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[battleonfan123]

 

When a level 4 or higher Warrior-Type or Spellcaster-Type is summoned to the field, the summoned monster gains 500 ATK and DEF points for the remainder of the duel and this card gains 500 ATK and loses 500 DEF,this card costs 1500 life points to attack,if you cannot pay this card is destroyed and you get back how many life points you spent divided by 50.

 

rate him ^_^

[A.Prime]

I can't see the effect!

[Teh ZWOOTS]

I can't see the effect!

 

I can, easily, actually.

OCG errors

Grammar errors

Bad picture, pictures without backgrounds fail

Copy and past the effect below the card, some people can't read long effects off the card

4/10

[battleonfan123]

can you point out the errors i would very much like to fix them and i will post the lore below the card as well.

[MibeR]

OCG FIX:

When a level 4 or higher Warrior-Type or Spellcaster-Type ,monster(s) is Summoned to the field, that monster monster gains 500 ATK and DEF points

 

,if you cannot destroy this card

[A.Prime]

When a Level 4 or higher Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monster(s) is Summoned to the field, that monster monster gains 500 ATK and DEF.

 

Now it's ok!

[battleonfan123]

NEW PIC and fixed OCG so what rate would i get now?

[A.Prime]

I think now it's better....the bold parts are those I fixed...

the others with [?] and the Italics are those I don't know how to to fixed..

 

When a Level 4 or higher Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monster is Summoned to the field, the Summoned monster gains 500 ATK and DEF for the remainder of the duel and this card gains 500 ATK and loses 500 DEF. [?]This card costs 1500 Life Points to attack,if you cannot pay, this card is destroyed and you get back the Life Points you lost of this card's effect [?]divided by 50.

[battleonfan123]

Thank you i will edit it now!