelled. With that he broke free and ran onto one of the performance platforms. The others sort of surrendered as if there was nothing else they could do. The man began playing a beautiful piece and seemed truly ecstatic."Finally. It's been so long. How I've missed you sweet music." the man said. His friends just looked straight down on the verge of tears. Out of nowhere there was a large bang and the man on stage fell over. Blood was surging from his neck. A few people in very strange looking garments came and took the deceased man away. One of them was holding a rifle that had looked like it had just fired. Clearly that person had just murdered the man. John and Emanuel were stunned. A person had just been murdered in front of them, for playing music no less."What... What is this!" Emanuel said in shock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 No longer nessesary Andx.I read the chapters..........good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 SN: ~Ryeden_Ogata~Specialty:I can make sigs' date=' um one piece episode links and stuff, entertainment lolz Favorite One Piece Character: Ace and Luffy, Ace is just awesome, his attitude and everything. Luffy, what could i not say about luffy.Least Favorite One Piece Character: I like them allMore Info: Andx i'm sorry and uh i want to start over i did with shadow so give me another chance and i'm not asking for u to join my club or anything again just let's be friends[/quote'] OK to the first order of business, Ryeden_Ogata you have been denied as an applicant here in the club if you wish to discuss the reason please PM me. Second as said before on RPU Andx great job on the chapters, I love the story it never gets old when I re-read it. Third, the Roleplay we have been working on is soon to be posted for everyone to join. But before we can fully open up the thread theirs are a few things we need to figure out refer to the quoted posts below on what the current topic about the roleplay is we need your help in the names and any other suggestions you think are or could be necessary. I did make that error. I've done that a few times seeing as it was an RP originally. Fan-fic' date=' not RP. Got it.Sure I can post the info for everyone.[spoiler=Hayate's original rough idea.']In a state of chaos the world as we know it is coming close to a brink of destruction. With the age of war all ready upon us the pirate nations have united to form a single great threat to the marines. Many of the battles up until this point where suspected as a catalyst for many countries choosing to aid the pirates in their historic adventures, but to the pirates the cost of a few of their own lives compared with the horrific events of the past where much more easy to deal with. If the people who lived in this world new the truth about the events that happened following the execution of Monkey D. Luffy the people of this world could very well be used as pawns once again for the former glorious Marine Headquarters. Even this newly formed crew of Pirates have a low percentage of stopping the Marine Headquarters from regaining their former glory. [spoiler=30-25 years prior to the RP]-Execution of Monkey D. Luffy. Mystery surrounds the actual events as to how he was captured or executed as well as whether or not he found One Piece. Whereabouts of his crew are unknown but they've never resurfaced so it's assumed they don't do much anymore. -Shortly after official news of the execution is given the Marines more boldly assault the major pirate crews with morale previously unknown. Many crews were annihilated. Many of the stronger crews took Warlord positions simple to avoid destruction. -Roughly one year after the execution. The Marines terminate the position of Pirate Warlord, making any and all pirates mortal enemies to the government. All Pirate Warlords were killed in one attack by the three admirals. All of the Warlords were gathered together in one room and then told of the announcement. They tried to get away but were swiftly killed. This day became known as the (Insert cool name here) From then on the Marines showed no mercy to any pirate and punishments became even less humane. The human slave market crashes due to most pirates of any bounty being executed as opposed to enslaved. -Pirate activity plummeted immensely. Many were too afraid to even begin a pirate adventure as many rookies were killed before they even really got going. Towns saw increased Marine activity and many who were even suspected of piracy were put to death. This search for "probable pirates" became known as (Again, insert name here later.). [spoiler=25 to 18 years before the RP.]-During this time the world experiences an unheard of "era of peace" at least according to the government. Many legends of piracy were forgotten and for years the only ships seen on the sea were Marine ships or merchant ships which were often accompanied by one or two Marine ships. Due to World Government propaganda many people began to accept the times as the amazing era of peace the government made it out to be. -Roughly 18 years ago one brave man set out on a quest, as a pirate. Though he never did anything illegal he flew the Jolly Roger proudly and assembled a large crew. Very promptly the government put him to death. This sparked great outrage and controversy. The people began questioning things. Sure it was wrong to fly the Jolly Roger but he never did anything. Yet the Marines killed him anyway. Could the people trust the government? [spoiler=18 to 8 years before the RP.]-In response the Marines backed off. They realized they had been far too harsh on the people for too long. They issued an official apology over the man's death and towns saw greatly reduced Marine numbers. The Marines knew if they continued to pressure the people how they had been that they would have a wide-scale revolt on hand. -Though the government apologized this did not appease a great number of people. A massive piracy movement began about 12 years ago. Many didn't even outright attack the government. Just the idea of pirating again was amazing to many. The old legends of Gold Roger and Monkey D. Luffy surfaced and became common knowledge again. -8 years ago, the Marines showed they would quickly crack down on the pirates again. The major crews in the Grand Line were quickly attacked and decimated but they were not completely wiped out. The few survivors left but swore their revenge on the government. [spoiler=8 years ago to current time.]-Seven years ago, Marine Commander Sengoku finally died of extremely advanced age. All expected successors died mysteriously but the government never released official information. A young man took to the helm at this moment. (Insert Hayate's character's name) took over and quickly began a truly iron-fisted rule. -A tight crackdown resurfaced but this time the people protested greatly. If the conflict was not resolved the government would have a global riot on their hands. The government quickly set up several major pirates to make them look like awful murders who killed innocents. As such, their executions appeased many. -A year ago the many pirates sharing this feeling began something unheard of. A massive alliance. They realized the only way to get to the government was a coordinated massive assault. As such the historic (Insert Name) Treaty was made to oppose the Marines. So there it is guys. Any name ideas? Any additional plot ideas? Speak your minds. Here are some things i thought we could use for the names. Please discuss and tell me your opinions and if you have a any substitutions. Furthermore Andx we should decide here on who should lead both sides between you and I. Maybe a vote could work out or we can just choose it's up to you. Names: 1: Annihilation of the Oligarchy2: Apparent Apprehension 3: Unknown as I haven't figured out everything about him.4: I think instead of a Treaty we should call it an alliance. Also we should set fourth a "Pirate Code" that would list the treaty arrangements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 I'm not the best person to ask about RP's.......so I don't have much to say on this, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted April 26, 2010 Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 hey guys, Sorry i've been away. School and all that. I've read your story Andx. Really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted April 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2010 DeathGhost do you RP? If not that fine I was just curious. Anyway it doesn't really matter it still affects everyone in the club in some way. Especially since this can and most likely will be a big topic within this thread. Even if you don't RP throwing ideas out can always help us out and will show that your active and willing to help others. In return you along with everyone else who participates in these activities either directly or indirectly can gain experience and points that could be used as a way to gain a new Rank within the club. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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